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Name: bluexdreamz (Signed) · Date: 01/20/06 16:51 · For: The Quidditch Match and the Aftermath
so far so good. i really like how you've described how they feel.........it makes it seem so real. i'm really looking forward to reading how this all ends up to hermione and Draco together. Keep up the great work!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad that you like it.

Name: Hermines twin (Signed) · Date: 01/20/06 13:55 · For: Snowballs and Strange Sounds
i think your story is wonderful!!!!!!! and as 4 the mystery person i have a guess but im not sure that im correct.;) so i guess youll just have to update and i just have to wait and find out!!!:D UPDATE SOOOOOON!!!!!10~10

Author's Response: Aw, your review was wonderful! Chapter Eight is in queue and hopefully will be accepted soon. I'm having a few computer/time issues so updates may come slowly, but at least they will be coming!

Name: Morphin (Signed) · Date: 12/23/05 13:17 · For: Snowballs and Strange Sounds
Lol! 'Malfoy's do not play in the snow.' Ha! Typical! I'm glad Hermione is teaching him to lighten up a bit, then. As for the Mystery person, I have no idea who that is so whatever I'm not even gonna try and guess because my guesses would all be wrong. P.S. You've made MY day with this chapter, I've been reading so much Draco/Hermione angst today that I've been a bit depressed. You've turned my mood around! THANKYOOU. Please update soon..

Author's Response: Aww, this review made my day! Draco/Hermione angst is wonderful, but there does need to be some humor. My fic, I think, is going to be a bit darker later on, but not to the point of angst. I will try to update as soon as I can. Sorry for not getting another chapter in before the break! I've been busy writing a R/Hr one-shot for this Secret Santa thing in my common room (Hufflepuff) on the forums. Hopefully I'll get to post that later! Thanks again for you review!

Name: nonsequitur91 (Signed) · Date: 12/14/05 14:55 · For: Snowballs and Strange Sounds
Dear ravenclawslion17, Your most recent chapter was fantastic. I suppose the mystery person is the same one from chapter five? Hmm…. I wonder….could it be Bellatrix? Moving on…. I thought the ending was really sweet. Awww… Malfoy has never had a snowball fight. I felt that the scene where Hermione and Draco were thinking the same thing, “ ‘So, uh, what were you thinking we could do today?’ Finally looking up, she met a pair of gray eyes and choked on her juice” was a little repetitive with “Hermione finally looked at him, and she choked on her drink." Perhaps when you are writing from two very different points of view, you should make it really clear. Most of the words were repeated throughout both views, making it less exciting for the reader. I wondered why Draco was so nervous…hadn’t he been with girls before? The beginning of the story was a little strange because you put almost too much emphasis on Hermione’s plain features. However, you later showed a childlike innocence in her that really separated her from the other characters. I also enjoyed reading about the mystery character because she added another twist to the plot. Great job!

Author's Response: Again, what a wonderful review! Thank you very much! I really appreciate your keen eye and good insight. Looking back through the chapter, I see what you mean by it being a bit reptitive. I'll try to fix that if I have some time soon. The reason I'm writing Draco as nervous is because, well, it's how he's becoming in my story. The characters are developing as they go (even though they're canon), and that's the direction Draco chose. And it's just everyone's guess that he's been with girls =]. I kind of like how my Draco isn't like everybody else's Draco. I was trying to emphasize Hermione's plainess in the looks category because I want my readers to see what Draco would see. She *is* plain, and in this fic I have no intention of Draco falling desperately in "lust" with her. That's why I am also showing the several sides to her personality that set her apart from others; the pride, the intelligence, the child, and everything else. I always felt that she had that childishness in her, and I'm glad that that part was read as I hoped it would be read. Hermione is by far my favorite character to write, and I have so much fun when I get to spiel about her. I'm glad you like Ms. Mystery too =] Whew...enough of my long-winded response! Thanks again, I really hope that you continue to review this fic. I really value your opinion, and I believe that you have already helped me so much.

