It is a bit of a head scratcher in the middle-climax, but it's still a very nice piece of work nonetheless.
Hmmm...child of Ginny and Draco, am I right? Sounds good to me. I liked it, even if there were no names. I actually like the no-name thing, maybe I will try it for one of my angsty stories that are waiting in line for their turn against the monstrous queue. Good job! ten!
this was beautifully written and I really need to know who it is... i love the fact that you -just like me- wrote a dark/angsty one-shot! :-) I guess it´s Ginny and Draco´s daughter. I hope you tell me who it is (pleasepleaseplease). LiliRose. xxx :-)
Wow, you're right, that was short and slightly confusing. But I think that just adds to its impact - very beautifully written + nice use of metpahors/imagery. I wonder who the man in the casket was (or if you even know). Perhaps and older Draco? Anyway, well done. P.S. Have a shifty at my fanfic, the Battle for Hogwarts - I only got chapter1 submitted, but it gets much better, and is popular on Veritaserum.com.