Reviewer: clawscall
Date: 06/14/06 10:53
Chapter: Chapter 20 - With a little help from Dobby

As you'll recall from book 6 Hokey was believed to have killed Hepzibah Smith and would not have been put in the service of the Malfoys. I realize you need to get Dobby in the house somehow to witness the stealing of the cup but really this just doesn't work for me. But I still like your story so keep writing.

Reviewer: luna_lupin7
Date: 06/14/06 10:17
Chapter: Chapter 20 - With a little help from Dobby

Wow! This is really good work! I'm impressed! You've really got a knack for writing, and every character is spot on. I love it. I have a feeling that when I read the seventh book, I'm going to get some of the facts confused between these two. And that's amazing!

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 06/14/06 9:27
Chapter: Chapter 20 - With a little help from Dobby

Too short! But I understand why; I'm sure this stands better by itself. I'm just so excited to read more. Very interesting to see these events through Dobby. Can't wait to read what happens next.

Reviewer: Last HP Relative
Date: 06/08/06 13:38
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Motivation

two words: wow and powerful!

Reviewer: weasleyprincess13
Date: 05/24/06 20:56
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Motivation

didn't chapter 20 already get posted. I read it and it was up for a while, then chapter 21 came up and before I could read it they were both gone

Reviewer: Luthien65
Date: 05/21/06 15:01
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Motivation

Nice one! Hope to read more soon!

Reviewer: hpnut
Date: 05/16/06 21:12
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Motivation

I got it and I liked it. Good luck with the next one and update as soon as you can.

Reviewer: MissGinny1977
Date: 05/16/06 9:39
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Motivation

ohhh a very good chapter! i cant wait for the next update!!! you have really pulled me into this story its soo...i dont know how to explain it lol strange for me to be at a loss for words hehe!!
good job though!! keep up the good work i cant wait to read more!

Reviewer: amy4rupert
Date: 05/16/06 9:37
Chapter: Chapter Four - Murder at the Ministry

Let me guess.That door is ginny's door.And would the death eaters have been seraching for the black heirlooms on the 9th floor?Well that muchs obvious great sotry!

Reviewer: arl
Date: 05/15/06 18:12
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Motivation

um okay this chapter was a bit wierd and i am still confused does he know where the cup is or was it all just a dream

Reviewer: FFluVeR
Date: 05/15/06 16:47
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Motivation

HeyHey i agree with more harry and ginny but i luv how i get to see all the horcruxes destroyed and dumbledore helping! I think it would be cool to see what the horcrux we dont kno is soon.. since i havnt read any stories where they actually pick something! luv the story keep writing

Reviewer: lisa_lovegood
Date: 05/15/06 10:43
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Motivation

ummm........okay.......would it be dumb to say im confused? Okay, so it was a dream, that somehow gave him a clue to where the Hufflepuffs cup is....ok. right.
Will this make sence next chapter? haha sorry, this was really well written, but confuzzleing. In an i-want-to-read-more kinda way.

Lisa xxx

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 05/15/06 10:07
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Motivation

Very dark and dramatic. Definately not my favorite chapter, but I think it was necessary for your story. I personally would like more fluff between Harry & Ginny. Look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: chislarina
Date: 05/15/06 5:43
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Potions

wah!??? this was a dull chaptre

Reviewer: chislarina
Date: 05/15/06 5:40
Chapter: Chapter 17 - The Vault

woohoo!

Reviewer: chislarina
Date: 05/15/06 5:39
Chapter: Chapter 16 - The Locket

**GASP**

Reviewer: chislarina
Date: 05/15/06 5:37
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Christmas

oh!

Reviewer: chislarina
Date: 05/15/06 5:36
Chapter: Chapter 14 Transfiguration

hah hah, find the locket!!!

Reviewer: chislarina
Date: 05/15/06 5:34
Chapter: Chapter 13 Enough

awwww

Reviewer: chislarina
Date: 05/15/06 5:31
Chapter: Chapter 12 Homecoming

oh my

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