Name: Yoda14 (Signed) · Date: 12/13/05 15:40 · For: Snowballs and Strange Sounds
Ah, another excellent addition to your story! I think i might know who this mystery person is, but i dont want to be right and then ruin it for everyone or be wrong and look like an idiot. so i guess i'll have to wait. Speaking of waiting, will this new one-shot you're writing make the wait for the next chapter longer? I hope not! gah, i wanna see hermione whoop draco at snowball fighting... lol

Author's Response: LOL! This review totally made my morning! It's probably a good idea not to guess, because you're probably right. I've left quite a few clues, and there are even more in the next chapter. I'm working on typing the next chapter right now, I'm just kind of stuck with one part. And the one-shot is up, by the way! You can find it on my author page.

Name: LbSoCcEr483 (Signed) · Date: 12/09/05 22:06 · For: Snowballs and Strange Sounds
More please.

Author's Response: Will do. lol.

Name: nonsequitur91 (Signed) · Date: 12/07/05 19:41 · For: Christmas is Coming
Dear ravenclawslion17, Another great chapter. Let’s see…I didn’t understand your line here, “How can nearly two bloody hours make me so damn uncomfortable?”…was he talking about the hours he spent by the lake with Hermione? Awww…how sad, “Not like I have a choice…he thought, but he wasn’t bitter about it”… sometimes the noble decisions we make in life bring hatred and spite from others…It was interesting to read about Malfoy’s loneliness (which came only AFTER his meeting with Hermione by the lake). I enjoyed reading the different scenes going on one after the other…Lavender talking to Hermione…Harry, Ron and Hermione saying goodbyes…Draco getting tormented by Peeves… It was also surprising to see that Hermione already seemed to know Draco and his intentions so well, “Come on Draco, it’s not that bad…you can do it.”. I also found the humor very comedic (forgive for being redundant), “Holy mother of Merlin. Father will turn in his grave…”. Great Job!

Author's Response: It's great to see another review from you! Yes, Draco was referring to his hours spent with Hermione. And I don't know if I misunderstood what you meant or not, but "Come on Draco, it's not that bad...you can do it," was Draco thinking to himself. I'm glad that you thought my scenes flowed well, and that you like my humor! It's nice to hear that I can write funny stuff, because I'm not usually what most people my age consider "comedic." I'm home sick from school today, so I'm working on TAH...maybe I'll get the next few chapters typed up so I can update faster! Thanks again!

Name: Yoda14 (Signed) · Date: 12/05/05 17:37 · For: Christmas is Coming
hey, not bad! i guess they are moving a bit fast, but its ok, i really like it! whats ur new fanfic gonna be like? i want to read it...

Author's Response: Eh, they are moving fast but this is going to be a fairly short fic anyway. I'm not going to the whole 20+ chapters thing. My new fic is a Dark/Angsty one-shot, and it's in queue right now! If you can't find it, I'll put a note up at the bottom og chapter 7 of TAH that says it's up.

Name: mooncalf (Signed) · Date: 12/04/05 14:51 · For: Christmas is Coming
I have to say that while normally I don't like D/Hr fics where he falls for her really fast, this is a definite exception. I don't know how you do it, but what he's doing seems natural and in character, and the same with Hermione. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks! And who says that he's falling for her fast? *wink*

Name: BehindThisSmile (Signed) · Date: 12/04/05 13:08 · For: Christmas is Coming
LOVED IT!!! as always! cant wait for the next chap.!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed it ^_^

Name: Morphin (Signed) · Date: 12/04/05 12:11 · For: Christmas is Coming
haha..liked it when Hermione told Ron and Harry she wasn't going with them. Great, as always! And I'll probably read your 1-shot when it is up.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! My one-shot is still with my beta, but I plan to have it submitted soon. I want to submit it before Chapter 7 of this fic, so just keep an eye out for it!

Name: M_H_R (Anonymous) · Date: 12/01/05 20:47 · For: Thank you
Wow, major cliff hanger. You have me hooked, I must read the rest. I like your story. It's very well written and you managed to keep both Draco and Hermione in character (a very difficult task, I might add. Hermione usually gets mutilated.) Can't wait for chapter 6!

