Reviews For Downfall
Reviewer: Touche
Date: 09/23/06 10:39
Chapter: My little Hero

I think the story is good, just a little too many typos and grammar mistakes.

Reviewer: Katlynn
Date: 09/05/06 17:58
Chapter: Midnight meetings

Its good.

Reviewer: starlight_witch
Date: 09/03/06 15:32
Chapter: Years go by

WOW kwl like i said last time u do like clifys * aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh* lol
im lovin the story update soon



Reviewer: starlight_witch
Date: 09/03/06 13:26
Chapter: One way out, 2 friends and 3 dads

u do really like leavin cliffys n plz dont on the last thats to unfair unless u do a follo on :P



Reviewer: dracoismylilferret
Date: 09/03/06 7:07
Chapter: On the train

I thought it was a wonderful begining i definitly want 2 read chapter 2

Reviewer: chiaba2005
Date: 08/07/06 22:16
Chapter: Years go by

I loved your fic, it was a true joy to read. Thnks for the awesome fic

Reviewer: Jasmine Potter
Date: 07/28/06 18:56
Chapter: Years go by

What is the sequal to this story called? I really like this story. I want to know more about Darrne's life.

~Jasmine Potter~

Reviewer: hbp_rox123
Date: 07/25/06 7:27
Chapter: On the train

draco iz so mean in dis fic.he kisses mione and calls hr mudblood

Reviewer: iwishiwasginny182
Date: 07/23/06 14:38
Chapter: Years go by

omg, crazy!!!! Can't wait til update.

Reviewer: iwishiwasginny182
Date: 07/23/06 14:27
Chapter: Nearing the end

crazy, what's the sequel called?

Reviewer: iwishiwasginny182
Date: 07/21/06 23:58
Chapter: The ring

lol, mad funny.

Reviewer: iwishiwasginny182
Date: 07/21/06 23:39
Chapter: Lost and Found

omg, crazy!

Reviewer: iwishiwasginny182
Date: 07/21/06 23:25
Chapter: Nothing is as it seems

oh, Draco's totally gonna lose, crazy chapter.

Reviewer: iwishiwasginny182
Date: 07/21/06 23:03
Chapter: My little Hero

mum is mad at me for being up so late, but I must read the next chapter. Now I realize the house is huge so it did take some time.

Reviewer: iwishiwasginny182
Date: 07/21/06 22:57
Chapter: Explinations and Torture

ok, I love this story so far, but I hate to point this out. Wouldn't someone realize they were in that room. So shouldn't they try to escape instead of sleeping? don't get me wrong I love the story but this just seemed like a little problem.

Reviewer: iwishiwasginny182
Date: 07/21/06 22:37
Chapter: Trouble around every turn

omg no way?!

Reviewer: iwishiwasginny182
Date: 07/21/06 21:13
Chapter: Detention

love it!

Reviewer: iwishiwasginny182
Date: 07/21/06 20:54
Chapter: On the train

good first chapter

Reviewer: KAC316
Date: 06/12/06 9:16
Chapter: Trust issues

It's good but check your SPELLING!

Reviewer: malfoys_gurl_1234
Date: 06/02/06 0:30
Chapter: Years go by


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