Reviews For Downfall
Reviewer: Daredevil666
Date: 06/28/07 11:00
Chapter: Years go by

It was simply awesome.I really want to read more of it.

Reviewer: jj darkangel
Date: 06/14/07 22:30
Chapter: Nearing the end

i really love your story and yeah you are a good author i can't wait to read the seqael

Reviewer: jj darkangel
Date: 06/14/07 22:28
Chapter: Years go by

i do like it i can't wait until your next chapter you did a good job writnig the story and frist chapter of the sequel

Reviewer: hpfan827
Date: 04/14/07 23:02
Chapter: On the train

AAAHHHHHHH! wait...how can him calling her a mudblood be sweet?

Reviewer: double_life
Date: 03/09/07 16:19
Chapter: Midnight meetings

I think that I like the concept of your story, but the sentence structure can tend to be a little bit choppy. One piece of advice that I would give you would be to the use the word "she" less often. It is used a little bit excessively, and I think that that might make the story flow better. Good luck!

Reviewer: The Slytherin Queen
Date: 03/04/07 16:02
Chapter: Nearing the end

I'm so sad that's it's through! I really liked it!! Can't wait til I read the next!!

Reviewer: hollyberries
Date: 02/24/07 19:57
Chapter: One way out, 2 friends and 3 dads

..if they could have just flooed back to hogwarts why didn't they do that before! this story makes no sense. i am sorry but this is just so random. VOLDEMORT'S BABY?... allright. sorry for being harsh. :(

Reviewer: hollyberries
Date: 02/24/07 19:45
Chapter: Lost and Found

umm.. okay your family tree doesn't make any sense if greg malfoy had two daughters their son's last names wouldn't be malfoy. this is too confusing they are randomly still like happy and jolly while in the same place as voldemort! the characters aren't right.

Reviewer: hollyberries
Date: 02/24/07 19:14
Chapter: Nothing is as it seems

i like this story but that chapter was just really hard to follow it was random for sure, just alot of stuff that happened just isn't beleivable. i like the rest of the story though :)

Reviewer: Comrade little John
Date: 01/19/07 12:37
Chapter: Nothing is as it seems

monopoly? isn't wierd that was the game i brought to grampa's party?

Reviewer: Comrade little John
Date: 01/18/07 20:58
Chapter: Trust issues

i bet its draco. i am starting to believe you

Reviewer: Comrade little John
Date: 01/18/07 17:41
Chapter: On the train

if this is you sucking, thsn you must be really good, stranger. :)

Reviewer: cutegriffindor
Date: 12/28/06 13:29
Chapter: My little Hero

Well, I accepted the fact that Voldomort tried fucking with Hermione because there was no such crime he hasnt done but liking her and not killing her is just unVoldomortlike(although I know he's sparing Hermione just to fuck with her). And by the way, nice cliffhanger.

Reviewer: cutegriffindor
Date: 12/28/06 12:37
Chapter: Trouble around every turn

That was the most unusual thing I've ever read.It was quite funny too.

Reviewer: cutegriffindor
Date: 12/28/06 11:53
Chapter: On the train

This chapter is kinda wierd. Well I'm reading this story right after the last one you wrote - ''A Leap of Faith'',it was awesome so I've a lot of expectations from this one too,so please dont disappoint me.

Reviewer: RONluver45
Date: 12/24/06 18:54
Chapter: Warnings

wow that chapter really scared me I thaught she was really going to die! I can't wait to keep reading.

Reviewer: RONluver45
Date: 12/23/06 22:50
Chapter: The ring

That was HALARIUSE! I really love reading you're story it keeps me guessing and keeps me Laughing/Getting scared!

Reviewer: RONluver45
Date: 12/23/06 21:38
Chapter: Explinations and Torture

Wow voldemort was soo.......... creepy I almost couldn't read it but, I had to know what was going to Happen you are a fantastic writer!!!!

Reviewer: yoyonpapa
Date: 11/24/06 11:44
Chapter: On the train

one word: WOW. how the heck did you come up with this?? it amazing!!! the whole 3 dads thing his really, very, umm, well, different!! i am waiting not-so-very-patiently for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: Ghosts of Gryffindor
Date: 10/11/06 15:32
Chapter: Midnight meetings

kind of fast pace, isn't it?

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