I think the story is good, just a little too many typos and grammar mistakes.
WOW kwl like i said last time u do like clifys * aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh* lol
im lovin the story update soon
u do really like leavin cliffys n plz dont on the last thats to unfair unless u do a follo on :P
I thought it was a wonderful begining i definitly want 2 read chapter 2
I loved your fic, it was a true joy to read. Thnks for the awesome fic
What is the sequal to this story called? I really like this story. I want to know more about Darrne's life.
draco iz so mean in dis fic.he kisses mione and calls hr mudblood
omg, crazy!!!! Can't wait til update.
crazy, what's the sequel called?
lol, mad funny.
oh, Draco's totally gonna lose, crazy chapter.
mum is mad at me for being up so late, but I must read the next chapter. Now I realize the house is huge so it did take some time.
ok, I love this story so far, but I hate to point this out. Wouldn't someone realize they were in that room. So shouldn't they try to escape instead of sleeping? don't get me wrong I love the story but this just seemed like a little problem.
omg no way?!
good first chapter
It's good but check your SPELLING!
YOU REALLY NEED TO WRITE MORE BECAUSE YOUR STORY IS REALLY REALLY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!