It was simply awesome.I really want to read more of it.
i really love your story and yeah you are a good author i can't wait to read the seqael
i do like it i can't wait until your next chapter you did a good job writnig the story and frist chapter of the sequel
AAAHHHHHHH! wait...how can him calling her a mudblood be sweet?
I think that I like the concept of your story, but the sentence structure can tend to be a little bit choppy. One piece of advice that I would give you would be to the use the word "she" less often. It is used a little bit excessively, and I think that that might make the story flow better. Good luck!
I'm so sad that's it's through! I really liked it!! Can't wait til I read the next!!
..if they could have just flooed back to hogwarts why didn't they do that before! this story makes no sense. i am sorry but this is just so random. VOLDEMORT'S BABY?... allright. sorry for being harsh. :(
umm.. okay your family tree doesn't make any sense if greg malfoy had two daughters their son's last names wouldn't be malfoy. this is too confusing they are randomly still like happy and jolly while in the same place as voldemort! the characters aren't right.
i like this story but that chapter was just really hard to follow it was random for sure, just alot of stuff that happened just isn't beleivable. i like the rest of the story though :)
monopoly? isn't wierd that was the game i brought to grampa's party?
i bet its draco. i am starting to believe you
if this is you sucking, thsn you must be really good, stranger. :)
Well, I accepted the fact that Voldomort tried fucking with Hermione because there was no such crime he hasnt done but liking her and not killing her is just unVoldomortlike(although I know he's sparing Hermione just to fuck with her). And by the way, nice cliffhanger.
That was the most unusual thing I've ever read.It was quite funny too.
This chapter is kinda wierd. Well I'm reading this story right after the last one you wrote - ''A Leap of Faith'',it was awesome so I've a lot of expectations from this one too,so please dont disappoint me.
wow that chapter really scared me I thaught she was really going to die! I can't wait to keep reading.
That was HALARIUSE! I really love reading you're story it keeps me guessing and keeps me Laughing/Getting scared!
Wow voldemort was soo.......... creepy I almost couldn't read it but, I had to know what was going to Happen you are a fantastic writer!!!!
one word: WOW. how the heck did you come up with this?? it amazing!!! the whole 3 dads thing his really, very, umm, well, different!! i am waiting not-so-very-patiently for the next chapter!!!
kind of fast pace, isn't it?