Reviews For To Catch a Horcrux
Reviewer: bertiebott12
Date: 02/03/07 10:47
Chapter: One-Shot

THis ws amazing!! GREAT JOB!!

Reviewer: dementywhatsit
Date: 10/05/06 3:09
Chapter: One-Shot

I like the way that you had the Trio bribe the pub owner into talking. I had assumed he would need to be, but using the Firewhiskey instead of money? It was a nice touch.

"Bloody hell!"

"It might very well be, Ron," Harry assured him.

That was my favourite line of the fic! I can really picture Harry saying that to Ron and it made me smile.

Your descriptions of the Inferi's eyes in particular was very good. Creepy and slightly gross, but in a good way! :P

All in all I really liked this and I enjoyed how you described the surroundings and events in an interesting way. Well done :)

Reviewer: Siriuslyinluvwithharry
Date: 08/10/06 10:55
Chapter: One-Shot

very very good! i loved it!

Reviewer: LittleDarlin909
Date: 05/31/06 2:23
Chapter: One-Shot

Brilliant! You have done Jo proud with this premise! My only complaint is the line "Empty clotheslines swayed in the humid breeze where women should have been out hanging the washing." Not very PC (tsk tsk...) Anyway, I love the plot, love your style, love your sense of humor. Bottom line--love it :-)

Reviewer: crazy_purple_hp_freak
Date: 05/22/06 10:39
Chapter: One-Shot

I love the ending of this. Makes it look like they are normal
Are you going to carry this on as they find more horcruxes, and destroy them and stuff? I think that would be really good. Well done anyway! This is a great chapter.

Reviewer: wizard lover
Date: 05/11/06 16:22
Chapter: One-Shot

That was really good. I love your writings.

Reviewer: Lurid
Date: 05/01/06 3:29
Chapter: One-Shot

Woah, Crafty! This is certainly something! I searched your name, in hope fo something new to read, and what do i find?

I loved the way you used the line, it was so simply inserted into his speach, i didn't even realise it was there until i re-read it! I

loved how each sequence flowed seamlessly, and at the moment, there is not one thing i can find to nit-pick about. This is honestly the best Horcrux-theory story I have read, and kept me enthralled until the end. Well done, Heather Kudos! & hearts;

Reviewer: Accio_Chocolate
Date: 04/25/06 21:36
Chapter: One-Shot

Very cool scenario! I like that you buttered Martin up with Firewhiskey, and the well was well-written! (hahaha, I crack myself up!) Great job!

Reviewer: Sycco
Date: 10/21/05 19:53
Chapter: One-Shot

Great story please update soon or ill go crazy with suspense, by the way HOW THE HELL WILL THE DESTROY THE HORCRUX!!! Thanks 10/10

Reviewer: Katastrophe
Date: 10/14/05 4:57
Chapter: One-Shot

Very nicely done! I love the fact that you had them working together as a team and Ron not being totally dim witted as a lot of fics make him out to be. Hugs~~Kat

Reviewer: lisa_lovegood
Date: 10/07/05 12:50
Chapter: One-Shot

frigging hell wot a start! that really woz gr8! keep it up!

Reviewer: lisa_lovegood
Date: 10/07/05 12:49
Chapter: One-Shot

frigging hell wot a start! that really woz gr8! keep it up!

Reviewer: kreachers_padfoot
Date: 10/07/05 12:18
Chapter: One-Shot

HOLY****!!!!!!! THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!! i love all of your fic, and i hope you write more, i cant wait to see more!

Reviewer: Sunshine1313
Date: 10/06/05 22:16
Chapter: One-Shot

OMG!!!!!!!!! What a BRILLIANT one-shot. I had no idea you had another story out. I loved it. You are, like I've said many times, one of my favorite authors. I don't know if you read your reviews anymore, but if you have time, I would honored if you'd read my new story. Thanks, and again, BLOODY BRILLIANT, as usual. 10!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Jenn_Weasley
Date: 09/28/05 13:12
Chapter: One-Shot

That was amazing!!! The descriptions of the area and weather really put me into the story. And the well, cave and booby trap were so well thought out - to quote Ron: "Brilliant!". I just loved this story! Good luck in the contest!!!

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 09/27/05 18:09
Chapter: One-Shot

WOW! Heather this is a great story! Even if you're not in my house, this story deserves great acclaim! The imagery was amazing, I shuddered at the thought of the inferi's head being torn off! So Gross! I'm glad I happened across this! Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: spilled ink
Date: 09/19/05 23:51
Chapter: One-Shot

That was really good. Contest fics are always fun to read, and yours was really well-written. Your details were amazing; it was like I was there with the trio. But the only thing that I had a problem with was how easily Harry, Ron, and Hermione got the Horcrux. When DUmbledore and Harry went to get the locket, they had a really hard time. Dumbledore had to give his blood, drink from the basin, and all this other stuff, while the trio only pushed a stone and did some hovering. I still enjoyed it though. *10*

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