Reviews For Downfall
Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 02/02/12 0:28
Chapter: Trust issues

Sorry, but the grammatical and spelling errors are just too many to muddle through! I suggest you revisit this story with a good punctuation textbook and dictionary.

Reviewer: buckbeakfan202
Date: 12/16/10 15:22
Chapter: Nothing is as it seems

the randomness was awesome!! lol

Reviewer: hplvr1
Date: 08/12/10 16:22
Chapter: Nothing is as it seems

WHHHAAAAAATTTTTT?????? lol jk i loved it! but truthfully, im kinda confuseddd....hahaha

Reviewer: Kyouko
Date: 12/17/09 4:27
Chapter: Lost and Found

CLIFFHANGER!! Ish ... Anyway, I love your story, keep up being awesome and all that pizzazz as well as being an epic writer (thumbs up)

Reviewer: Kyouko
Date: 12/17/09 4:12
Chapter: Nothing is as it seems

Loved it hun :D You are a writer of EPIC proportions (I'm not saying you are fat)

Reviewer: Loonyluna09
Date: 07/07/09 19:41
Chapter: Nothing is as it seems

this was a slightly odd chapter but i LOVED it!!!! AH-MAYH-ZING!!!!

Reviewer: Loonyluna09
Date: 07/07/09 19:26
Chapter: On the train

Yes the first chapter isn't the best but the story is WAYYYYYYY worth reading!!!!!!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 07/09/08 16:09
Chapter: Years go by

The sequel has started off much more serious, sounds like a real thriller, but i hope there's still some randomness woven in.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 07/09/08 15:44
Chapter: The ring

It Is a very very bad soap opera! Fantastic, I love those. I also find it strange when people feel offended at being mistakenly assumed gay, surely the error is easily rectified.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 07/09/08 15:22
Chapter: One way out, 2 friends and 3 dads

P.S. Oh and Emus? Malfoy Sr is sick! Can't Dumbledore rescue them and send them to live in Hagrid's pumpkin patch with Buckbeak?

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 07/09/08 15:20
Chapter: One way out, 2 friends and 3 dads

Um, well the plot is so mental, it's like a very bad soap opera, like watching a bludger knock someone from a broom, so awful you can't not look. Sorry, I meant all that in a good way.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 07/09/08 15:10
Chapter: Lost and Found

Well, the randomness continues. It appears that none of them seem to be too bothered about leaving, and where are all the bad guys? And how come they're so bothered about being cousins when purebloods have been inbreeding for centuries?

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 07/09/08 14:51
Chapter: Nothing is as it seems

I think this is my favourite chapter so far, apart from the kissing Voldemort part...Eeww!! Anyway, the randomness was just so hilarious I hadn't a clue where i was. One thing though, couldn't they escape out the window or something? Oh, or couldn't Hermione send all four of them to Dumbledore like she did Lucius and Pettigrew?

Reviewer: MaraudersLover
Date: 06/10/08 2:17
Chapter: Trust issues

this really needs to be beta'd. it has a lot of spelling and grammatical errors. it was very annoying while reading, and it makes your work seem unprofessional. please fix it.

Reviewer: winxcharmx
Date: 05/11/08 18:49
Chapter: Explinations and Torture

I dont think u r sick


authors note: understand i hated writting the part with voldemort!!! sooo don't think i am i sick twisted freaking weirdo.... thanks to all who reviewed!! please continue to review!!! updates coming asap!!!

Reviewer: winxcharmx
Date: 05/11/08 18:37
Chapter: Detention

You spelled a lot of easy things wrong

Reviewer: winxcharmx
Date: 05/11/08 18:33
Chapter: Midnight meetings

its okay but I liked it when you ended in a cliffie

Reviewer: winxcharmx
Date: 05/11/08 18:25
Chapter: On the train

good

Reviewer: STOVE07
Date: 05/06/08 22:42
Chapter: Nothing is as it seems

huh?

Reviewer: I_heart_Luna
Date: 10/06/07 14:58
Chapter: Years go by

You should definitely do a sequal

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