Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/21/08 23:54
Chapter: Chapter Six - Dumbledore's Return

Again, you need to work on fixing typos and spelling mistakes. Also fix the grammatical errors. The chapters still need to be longer and more indepth.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/21/08 23:47
Chapter: Chapter Five - Reunited

Again, it was okay. The plot could use a little work. Also, look out for spelling mistakes and typos.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/21/08 23:43
Chapter: Chapter Four - Murder at the Ministry

OK, did you notice the specific mention of the ninth floor by THE DAILY PROPHET and the statement by Mr. Weasley about where Sirius' stuff went? Ler's hope this coincedence leads to something.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/21/08 23:27
Chapter: Chapter Three - The Wedding

Nice plot. The wedding could stand to be a bit more magical though.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/21/08 23:22
Chapter: Chapter Two - The Burrow

It was okay, you should try to make your chapters longer and more indepth.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/21/08 23:19
Chapter: Chapter One The Farewell

Not great, but pretty good. Hopefully it'll draw me into the story later on. Good Luck!!

Reviewer: alisonxo0marie
Date: 09/15/07 20:28
Chapter: Chapter Two - The Burrow

that was almost painful

Reviewer: meryal
Date: 08/16/07 15:24
Chapter: Chapter Three - The Wedding

I like how you incorporated so many characters into the chapter. The twins are funny in the chapter, contunually wrecking havoc. Also, George was kept in character very well, when he was flirting with Fleur's cousin. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: self named harry potter freak
Date: 06/14/07 21:09
Chapter: Chapter 25

this is one of the times when i just do a headdesk for the obvious solution to a simple problem. like in book 5 where harry set up the elaborate plan to find sirius and flew off to the ministry instead of using the mirror, harry here charges off to battle when he doesnt need to. ummm ... the portkey? it's so obvious that he could just tell minerva to grab it and then apparate to grimmauld place from there, but no. the hero complex. always complicated. *Headdesk* but these little flaws give characters character, because no one is perfect. i cant wait to see how this plays out.


Reviewer: demrok
Date: 03/05/07 20:07
Chapter: Chapter 25

good story cant wait till chapter 26

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 03/04/07 14:59
Chapter: Chapter 25

Oh no! I hope Minerva's alright! What IS Voldy doing at Hogwarts? Is he trying to kill McGonagall? What does he want with her???

Reviewer: Isebas
Date: 02/19/07 18:48
Chapter: Chapter 25

I agree great story so far...keep it comin.As I have said before the chapter are a little short and the story moves a little fast.But aside from that it keeps me wanting more.Keep it up.

Reviewer: Isebas
Date: 02/19/07 15:05
Chapter: Chapter One The Farewell

I think this is a great story so far...are you going to submit more chapters or a sequel? I think the chapter are a little on the shorter side but still great.Some minor spelling errors but we are all human and make mistakes...great work,keep it up!

Reviewer: Phoenixis
Date: 02/08/07 4:55
Chapter: Chapter 25

Great story! I'm really enjoying reading this. Your writing is quite good, a pleasure to read.

I actually thought that Harry would surely not tell everybody about the horcruxes as he has here, or even Dumbledore for that matter.

The dream about the Hufflepuff horcrux was great, wonderfully written. And Hokey being Dobby's mother, that completely caught me by surprise.

I hope Ginny gets well soon, I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: knowitallHermy12
Date: 02/06/07 21:00
Chapter: Chapter Two - The Burrow

Plesant story. Love it. Check tiny spelling errors.

Reviewer: knowitallHermy12
Date: 02/06/07 20:52
Chapter: Chapter One The Farewell

lame... sorry but more detail please!!!

Reviewer: pammiez_x3
Date: 02/04/07 15:01
Chapter: Chapter 25

an update! short but good. update quickly!

Reviewer: gredandfordge4eva
Date: 02/04/07 8:24
Chapter: Chapter 25

very good. the last bit was a little unclear. when are u gonna update next. i can't hang on so long. mendel.

Reviewer: lucky girl
Date: 02/04/07 2:30
Chapter: Chapter 25

wow that is written very well, aside from a few spelling/gramar errors i think that this is one of my favorite stories. and i can totally feel the tention, but if Ginny doesn't wake up or if anyone important dies i will cryso please don't let that happen but you really write well!!!
*Lucky Girl*

Reviewer: _Peeves_
Date: 02/03/07 20:27
Chapter: Chapter 25

OMG OMG OMG!!! I LOVEYOUR STORY!!! It's one of the best I've ever read, not including the originals by JK. It is AMAZING!!!

~When there's strife and when there's trouble, call on Peevesie, he'll make double~

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