even though this is your first fic, it's really good! the only thing that's bothering me is that i know the song but i can't remember who sung it. since that has almost no connection with your fic, i think that it's safe for me to say that i really like it and that it's brill!
ahhhh your story is amazing! please post more soon!
hey I love this chapter the cat alergy thing was amazing but it's so sd that draco could never get a good christmas. Please up date soon i really love this story
This is excellent, excellent, excellent...Can you update anytime soon though? Because I can't wait for the next chapter! 100000/10.
Author's Response: Thanks, it's lovely to hear from you. I'm doing my best to update. Real Life is just incredibley busy right now, though, so updates may come slowly.
Awesome story! Keep going! I was very disapointed to come upon chapter 8 because I realized it was the last one...with a heavy heart did I read it, only because it was the end. Good story. Wonderful writing. In my favourites now.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! And I hope you're not assuming that this story is complete...it's only a little more than half done! I should be updating soon, if I'm lucky. I've just been so busy that I haven't had much time to write.
Very nice writing. Beautiful start to the story.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm trying, I swear! Real life is being a pain right now.
Well, having just stumbled upon your story, I have to say that I am quite enjoying your version of Hermione and Draco's last year at Hogwarts. It has been interesting to watch the way you are bringing Hermione and Draco together while keeping them in character. You have managed to do that throughout the story, which can be fairly difficult with a relationship between Hermione and Draco. I really enjoyed this chapter, in particular, because of the very end. Your inclusion of his thoughts is absolutely hilarious. I kept trying to picture what expression he would have while he debated with himself whether or not to ask Hermione to hang out with him. Seeing a character's thoughts is always nice because it really gives the readers an insight into that character, which is especially nice with Draco since he is such a complex character. The other part of this chapter that I really enjoyed was the spat between Ron and Hermione about his assumption that she was going to the Burrow - that is a completely spot on portrayal of the two of them. Your ability to keep the characters in character has made this story a pleasure to read. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Wow, Karin, this review really made me feel SO good inside. I'm so happy that I am keeping everyone in character. Ron and Hermione are fun to write together, even though Ron can be a bit tough. And thank you greatly for liking my Draco. A few people think he's OOC -- I think that I'm just straying from the typical fanon Draco. He pretty much writes himself, and it's actually kind of fun to show him as a vulnerable person. *pets him*
Anyway, thanks again, sooooo much. This meant a lot to me =)
I really really like this story. It's sweet. Please update it soon! I rate it a 10!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to know that you like it.
its coming along really well. i like it! update soon....pa-leze!
Author's Response: Glad you like it! I'll do my best to update faster!
Loved the chapter...he's allergic to cats... i liked that par it was funni lol update asap i love dis story!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Yeah...the allergy thing was just a sudden burst of inspiration. It was fun to write.
I await VERY impatiently for an udate! I really love this story, so hurry it up, PLEASE!!
Author's Response: I'll try to! I'm glad you like it!
Dear ravenclawslion17, Aww... what a sweet chapter. Draco Malfoy and cat allergies… what a funny idea... I thought the way you wrote your words to reflect his nasal condition was extremely humorous to read. The creepy person with the ‘I must kill’ attitude was really starting to creep me out. I really wish I knew who she was and whether or not Hermione and Draco are going to venture off on dangerous expeditions together like Hermione did with Harry and Ron... nothing like danger to bring people closer together. I thought the day they spent together was really sweet. It was so sad that Draco never even fully enjoyed Christmas, “The presents had always excited him – what child hated presents? – but his parents had tossed theirs to the side saying ‘Thank you, Draco,’ or ‘That’s lovely, Draco,’ without so much as a hint of a smile on their faces” I guess his parents were people he sort of loved deep, deep, deep.... Down inside, even though they were never really the picture perfect image of loving parents every child should have. Another sad revelation that Malfoy made was the fact that he may not receive any presents...”And I never got presents for anyone either…maybe this year I…no, who would I bother giving one to? Maybe…maybe…may-“ and yet he was so hopeful, almost as though he expected one present from someone, maybe Hermione or he was thinking of getting one for her. “Thump! Hermione nearly jumped out of her skin and promptly smacked her head on the underside of the table”... I didn’t really know what exactly made Hermione jump out of her skin so that was a bit questionable. Hmmm...another great chapter, too short, but good.
Author's Response: Thanks for another great review! I know that this chapter was short...but I promise that they'll get longer. This story really is getting funnier than I expected. Ah well - you need humor in this 'ship occasionally. The mystery person will make an appearance in a few chapters, so watch out! Draco is getting more "human," I think, too. As I've been writing I think I've made him really vulnerable as a character. I don't know - I like it though. And Hermione jumped at the noise that Draco made when he slipped off into sleep - will fix that. Thanks again!
I order you to get those chappies up coz i get v. impatient. I luv your plot + u r a geat writer!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hurry up.
Author's Response: Thanks! Unfortunately I don't have a lot of time to write. I do try my best though, and this story will never get abandoned no matter how long it may take me to post a new chapter!
Great story so who the hell is the mystery person im dying to know i think its Pansy lol yeah snow ball fights i love them !!!!!!
Author's Response: You'll find out who it is in a few chapters!
Totally cool chappie!!!!! HE ASKED HER OUT!!!!!!!! lol
Author's Response: Well. he didn't ask her out on a date, exactly, but technically yeah. It wasn't really intended to be like him asking her out. He's just lonely.
Wow..............What was that all about?????
Author's Response: You'll see. *smirks*
Hey this is great for a first fan fiction. i really love it and its one of my favourites!!!! This chapter was very sad!!!! I HAte feeling as if i've got no on :( keep up the fab work!!!
Author's Response: I'm so happy that it's one of your favorites! And as it is my first, that makes it being one of your favorites all the more special =)