Reviewer: Marauder4Life
Date: 12/01/07 19:24
Chapter: Waiting, Waiting, Waiting

Okay. That was really good! Have you considered making it a long story, you know? It would be really good!

Reviewer: hollyberries
Date: 02/25/07 20:19
Chapter: Waiting, Waiting, Waiting

i think that was a pretty good story. i really felt how harry felt for a minute there. good job :)

Reviewer: angel_rose
Date: 09/26/06 20:58
Chapter: Waiting, Waiting, Waiting

sry that i was kinda harsh in my last review. This is an ahmazing one-shot. You have a wonderful talent for capturing the character's sadness and confusion in one shot. And your use of words is ahmazing As was your use of words to describe people e.g. - "Dumbeldore was the heart of the school" I also liked your "flashbacks" brief, simple, to the point, yet you have enough information in them to get through what you really mean. Great story. I give it a 4 ( 10/10 )

Reviewer: angel_rose
Date: 09/26/06 20:52
Chapter: Waiting, Waiting, Waiting

ummmmm........ok.......that's kind of they way i feel. People have destoryed poor harry's childhood and yet they expect him to save them........future: death, yup, I think that way too......Good story. I really like the ending

Reviewer: Tinka Blinka
Date: 08/07/06 22:31
Chapter: Waiting, Waiting, Waiting

it's good, iis it a one shot fic? because it would be awesome if you wrote more!

Author's Response: Thanks Tinka Blinka for reviewing! Unfortunately, it is just a one shot. It was never meant to be more than that, sorry. However, if I ever find the time to write some other fics then you might want to read those. Just keep your fingers crossed. :-) luv, LiliRose.

Reviewer: lovelessdove
Date: 04/18/06 8:36
Chapter: Waiting, Waiting, Waiting

here's my review to thank you for reviewing my story. A really great story that expresses Harry's confusion and greif at the same time. Great job!!! 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Exactly what I have wanted to express. :-) It feels so good to get reviews, I have to say it again and again. lol

Reviewer: lucy3742
Date: 04/17/06 16:19
Chapter: Waiting, Waiting, Waiting

Nice story! I like how you showed Harry's confusion with the whole situtation. It was very honest. Good work!

Author's Response: Thanks! He is indeed confused, isn't he? a lot of people told me he is too confused, too deperate, but I think he really feels that way.

Reviewer: MadeOfHonor
Date: 02/19/06 11:20
Chapter: Waiting, Waiting, Waiting

Wow, that's the first thought that comes to mind. This is so mind blowing, and so heart-wrenching! I was so emotional throughout the whole thing! I literally had tears in my eyes by the time you got to describing Dumbledore. I loved how you called him the "heart of the school." Absolutely brilliant. I came to this story expecting a good read, but I was corrected: This was an amazing read, and I'm going back to read it again! This must have been so draining to write, because I can tell that you put a lot of yourself into this piece. Some of the reviewers said this was too sad, but I think you're right, Harry is a sad person. And most of the things that have happened in his life were sad, so obviously this needed to be heart-wrenching. And you did that so well without making it cheesy or boring. Bravo, and again, wow....(This is Amanda, for some reason my other sn wouldn't work!)

Author's Response: The tears are in my eyes now. I wrote this fanfic on a summer day, it was nearly the end of summer I think and I just had this feeling Harry had and I thought somehow that I should get this written. Thank you so much! You donīt know what it means to me, especially because I am neither English nor American but German. Itīs one of the things I enjoy most: writing in english and I sometimes feel so ...lost about that. If you really want to write and then thereīs some vocabulary you donīt know, thatīs just frustrating! By the way, the is a lot of myself in it - itīs my feeling and I put it into Harry and it feels so great that you like it! Thanks again! P.S.: My beta liked the bit about "the heart of the school", too. :-)

Reviewer: Lurid
Date: 11/05/05 22:25
Chapter: Waiting, Waiting, Waiting

*Pushes little blue button 'review'* Well, i read your reviews on Collision (another favourite) This is awesome! It's like I can feel Harry's emotions, and what he feels in the story is exactly what was goign through my mind at the end of HBP, the last word Being Hermione... it just seemed everything was made up in his mind, all the choices he was considering had point-blank been chosen for him, there was no way he was goign down the other road, nor considering the other option. Dumbles being dead i think changed him inside, just on the last page when he said "I dont think I'd be coming back," made me see how he changed as a person, and reading this one-shot really continues on from that, excentuating the point. So, congratulations! =-) I find it really hard writing without dialogue, so well done! If your not busy, I also have a story that Amanda enjoys! Toodles! (PS- your beta is cool, she uses Toodles.. and i thought i was strange... *sucks on cheese cube*) ~Steph*

Author's Response: oh thanks! *hugs* Really, it was so nice you reviewed, I enjoy reading reviews so much... well, who doesnīt, he? lol I luv to write dialogues so much, but this one-shot didnīt need any dialogues so I think i have to write another fanfic to finally write a dialogue! :-) Itīs so great that you felt what I wanted to express, because this is always the best to hear when you wrote a story, isnīt it? Hei, the last word is indeed Hermione... youīre so right... still, I ship R/Hr, because it is so obvious. lol Anyway, I would like to go on writing on a new fanfic, I am in a very potterish mood just now (just came back from London to see the premiere)... unfortunately I donīt have time... Okay, so whatīs the story called you enjoyed? Iīd really like to read it! Thanx again and sleep tight, luv always, LiliRose. xxx :-)

