Reviews For Unbreakable
Reviewer: ginny96
Date: 06/26/12 18:57
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

WRITE MORE!
thats all im going to say.... well not really :)
that was a really good start for what seems like a promising story. it was well written, informitive about both charecter and setting, not to mention situation. well done

Reviewer: Sarah Riddle
Date: 05/10/10 16:56
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

This is amazing. I hope you continue.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 08/13/08 22:25
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

OoOOoO!! great first chapter! although, sorry, but its kinda cliche that lily's best friends like Sirius and Remus.

Reviewer: REMi iS AWESOME
Date: 04/27/08 15:43
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

Wow that was absolutely amazingly pretty! Wow I totally hooked!! Why havent' you updated in like the longest time? This is purely genius! Come on please update if you want I'll give you some cake or a cookie, i know how much everyone loves cookies! How i wish my lily and james fic could actually be like your, although it may have some potentail if i could just get it off the countless pages I've writen it on and move it onto my computer, but hey its procrastination! Ah absolutely lovely darling you better update this soon or I'll eat the cookie I mightve just been saving!!

Reviewer: GryfvenslythPUFF
Date: 09/30/07 15:48
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

This is lovely! I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: lilybobily7
Date: 06/15/07 13:24
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

good =]

Reviewer: lovelylillypi
Date: 02/11/07 18:32
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

OH.MY.GOD. i LOVE it!
please put more in...ooh and james should totally snitch the letter from roslyn and find out that lily likes him...or maybe Lily should go into a forest and James goes after her and they get together and Lily tells James everything!

Reviewer: Banana Shroogle
Date: 12/20/06 19:16
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

It's great!

But...uh...I'm guessing you're not going to update, huh?

Author's Response: Currently rewriting...

Reviewer: Lillian Potter
Date: 11/25/06 19:41
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

Great!! JUST UPDATE!

Author's Response: I'm sorry to say that it's easier said than done. :( My 2nd chapter keeps getting rejected, i'll have to rewrite it...thanks anyway.

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 07/02/06 0:01
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

oooooooooooh, interesting! I like how Lily already likes James, it gives it some sort of feel already, making their relationship very complicated. I can't wait to read more, so good luck and well done!

Reviewer: fan number1
Date: 05/07/06 13:23
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

please update soon! this is 1 of the best first chapters iv seen so dont give up keep posting.

Author's Response: Ah I feel so guilty! Please I will try to get it up but in the meantime, Harrypotterfanfiction.com has accepted the first three chapters!

Reviewer: ValorOrgulloso
Date: 04/30/06 10:50
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

:D Fantabulous story! Update soon (even though you can't. But it is a great story! My story won't even show up on here... I have no idea why...) You are a talented author! Keep writing!!!!

Reviewer: felix_felicis0092
Date: 04/05/06 9:01
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

hello i really like your first chapter. hope the second one comes up sooooooooooooooooooooooon bye

Reviewer: padfootcomeback
Date: 03/30/06 19:58
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

great story. i was talking to the computer a lot (this means i really like it - i only talk to really really really good books) and i already am addicted to sirius and i don't want the fifth book to have hapeened (obviously) so bring on the sirius. you inspired me to write about sirius so i will. Thanks for a great story )and the inspiration)

Author's Response: Thank you, i'm still trying. fingers crossed! Its been accepted on hpfanfiction so hopefully mugglenet will accept it soon!

Reviewer: A Excess of Phlegm
Date: 03/30/06 14:55
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

this totally stinks, i really dont like the mods right now. i hope its accepted soon!

Reviewer: Seriously in love with Sirius
Date: 03/30/06 14:30
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

Great job. I like your second chapter even better. I had alot of fun editing it. you're a really good writer and I hope chapter two gets accepted. I love this story. let me know when chappie two is up! XO Emily

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 03/21/06 17:56
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

I saw your plea for help on the forums for a beta, and I was so interested I decided to check out your story. I liked the start, although I was curious about the fact Lily liked James. If you can remember back to Snape's Worst Memory in book five, you'll notice Lily absolutely despised Snape. I liked how you characerterized Roselyn though, at least in the letter. It will be interesting to see if she keeps up her attitude, but I like her a lot so far. Remember, if you still need a beta please PM me or email me a lexhart92@hotmail.com. I really liked this so far and want to help you work with it in the future.

Reviewer: RupertsPheonix
Date: 03/21/06 15:43
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

Fabulous start! You've got me hooked. I kept reading and when I got to the end of the page, I was like, "Oh no, where's the next chapter?!?" Haha, but seriously I can't wait for the next chapter. You're so now in my favourites! =) 10/10! =)

Reviewer: hpfanforlife
Date: 03/20/06 17:30
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

That was a great first chapter! I like how you introduced it =) (10/10)

Reviewer: A Excess of Phlegm
Date: 03/20/06 14:09
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Invitations and Complications

i totally agree with Winky! that was a great first chapter i hope chapter 2 comes soon!

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