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Name: alyssa_S (Signed) · Date: 06/02/08 1:25 · For: Chapter 25
I can't wait for more. You are a very good writer. you've got me hooked

Name: hermione-freak (Signed) · Date: 03/23/08 14:55 · For: Chapter 25
Bet that a battle is coming, I hope that it is a good one. Keep watching out for those typos.

Name: hermione-freak (Signed) · Date: 03/23/08 14:49 · For: Chapter 24
'Twas okay, 'tis getting boring again.

Name: hermione-freak (Signed) · Date: 03/23/08 14:44 · For: Chapter 23
Nice, they have destroyed one of the last remaing Horcruxes.

Name: hermione-freak (Signed) · Date: 03/23/08 14:39 · For: Chapter 22
'Twas okay, hopefully the locket is at the end of this journey.

Name: hermione-freak (Signed) · Date: 03/23/08 14:33 · For: Chapter 21 Stonehenge
Okay, getting interesting again. Watch for typos.

Name: hermione-freak (Signed) · Date: 03/23/08 14:27 · For: Chapter 20 - With a little help from Dobby
Turning interesting again. Watchout for typos and spelling mistakes.

Name: hermione-freak (Signed) · Date: 03/23/08 14:18 · For: Chapter 19 - Motivation
Well, at least we sort of know where the cup is.

Name: hermione-freak (Signed) · Date: 03/23/08 14:14 · For: Chapter 18 - Potions
OK, it has tipped to the boring side of the scale again. At least there are no spelling or grammatical mistakes in the past few chapters (including this one).

Name: hermione-freak (Signed) · Date: 03/23/08 14:09 · For: Chapter 17 - The Vault
'Twas okay, although the last paragraph does not fit in that well with the rest of the chapter.

Name: hermione-freak (Signed) · Date: 03/23/08 14:05 · For: Chapter 16 - The Locket
Hmmm, wonder what happens now? 'Tis getting interesting again.

Name: hermione-freak (Signed) · Date: 03/23/08 14:01 · For: Chapter 15 - Christmas
Love the gift Harry gave Ginny. Let's hope that Lupin does know where the locket is.

Name: hermione-freak (Signed) · Date: 03/23/08 13:57 · For: Chapter 14 Transfiguration
Made no sense to the progress of the story. Also, McGonagall's statement to Hermione's achievements was perplexing.

Name: hermione-freak (Signed) · Date: 03/22/08 23:35 · For: Chapter 13 Enough
Predictable. Still wondering what Harry forgot.

Name: hermione-freak (Signed) · Date: 03/22/08 23:31 · For: Chapter 12 Homecoming
'Tis getting better. Now you did leave a cliffhanger that is hard to figure out, which is what Harry forgot.

Name: hermione-freak (Signed) · Date: 03/22/08 23:25 · For: Chapter 11 - The Mistake
I am sure we all know what the Burrow looks like now. Please, if you try to do a cliffhanger, please make it hard to figure out right away. It adds to the general appeal of the story.

Name: hermione-freak (Signed) · Date: 03/22/08 23:20 · For: Chapter 10 - The Fight
'Twas okay. The previous chapter was better. Let's hope this row ends up somewhere.

Name: hermione-freak (Signed) · Date: 03/22/08 23:15 · For: Chapter Nine Letters and Surprises
Nice surprising twist to the story. I mean, how many people would make Dobby's mother be Hokey? Not many. This story is becoming more interesting, keep it up. It might come to something afterall

Name: hermione-freak (Signed) · Date: 03/22/08 23:07 · For: Chapter 8 - The Order of the Phoenix
Nixe twist with Dumbledore telling the Order aboit the Horcuxes. It is getting a bit better. (I know you may think that I am really harsh, but trust me, these thungs that I am pointing out will only make you a better writer.)

Name: hermione-freak (Signed) · Date: 03/22/08 0:03 · For: Chapter Seven - Diagon Alley
Keep working on correcting typos and grammatical errors.

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