Reviewer: alyssa_S
Date: 06/02/08 1:25
Chapter: Chapter 25

I can't wait for more. You are a very good writer. you've got me hooked

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/23/08 14:55
Chapter: Chapter 25

Bet that a battle is coming, I hope that it is a good one. Keep watching out for those typos.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/23/08 14:49
Chapter: Chapter 24

'Twas okay, 'tis getting boring again.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/23/08 14:44
Chapter: Chapter 23

Nice, they have destroyed one of the last remaing Horcruxes.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/23/08 14:39
Chapter: Chapter 22

'Twas okay, hopefully the locket is at the end of this journey.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/23/08 14:33
Chapter: Chapter 21 Stonehenge

Okay, getting interesting again. Watch for typos.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/23/08 14:27
Chapter: Chapter 20 - With a little help from Dobby

Turning interesting again. Watchout for typos and spelling mistakes.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/23/08 14:18
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Motivation

Well, at least we sort of know where the cup is.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/23/08 14:14
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Potions

OK, it has tipped to the boring side of the scale again. At least there are no spelling or grammatical mistakes in the past few chapters (including this one).

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/23/08 14:09
Chapter: Chapter 17 - The Vault

'Twas okay, although the last paragraph does not fit in that well with the rest of the chapter.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/23/08 14:05
Chapter: Chapter 16 - The Locket

Hmmm, wonder what happens now? 'Tis getting interesting again.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/23/08 14:01
Chapter: Chapter 15 - Christmas

Love the gift Harry gave Ginny. Let's hope that Lupin does know where the locket is.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/23/08 13:57
Chapter: Chapter 14 Transfiguration

Made no sense to the progress of the story. Also, McGonagall's statement to Hermione's achievements was perplexing.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/22/08 23:35
Chapter: Chapter 13 Enough

Predictable. Still wondering what Harry forgot.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/22/08 23:31
Chapter: Chapter 12 Homecoming

'Tis getting better. Now you did leave a cliffhanger that is hard to figure out, which is what Harry forgot.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/22/08 23:25
Chapter: Chapter 11 - The Mistake

I am sure we all know what the Burrow looks like now. Please, if you try to do a cliffhanger, please make it hard to figure out right away. It adds to the general appeal of the story.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/22/08 23:20
Chapter: Chapter 10 - The Fight

'Twas okay. The previous chapter was better. Let's hope this row ends up somewhere.

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/22/08 23:15
Chapter: Chapter Nine Letters and Surprises

Nice surprising twist to the story. I mean, how many people would make Dobby's mother be Hokey? Not many. This story is becoming more interesting, keep it up. It might come to something afterall

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/22/08 23:07
Chapter: Chapter 8 - The Order of the Phoenix

Nixe twist with Dumbledore telling the Order aboit the Horcuxes. It is getting a bit better. (I know you may think that I am really harsh, but trust me, these thungs that I am pointing out will only make you a better writer.)

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/22/08 0:03
Chapter: Chapter Seven - Diagon Alley

Keep working on correcting typos and grammatical errors.

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