wow! that was sooo awsome! i cant believe it is over...i cant wait till the sequel!!! that is going to be totaly awsome! i read your whole story in one day because i only found out about it recently! you are a very gifted author pls keep writing!
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!! Can't WAIT for the sequel!! Will it be like, when Darren is of age? When will the setting be? I forgot what happened to Lucius Malfoy, what happened to him again? Is he dead or what? You're an AWESOME writer! I laughed so hard when Hermione pulled the gay joke on Ron and Harry.
I love this story sooooooooo much!!!!! But I would have liked that you wrote Hermione's pregnancy months.
YAY...der gon be a sequal....i lluv yer story soo much..nd thx for mentionin emh..preciate it soooo much...aitte...caint wait for da next one!!!!!!!!!yu are a relly gifted writer of yer age!!!!!lol
i loved the story! i give it a rating of ten!
I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job.
I can't believe it's actually over. I am crying so much, I can barely make out the keys... I loved this story so much. You truely are a very gifted writer. I am looking very much to your sequal. Good luck...LOL...BYE :) :) :)
YES!!!! Theres going to be a sequal... I am so excited... Can't wait to read the last ch. I'll have my tissue box with me...LOL...BYE :)
I love this story. Please continue. I am holding on to this story's every moment. Please continue i feel like i am apart of this story in and out. I love this story. Please continue *you are a great author*
i love it soo much i can't wait for the sequel. Please start it soon, i adore your writing!!
yeah thers going to be a sequal!!!!!!!!! but i'm so sad this story is over *tear* !!!!!!!!!! i really loved this story!!!!!
Good Job, I quite enjoyed it. It was good unlike many of the Draco/Hermione fan fics
A little bit shaky and moving a bit fast, makes it hard to work out where they were in this chapter at places, like Hermione had gone to bed and yet she heard Harry and Ron talking
I LOVED THIS STORIE!!!!! GOOD JOB!!!!! I LOVE IT IT TOTALLY ROX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
it's was really great and im glad there's goin to be a sequal hurry up with is
That was freaking awesome...though the ending was sort of a rush...I really liked the whole orb! That was cool! Well can't say I didn't hate it...sorry it took me so long to finish reading the story! lol. Well can't wait for the sequel! Peace Out!!
Author's Response: thanks for the review! hope you like the sequal
Wow...that must have been super scary to hear all of the commotion and then drift back to sleep! lol. Wow, everythings happening left and right to her isn't it! lol. First she gets kissed by Voldemort, then he later switches to Snape who freaking gropes her, and then she gets pregnant with Voldemorts child, gets a charm placed on her and her child, then sort of marries Draco...and get tricked and pranked by Harry and Ron with a muggle camera, when electronic items are not suppose to work at Hogwarts...then get stabbed in the library by a mysterious person who makes her die after she gives birth...how sick and corrupted can this story get! LOVE IT! lol. moving on...don't let the madness end...this is really awesome! Peace Out!!
Author's Response: lol! its weird the way my brain works, all that stuff just spins around, and i think it comes out in the wrong order, or not the way it was suposed to but, yea....