Great job! I love how everything fits together. and it wasn't too fluffy.
the characters were all really good. Harry especialy was very in character. Ginny was good too. [:
keep writing!
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most people write these two "missing moments" as 2 different stories, and don't include ron's reaction afterward. i liked how you laced everything together. nice job with making it sweet and not sappy!!
wow, I loved the text pulling the story together. Also the reference to the love potion. Great writing!
There just can't be enough missing moments from HPB involving Harry and Ginny and this is a nice one. Great fluff.
An absolutely brilliant job working off of the text (especially the Amortentia, i noticed that too, so excited someone decided to encorporate it). I read your other fic too--equally remarkable-- ah you inspire me to... go have a beautiful romance and write antiquated love sonnets!
This is a GREAT story!!! I absolutely LOVE it!!! Keep writing, great job!!!
Wow, this fills in the blanks quite well. I'm sure more than a few people wanted a few more details out of JKR about what happened in that period, and it really does read like she could have wrote it herself.
This was a wonderful story. I liked how you put in the references from the books and the part about Ron and Hermione. Keep it up!
Author's Response: This was what I saw happening in my head in those missing moments, so it needed to fit in. I'm glad I succeeded!
That was lovely - very sweet and humorous - I enjoyed it very much. The characters were all very well done, as was the dialogue. You fitted it beautifully around canon. I also really enjoyed the Ron and Hermione parts (as they are my faves - and I love to see them written well) and am looking forward to reading your other story. Very good - thank you.
Author's Response: Sorry, I have only just found this review lurking at the bottom of the (long, and getting longer - you're all too kind) list. I'm glad you liked this one as well.
Aw! that was so sweet. I loved how you used references from past books. You fitting in your story with the book's as if it actually happen, you know what I mean? Any good job. Oh i also loved the reference to the Ginny's poem, and the love potion. EXCELENTE!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked this. It was my first attempt at fan fiction and I was really pleased with it. The ideas just popped into my head when I was reading HBP and I just had to get them down. Have you tried my second fiction, Tears, Comfort and T-shirts yet?
This was a great one-shot! I loved the references to the past, especially the valentine and butter dish! 9/10
Author's Response: Thanks for reading this one and reviewing it as well. I really enjoyed writing this one (not that I didn't enjoy writing Tears, Comfort and Clean T-Shirts!); it was my first attempt at fan fiction and the ideas just leapt into my head when I read and reread HBP. I had to get them down on paper/screen. The moderater said that it was perhaps to long and that I should consider breaking it up, but I always felt it was meant to be a one (long) shot kinda thing. What do you think? Was it too long for you?
A bit too fluffy for me! But all the same, a good story, and, again, well in character.
Author's Response: Oh, well, life'd be boring if we all liked the same kind of stuff. Thanks for your kind words though.
Are u sure that u haven't been digging around in JKR's rubbish bin? 'cause this is like something that was written with the brilliance of JKR but not that relitively (i think that's how u spell it) improtant, only to us H/G shippers, so they had to cut it out.......i'd just like to say excellent 55555555000000006222453 and 24 out of 10
Author's Response: You're too kind! *blushes* I just feel that it is important to keep the style of writing in character as well as the characters, otherwise what's the point? Anyway, glad you liked it.
This story is something that i think JK would be proud of. :) I really enjoyed reading it, everyone was greatly portrayed in canon. I really like how you showed Harry and Ginny and their comfort around each other. It's along the lines of how i saw them together in my head. Great job! Keep writing, i'll keep a look out for your new things. <3 10/10
Author's Response: Wow! High praise indeed. Thank you so much for you kind words. When I read HBP I got all these pictures and ideas in my head and just had to get them onto paper/screen. I'm really glad you enjoyed reading it. I've submitted the first part of a five-part fic about Ron and Hermione called Comfort, Tears and Clean T-Shirts. Hopefully it'll be validated soon. Perhaps you could let me know what you think of that when it's up.
