Reviews For A Silent Wish
Reviewer: Hokey
Date: 02/09/06 15:59
Chapter: At a Glance

Eeek, this was good! I think you wrote the whole atmosphere of a nightclub really well, as well as Hermione's behaviour in one. Is the mystery man a character we know, or someone new? I want to know! Please update soon!

Reviewer: fairiesandcream
Date: 12/05/05 4:16
Chapter: At a Glance

Oh my God! Kinda strange, but very cool. I wanna know who this guy is! I cracked up laughing picturing Harry and Ron breakdancing. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: slipstick
Date: 12/02/05 23:36
Chapter: At a Glance

I agree with most, it's reasonable for them to have a night out. Assuming they really are in the club described they’re all behaving the way each should to the situation. As for the mystery man, the Hispanics near the Texas-Mexico boarder believe that the Devil visits night clubs on Halloween and such times and dances with the most beautiful, most hard-to-get girl in the club. My money’s on an out-of-town vistor.

Reviewer: Prefect1991
Date: 11/29/05 17:04
Chapter: At a Glance

I could also Ron trying to break dance. That would sure be a sight! I wonder who the mystery guy is? I have a hunch, but I'm not really sure. Please update soon!

Reviewer: dumbledorerules5
Date: 11/26/05 23:28
Chapter: At a Glance

Very very good. I mean, it might not seem like hermoine but if you're always uptight and nervous some time you just got to loosen up and make do with what you've got. I love it, you left all the right clues to guessing who the mystery guy is..

Reviewer: winky123
Date: 11/25/05 21:53
Chapter: At a Glance

I think you did a great job with this chapter. Despite the odd surroundings of a night club..It is still believeable ..I mean why wouldn't they have a night out? Hermione was still IC you described her as hesitant and logical. Harry and Ron Breakdancing was really quite funny I could just picture poor Ron trying to do it as well as Harry. As for the scene with Hermione's 'mystery' partner I think you had excellent description of not only what was going on but also of Hermione's feelings towards this man. I also believe you left just enough clues for us to determine who this mystery man is, as I think I know who it is :) and I for one can't wait to see whats coming in the next chapter.

Reviewer: rileyowen
Date: 10/10/05 10:03
Chapter: At a Glance

This is so good! I need to know who da mystery guy is or i shall kill myself. Not. Great job!!!!

Reviewer: gryfindordude
Date: 10/04/05 16:32
Chapter: At a Glance

it was not really good its just doesn't seem like hermione

Reviewer: ravenclawslion17
Date: 09/29/05 14:26
Chapter: At a Glance

o0o, intruiging! Who is it, who is it??? Update soon...I wanna find out who this mystery guy is...

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