I was laughing the whole time!
You are really good at this!!!
After reading Schmerg's review, I second the suggestion of throwing in Whizzo chocolates. Besides getting the idea for Cockraoch Clusters from them, I do believe she also got Chocolate Frogs from them too (except they were real frogs with the bones left in for that extra crunch. :D
Another recommendation is to have a random ghost sound like Mr. Gumby (another Cleese-y thing to do) or have them look Spanish and a student will call them senor (can't do a ~ on the n, sorry) to make him mad (Chapman) or have a bunch of people say randomly "lemon curry?" tee hee...Now where's my bloody parrot.... ;)
Where is Sirius? Is he going to meet his adult counterpart? That would be SWEET!! 10/10 uPdAtE!!! UpDaTe!!!
Sirius does NOT know how to handel kids at all. And to think that Lily and James left him with Harry...
“Okay,” Sirius began, holding up a few crayons and a roll of paper towels. “Who wants to color?”
hahahahahaha!!!! Sirius is teaching Frenchand he doesn't know French!? haha!10/10
FABULOUS, FABULOUS! I'm so glad that this story isn't dead, it's my absolute favourite on fanfiction! But this chappie was worth the wait. I loved the bit about Uncle Vernon, that was hilarious. (Ponty Mython, anyone?)
I have only one suggestion-- you should put in something about Whizzo chocolates, since that's where JK Rowling got Cockroach Clusters. And it would be funny to make Nearly Headless Nick (aka John Cleese) do the Silly Walk, or something else Cleese-y.
Great job again!
haha great job on this chapter...never thought Sirius would end up at Fawlty Towers. anyway keep it up =)
absolutely wonderful ,one of the best
YAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! An update!!!!!!!!!! And it was a good one too!!!!! Have Fred and George finally realized that James isn't Harry? Poor Neville, turned into an armadillo, how the irony never ceases. What happened to Peter? And where did younger Sirius end up (if that's "Padfoot"). lily_writesshall finish this review by begging for an update very soon and by asking if the pre-school teacher before Sirius was Mr. Gambolputty- *mysterious hand interrupts by slapping over mouth to stop lily_writes from saying an incredibly long name*. lily_writes liked writing this review in the third person, lily_writes may do it again if Kelsid wishes. ;)
*sneaks up wearing a long black cloak**shiftily looks from side to side, making sure no one is around*
*takes deep breath*NI!!
mwa ha ha
Great story! update soon!
hmmm welll....... i think you shoud hurry up with the next chapter
Hilarious! I hope you update soon!
oh my! why must you leave me hanging like this! As soon as Sirius met pavement I kept thinking oh it's just a dream. but perhaps not. oh my 4:30 A.M. I'm not sure if i'm tired, or if I've been to befuddled with quoting every shakespearian play ever written right along with Sirius.
update soon! love this story! stayed up til 3am reading it!
this is looking good.
I liked it! Although, I have a nasty feeling I recognied the aardvark in the yellow sweater...
ummm... i don't quite understand the barbie doll part but other than that i loved this chapter!!! :D
I always check to see if this story has been updated, and I have to admit that I almost lost hope. It's been so long, I was wondering if next chapter or something you could clarify where everyone is and what has happened, because I kind of forgot. Thanks!