Sorry, but the grammatical and spelling errors are just too many to muddle through! I suggest you revisit this story with a good punctuation textbook and dictionary.
the randomness was awesome!! lol
WHHHAAAAAATTTTTT?????? lol jk i loved it! but truthfully, im kinda confuseddd....hahaha
CLIFFHANGER!! Ish ... Anyway, I love your story, keep up being awesome and all that pizzazz as well as being an epic writer (thumbs up)
Loved it hun :D You are a writer of EPIC proportions (I'm not saying you are fat)
this was a slightly odd chapter but i LOVED it!!!! AH-MAYH-ZING!!!!
Yes the first chapter isn't the best but the story is WAYYYYYYY worth reading!!!!!!
The sequel has started off much more serious, sounds like a real thriller, but i hope there's still some randomness woven in.
It Is a very very bad soap opera! Fantastic, I love those. I also find it strange when people feel offended at being mistakenly assumed gay, surely the error is easily rectified.
P.S. Oh and Emus? Malfoy Sr is sick! Can't Dumbledore rescue them and send them to live in Hagrid's pumpkin patch with Buckbeak?
Um, well the plot is so mental, it's like a very bad soap opera, like watching a bludger knock someone from a broom, so awful you can't not look. Sorry, I meant all that in a good way.
Well, the randomness continues. It appears that none of them seem to be too bothered about leaving, and where are all the bad guys? And how come they're so bothered about being cousins when purebloods have been inbreeding for centuries?
I think this is my favourite chapter so far, apart from the kissing Voldemort part...Eeww!! Anyway, the randomness was just so hilarious I hadn't a clue where i was. One thing though, couldn't they escape out the window or something? Oh, or couldn't Hermione send all four of them to Dumbledore like she did Lucius and Pettigrew?
this really needs to be beta'd. it has a lot of spelling and grammatical errors. it was very annoying while reading, and it makes your work seem unprofessional. please fix it.
I dont think u r sick
authors note: understand i hated writting the part with voldemort!!! sooo don't think i am i sick twisted freaking weirdo.... thanks to all who reviewed!! please continue to review!!! updates coming asap!!!
You spelled a lot of easy things wrong
its okay but I liked it when you ended in a cliffie
You should definitely do a sequal