As you'll recall from book 6 Hokey was believed to have killed Hepzibah Smith and would not have been put in the service of the Malfoys. I realize you need to get Dobby in the house somehow to witness the stealing of the cup but really this just doesn't work for me. But I still like your story so keep writing.
Wow! This is really good work! I'm impressed! You've really got a knack for writing, and every character is spot on. I love it. I have a feeling that when I read the seventh book, I'm going to get some of the facts confused between these two. And that's amazing!
Too short! But I understand why; I'm sure this stands better by itself. I'm just so excited to read more. Very interesting to see these events through Dobby. Can't wait to read what happens next.
two words: wow and powerful!
didn't chapter 20 already get posted. I read it and it was up for a while, then chapter 21 came up and before I could read it they were both gone
Nice one! Hope to read more soon!
I got it and I liked it. Good luck with the next one and update as soon as you can.
ohhh a very good chapter! i cant wait for the next update!!! you have really pulled me into this story its soo...i dont know how to explain it lol strange for me to be at a loss for words hehe!!
good job though!! keep up the good work i cant wait to read more!
Let me guess.That door is ginny's door.And would the death eaters have been seraching for the black heirlooms on the 9th floor?Well that muchs obvious great sotry!
um okay this chapter was a bit wierd and i am still confused does he know where the cup is or was it all just a dream
HeyHey i agree with more harry and ginny but i luv how i get to see all the horcruxes destroyed and dumbledore helping! I think it would be cool to see what the horcrux we dont kno is soon.. since i havnt read any stories where they actually pick something! luv the story keep writing
ummm........okay.......would it be dumb to say im confused? Okay, so it was a dream, that somehow gave him a clue to where the Hufflepuffs cup is....ok. right.
Will this make sence next chapter? haha sorry, this was really well written, but confuzzleing. In an i-want-to-read-more kinda way.
Very dark and dramatic. Definately not my favorite chapter, but I think it was necessary for your story. I personally would like more fluff between Harry & Ginny. Look forward to reading more.
wah!??? this was a dull chaptre
hah hah, find the locket!!!