Reviewer: Kimberley
Date: 10/18/05 14:12
Chapter: Waiting, Waiting, Waiting

Dun-dun-da-dah!! Tis your lovely beta, here to review at last. :P Looks like other ppl are liking it, which is great! Hope that more review, because of course that's one of the most satisfying things about writing, is having someone else read what you come up with and telling that they actually like it. *smiles* Top job, of course, m'dear. Toodles,

~Kim

Author's Response: Yay Yay Yay! U did it! *dances like a maniac* Thanx a lot, my awesome beta! *hugs* It is indeed very satisfying to read reviews, I look out for new ones every day, but unfortunately ... *wink wink to whoever (...Padma...) hasnīt reviewed yet* Aah, it is indeed so great, that i will probably post a new fanfic just because of the reviews...lol By the way, you must be really happy, he? How many reviews did u get for april rain..must be millions. :-) luv always, LiliRose. xxx :-)

Reviewer: PhoenixCGandAC
Date: 10/03/05 18:55
Chapter: Waiting, Waiting, Waiting

Wow! That was an amazing One Shot! You have an amazing style of writing! You're descriptions cut me to my very core and I could feel the pain coursing through Harry's body! It's overwhelming! And we get quite a bit of your feelings towards what's going to happen in Harry's seventh year, which I think is awesome! I love getting different views for what people think is going to happen! All I can say is I think Harry just has to be SO confused right now and you portrayed those emotions to the letter! Well done! A 10 for sure! Keep up the awesome writing! There were a few gramatical errors I spotted whilst reading this, (But I'm an English freak and spot the tiniest errors so don't mind me :) ) but it was very well orginized for the most part! And to answer you're question, yes. I ment to write that in the email I sent you, there are two people on this account. Although, Love is Pain was just written by Caitlyn. We both combined our writing to create our other story, Hidden Worlds and Forgotten Secrets. Luv ya! ~Caitlyn

Author's Response: Omg, thank you sooooo much, Caitlyn! If you knew how happy I am right now... It is so nice to read reviews and to read what people think about my fanfic. Therefore I am also very happy that you told me about the grammatical errors, because I really wanna learn and improve. To be honest, i was kind of unsure to post my first fanfic, because I am not a native english speaker, but fortunately I found the best beta ever (~Kim!) so I could finally post it! Omg, amazing style of writing lol. I wouldnīt go that far! I sometimes have those very weird moments when I think I just HAVE to write. And it really drives me crazy when I think of a word and I dunno what it is in english (argh!). However, I think I will write another fanfic soon, actually I already started. Itīs a story that I was thinking of for quite a long time and that just doesnīt wanna leave my mind anymore. Itīs a Draco/other character fanfic. I know, i know, there are loads of stories about Draco, but i suppose itīs because there are also loads of people who are convinced that there is a tiny bit of love inside his heart (tiny tiny?). Well, I think you know what i mean. Okay, as you can see I love to answer reviews. :-) I wrote an answer to your review before at school this morning, but after trying to post it, it was just gone! That is really annoying. However, here it is (taadaaa!) the longest answer to a review so far! Thanx again for reviewing Caitlyn, I look forward to reading your and your friends new fanfic (I hope itīs a luv-fanfic, i luvīem! lol ) luv always, LiliRose. xxx :-)

Reviewer: Hermy
Date: 10/02/05 4:47
Chapter: Waiting, Waiting, Waiting

hi! nice start, though i have to agree with iluvserferboys, it is a bit sad. Though Harry's sad. >.> oh well. Tis good, post soon! (ps. Its Nymphadora ;))

Author's Response: Oh thanx Nymphadora/Hermy! Yes, Harry is supposed to be sad in my fanfic, thatīs what itīs all about (thatīs the twist!) lol. I just had a very weird moment when I wrote that and I kind of like how it came out... hm, anyway, thanks again for reiviewing! See you in the chatroom, Nymphadora! :-) xoxoxo

Reviewer: iluvserferboys
Date: 10/02/05 4:33
Chapter: Waiting, Waiting, Waiting

wow!! this was soo good :) i recomend all u peeps to read it ! i dont think u could improve it but u could make it a little happier? just a thought :) well done! iluvserferboys

Author's Response: Thank u sooo very very much! U are my first review! I like that tiny bit of sadness (tiny... haha). However, I hope my next fanfic will be happier, though. Thanx again! :-)

Reviewer: iluvserferboys
Date: 10/02/05 4:31
Chapter: Waiting, Waiting, Waiting

wow!! this was soo good :) i recomend all u peeps to read it ! i dont think u could improve it but u could make it a little happier? just a thought :) well done! iluvserferboys

Author's Response: okay, and the same review again! lol But I wanna answer every review, so I will even answer this one. :-) Thanx again!

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