Reviews For Moment of Clarity
Reviewer: Chocolate butterbeer
Date: 04/03/13 18:13
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

That was really good! ginny seemed really in character. It's nice to see Ron and Ginny talk you don't really see it that much

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/10/11 18:13
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

i absolutely loved this !!!!

Reviewer: My Wicked Quill
Date: 09/20/09 21:36
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

yes i deffinetly thought about this scene after reading HPB, unfair isnt it? how jk rowling kept so much to herself, like the walk Harry and Ginny took after they kissed. but i love your logic, if Ginny did go and talk to hermione after the hospital visit, then that would cause her to watch harry more carefully, which she did. and then i thought the blazing look ginny gave harry before they kissed was about how excited and proud she was for winning the game, but what you said, that maybe it was because ginny knew wat harry was feeling...and that would mean she was ready for the kiss...and when we look back, there wasnt a look of shock or surprise on her face...but one of happiness...hmm u might be onto something here. great job!!!!

Reviewer: peacesmilepotter
Date: 09/19/09 15:22
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

awwww!!!!!! how cute! i thought you captured Ginny perfectly!!!

Reviewer: Kiryn
Date: 05/27/08 4:41
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

It's McLaggen, not McClaggen. And I though Harry got hit by the bludger, not the bat. Anyway, great story! You should consider doing the rest of the story in Ginny's perspective. :)

Reviewer: loveismagicharry
Date: 10/01/07 16:34
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

That was brillaint!You write amazing stories!I loved it!!!!!

Reviewer: taytay
Date: 08/30/07 23:15
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

oh how cute!

Reviewer: Phoenixis
Date: 03/10/07 0:01
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

Another brilliant HBP missing moments. I'm never going to get tired of reading your stories or one-shots. They really are brilliant.

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 02/03/07 16:48
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

This was great. Fantastic job!

Reviewer: Chaser921
Date: 01/20/07 0:59
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

Wonderful, wonderful! Very well written, and spot-on characterization, esp. with Ginny. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff!

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 01/01/07 15:55
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

That was really cute, in a strange way.

Reviewer: Gred_and_Forges_girl
Date: 09/15/06 20:15
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

Brilliant. I've always wondered what really happened in the hospital wing with the unconsicous Harry, you clear it up perfectly. I loved the little "Feel better, Harry." and the kiss on the forehead. that was so cute. I'me sure Ginny did talk to Hermione about it, and probably Hermione knew, they all probably knew about Harry's feelings towards Ginny even before Harry himself knew. That was really well done and I think you should keep doing more "missing moments" but not only from HBP. From the other books, as well. Though you should write them after you finish the Seventh Horcrux, and not let anything hamper that story!

I think you're a brilliant writer, keep up the good work!

Reviewer: MagicalMaddie331
Date: 08/10/06 14:08
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

Nice story. It gave a lot of perspective into Ginny's mind, and I really enjoyed it. Great job!!

Reviewer: Dr Pepper
Date: 07/12/06 10:57
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

another one of yours to my favorites, and im expecting more! i love your stories and this one was great! i love how ron made ginny happy when she first walked in! soo cute! keep writing

Reviewer: jkrofan
Date: 06/28/06 23:57
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

Hi there. This was a really well done story. I think you have really captured Ginny's spirit with this little one shot. It was funny, cute, and sweet, but not overly dramatic or too cutsie. I wonder about Ginny not meaning for Harry and Ron to find her with Dean, though. I kind of almost think that she planned it consciously or subconsciously accidentally on purpose-like. (Does that make any sense?) It was, after all, Ron and Harry's "usual shortcut up to Gryffindor Tower" and surely Ginny would have known this. She might wanted to have given Harry a little insight into what he was missing out on. Great story. I'm also currently reading your Seventh Horucrux story which is extremely good as well.

Reviewer: brenpotterfans
Date: 05/28/06 11:06
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

I just love reading these missing moments. I think they are so tender and sweet.Please keep up the great work!!

Reviewer: brenpotterfans
Date: 05/28/06 11:06
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

I just love reading these missing moments. I think they are so tender and sweet.Please keep up the great work!!

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 03/24/06 0:14
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

That really was fantastic. I like the subtlety of the feelings Ginny expresses, like she is afraid to admit that she wants to see Harry as much as she wants to visit her brother. It is also different then the normal Harry/Ginny story. This very well could have been what happened during that visit. And your portrayal of the characters are second to none. Great story!!

Reviewer: Dhora
Date: 03/13/06 14:26
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

I looooove this story.... It's so natural and nooo sickening cliche's about Ginny being head over heals in love with Harry and can't live without him...this could be exactly what happened...and the characters are just ....ah well...super...!! Keep going...

Reviewer: Narwen3
Date: 02/14/06 17:50
Chapter: Moment of Clarity

I wish I could pick out every little thing I loved about this and explain into great depth why, but there simply isn't time. I have to go to bed in a few hours! ;) You've done a brilliant job capturing the funny bits and I just couldn't keep from laughing. My favorite part was undoubtedly the "McClaggan Hunt." You should write a short fic on that!

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