Reviewer: Zoltan42
Date: 03/27/06 19:38
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Mistake

Ginny's not the only one who made a mistake. They are trying to keep Voldemort from knowing that they know about his Horcruxes, but Harry not only mentioned them but also the locket in his letter. Several times in the books JKR mentioned avoiding using the owls or at the very least putting such information in the letters because of how easy it is to intercept the owls.

Reviewer: Sirius7
Date: 03/23/06 1:16
Chapter: Chapter 12 – Homecoming

I can't wait for a new chapter. I love how you write! Keep it up.

Reviewer: hpnut
Date: 03/21/06 23:01
Chapter: Chapter 12 – Homecoming

Great chapter but it needs to be longer. Keep it up, I like how this story is going.

Reviewer: Hot48cricket
Date: 03/21/06 22:36
Chapter: Chapter 12 – Homecoming

Yay!! Ginny's coming home to Harry!!!! So sad about the Burrow :( Who or what killed Nagini?????

Reviewer: PotterLover9494
Date: 03/19/06 14:56
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Mistake

Please update soon. I love your story and I really want to know what happened to the Burrow. I hope Ginny is okay!

Reviewer: FlyingPheonix
Date: 03/18/06 19:02
Chapter: Chapter Seven - Diagon Alley

I think Regulus's name is Regulus Arcturus Black....

Reviewer: The X
Date: 03/15/06 8:33
Chapter: Chapter Five - Reunited

Great Chapter, you could of told us a bit more about this shield though.

Reviewer: The X
Date: 03/15/06 8:22
Chapter: Chapter Four - Murder at the Ministry

Ninth floor eh? The Death Eaters are trying to get the stuff Lupin sold.

Reviewer: hpnut
Date: 03/12/06 22:01
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Mistake

Great job!! I hope Harry goes and gets Ginny before something happens and did the burrow get destroyed? Update soon.

Reviewer: Hot48cricket
Date: 03/11/06 17:21
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Mistake

Mistake? What mistake???? I think Ron is the one who has been making mistakes!!!! LOL And who could have done what to the Burrow??????

Reviewer: stark40763
Date: 03/11/06 13:32
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Mistake

Interesting chapter, cant wait to see what happened to The Burrow...

Reviewer: Hot48cricket
Date: 03/09/06 23:12
Chapter: Chapter 10 - The Fight

Thanks for the update - I really like your story. Question: Why is Hermione being such a bitch??? (I know that's her character but in this chapter it was really showing)

Author's Response: Well, she is really stressed with what is going on. It was not really about the butter. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lady_potter7447
Date: 01/29/06 20:16
Chapter: Chapter Nine – Letters and Surprises

I really like your fic, its added to my favorites list. :) I totally did not expect Hokey to be Dobbys mother, but it fits! Update soon!

Reviewer: Benny
Date: 12/31/05 19:42
Chapter: Chapter Nine – Letters and Surprises

I just wonder, are the twins boys or girls? It never says.

Author's Response: I know it doesn't say, they want to wait til the birth to find out. To be honest, I don't know yet.

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 12/18/05 22:31
Chapter: Chapter Nine – Letters and Surprises

I really like that Dobby is Hokey's son. It is good that he can help Harry by actually helping him this time (last time didn't work out that well). Great story, I liek where you are going with this.

Reviewer: ligiligirl
Date: 12/18/05 17:33
Chapter: Chapter 8 - The Order of the Phoenix

I repeat, THAT IS EVEN MORE RIDICLOUS THAN THE SNAPE IS A VAMPIRE AND THE HARRY AND HERMIONE ARE DESTINED FOR EACH OTHER THEORYS COMPINED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ligiligirl
Date: 12/18/05 17:11
Chapter: Chapter Six - Dumbledore's Return

I KNEW IT! YOU ARE REALLY STUPID! R.A.B. BEING RUGULUS WAS WAY TOO OBVIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ligiligirl
Date: 12/18/05 16:57
Chapter: Chapter Four - Murder at the Ministry

So you think that R.A.B. is Regulus, eh? Personally, the most plausible (Regulus is just too obvious) theory yet is Borgin, but I'll save that for an editorial... 9/10

Reviewer: ligiligirl
Date: 12/18/05 16:57
Chapter: Chapter Four - Murder at the Ministry

So you think that R.A.B. is Regulus, eh? Personally, the most plausible (Regulus is just too obvious) theory yet is Borgin, but I'll save that for an editorial... 9/10

Reviewer: Benny
Date: 12/18/05 16:33
Chapter: Chapter Nine – Letters and Surprises

I never would have made the connection between Dobby and Hokey. That is a key part to the story probably.

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