Author's Response: Well, I'm sorry to say this but the "cliff hangerness" isn't in the next chapter at all! You'll have to wait until sometime in Chapter 7. I'm glad that you think my characters are IC, and you're right Hermione does get mutilated a lot. My favorite person to write ever is Hermione, so I'm glad to hear that I'm doing a good job. However, Draco is harder for me; we just don't know his whole background.

Name: LbSoCcEr483 (Signed) · Date: 12/01/05 16:41 · For: Thank you
Amazing chapter. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading...more is coming soon!

Name: 2ChocolateFrogs (Anonymous) · Date: 11/30/05 16:59 · For: Thank you
Ooooooh I like your story quite a lot! It is very interesting and well-written. Can't wait for the next chappie!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Chapter Six is awaiting validation ^_^

Name: LaaDeeDah (Signed) · Date: 11/30/05 1:29 · For: Thank you
I don't usually read Draco/Hermione, but this one is really good. I would have liked to see more detail on Hermione's talk with Ginny, but it probably isn't important anyway. I loved the ending. Thank you, and with a swish of a cloak he's gone. It was perfect.

Author's Response: I'm really glad that you're enjoying it, despite it being Draco/Hermione! You're right, Hermione's talk with Ginny wasn't that important, but the talk with Harry was. I didn't want to be repeating myself, so I showed her talk with Harry and not Ginny. I'm also glad that you liked the ending! It felt so perfect when I wrote it.

Name: BehindThisSmile (Signed) · Date: 11/29/05 20:54 · For: Thank you
lovin it so far! keep up the great work! its amazing

Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate it!

Name: Anticlownperson (Signed) · Date: 11/29/05 18:37 · For: Thank you
Hey, this is really great. Some people might think that Draco is a bit OOC, but i think it's just a part of his character that we haven't had an opportunity to see in the books. Keep up the great writing, it's wonderful!

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment. And yeah, we don't get to see the other side of canon Draco, so I'm developing him how I want him to be ^_^

Name: MrSkYz (Signed) · Date: 11/28/05 17:57 · For: Thank you
Awesome! I like the extreme realisticness(sp?) of it - especially the ending part (which also happens to be my favorite part), the "thank you" scene. Rather than make it some kind of automatic thing, you show Draco just simply saying "Thank you" and leaving rather than making a huge thing out of it yet. Things like becoming enemy to friends don't happen over night, and I think you just did a very good job of showing how he would feel. You're an awesome writer and I really like to read everything you write. I can't wait to read the rest of this story and any more that you make. 10 out of 10!

Author's Response: Thank you Sky! Like I've told you, this story would've never been submitted if it weren't for your encouragement. All of my reviews and kind comments about this story I owe to you. I'm glad that you think I'm doing a good job! I have a one-shot coming soon, as I've told you. I'll try to update this fic soon...

Name: Yoda14 (Signed) · Date: 11/23/05 14:39 · For: Thank you
This is absolutely brilliant! At first, I thought Draco was a little OoC, but I realize now that someone at the end of his preverbial rope would be willing to talk to anyone- even an (now ex)enemy. Of course the very end part confused me; I hope it doesnt mean that either Hermione or Draco isn't faking it! UPDATE ASAP!! I'm on the edge of my seat here!!

Author's Response: Draco is really hard to do. We don't know a ton about him from canon (we only see his mean side really), so he's a pretty tough one to write. Also, with Draco/Hermione romances, one of them will have to be at least a little OOC at some point because in canon they would always hate each other. *Sigh*, but they are still my favorite couple! I'm glad that you feel I explained it well though. And I'm not going to say anything about your confusion...you'll just have to wait and see!

Name: Morphin (Signed) · Date: 11/23/05 12:53 · For: Thank you
I'm glad that I found this new chapter. VERY intriguing. I did not really understand the last bit, though, and it seemed a bit out of proportion with the rest of the story but I guess that was the point- to interest people and leave them hanging for the next chapter! It certainly did that for me.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I know it may have seemed a little out of proportion, but that little bit of the plot is going to come in pretty soon. Just keep it in mind *winks*

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