Reviews For Transformations
Reviewer: Little_MIss_Weasley
Date: 06/24/06 22:04
Chapter: Aftermath

great story update quick! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I don't know when the next update will come, but I'm working on it!

Reviewer: heartsdesire456
Date: 06/22/06 22:55
Chapter: Aftermath

ohhh! it was great... im sorry, but i cant think of anything else to say... nomatter how much i read this stuff, imean, i love RL/NT fics and any remus fics in general and i'v yet to read one that doesn't have this part in it in some form or way... but nomatter if i read 1 or 1000 of them, i cry my eyes out. im lucky enough, that i have no idea what its like to loose someone... i've lost people, sure who hasn't, but no one close. so it hurts me to imagine that, even if its glorious fiction, that someone has lost so many people who were important to them... it breaks my heart. i'v even read fics TODAY! that involve this certain death, but i still cry... even after reading the chapter and typing this long review.... im still crying my bloody eyes out!

the point is, your a wonderful author! you can make me feel these emotions and before i discovered harry potter, i had never cried over something written... hell, i dont think i had ever cried for a movie either!

Author's Response: Thank you! It's a great compliment to be able to bring out emotion. I'm really glad you like it!

Reviewer: Evik
Date: 06/22/06 13:45
Chapter: Aftermath

Awwww that was so sad. I really love the way Remus and Tonks understand each other like old friends. Oh and when Remus found the pictures of the Marauders was so depressing. :(( I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I rather like the picture, but I can see how it would be depressing. Next chapter will be along in due time!

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 06/22/06 8:46
Chapter: Aftermath's so...sad. I love how Remus and Tonks are there for each other, and how everything between them seems natural. Their relationship isn't rushed or sudden, just paced. I love it! :-)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really trying not to be consistent and in-character for them. Thanks!

Reviewer: kikimodo
Date: 06/22/06 7:10
Chapter: Aftermath

i really enjoyed this chapter, thanks for updating! i love that remus and tonks are interacting more and....yes, i don't explain things well. i liked it though. anyways, i had a few comments which i'll just put in below


She was not yet back to full strength, BUT she had not tried to change her hair colour. it seemed horrible to even think about playing with her appearance. Especially when she might have been able to prevent IT.

the its and buts here end up sort of confusing. the but in the first sentence seems out of place and it's unclear as to what the second it refers to because, since it follows the remark on changing her hair so closely, it seems like you're saying she might have prevented changing her appearance (just some things i thought you should go over again)


Remus, since you were living AT there, I would like to offer you a home here at Hogwarts, at least temporarily

the at is very awkward here, i'm assuming that it's a typo and you forgot to remove it.


i hope that was more helpful than annoying, update again soon!

Author's Response: Ergh. Yes, it was helpful, and I will fix it. Thanks a lot for your comments and compliments alike!

Reviewer: moony lover
Date: 06/22/06 6:06
Chapter: Aftermath

Very well! I love this chapter. They really needed to cry a bit.

Author's Response: Thank you! I thought so, too.

Reviewer: heartsdesire456
Date: 06/18/06 22:33
Chapter: The Department of Mysteries

i have one thing to say: UPDATE SOON! this is a really good fic! i love remus/tonks fics, but noone seems to write them anymore! sure, they write one-shots, but i like longer fics really... one-shots are agrivating. i tried to write my own but... lets just say, iv got too much other stuff to focus on. still, i loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate the feedback. Actually, I just finished editing all the chapters (again) so I'm going to post those, then put up Chapter 6, with great care as to how it fits into the last ones, since that was a problem with five. The point being: there is more coming!

Reviewer: Just Beyond the Veil
Date: 06/14/06 12:31
Chapter: The Department of Mysteries

Great story! I agree with Lilacflower - you do portray the characters well. Keep updating!

Author's Response: Thanks lots! I am...more or less!

Reviewer: Loony Loopy Lupin
Date: 06/09/06 23:07
Chapter: Of Umbrella Stands and Magic Eyes

Nice, very nice!

I have to admit that when I first read "Prince" that I was a little apprehensive about Lupin and Tonks getting together...

... but for the most part I've changed that line of thought!

Er- moving along to your next chapter now. This is a great fiction and I'm looking forward to more. Loved Tonks's reaction to Mad-Eye, by the way!

Author's Response: Thank you! Changing someone's mind, or helping to change it, about a pairing is the highest compliment there is. Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: FeatherTrader
Date: 06/03/06 15:08
Chapter: Of Umbrella Stands and Magic Eyes

I like how you started it off, with the flash foward. (I guess that would be what you'd call it)
Also, I like how you kept the mood light, and you didn't have Tonks dwell on Remus being a werewolf. I can see Tonks and Sirius joking like that.
My favorite part, however, had to have been, "Tonks made a face. “Please, not Nymmie. I haven’t been called that since I was nine. Not Nymphadora, either,” she added hastily as Sirius opened his mouth again." This not only a humourous quote, but it gives us some kind of relation to how long they haven't seen eachother for.
I'm glad Remus finally did some talking, he seems to be opening up to Tonks more.
Keep up the wonderful writing

Author's Response: Thank you! Thoughful reviews are so encouraging. They say you care enough to leave help!

Reviewer: Lilacflower
Date: 06/01/06 1:33
Chapter: The Department of Mysteries

Dang. update, girl! NOW! Overall, I think you portray the characters in this story fairly well. Very well, actually, but perhaps you might want to add a bit more book dialogue, although you're doing a great job of following the storylines. Well, TTFN!

Author's Response: Thanks for your compliments! I'm actually trying to get away from borrowing so much book dialogue. I know what you mean, though. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Lilacflower
Date: 06/01/06 0:18
Chapter: The Platypus and the Wolf

yay! brilliant chappie!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 05/31/06 20:52
Chapter: The Department of Mysteries

That adds so much to the series. You should be proud. :-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review ALL the chapters. I really appreciate it and I'm glad you like it!

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 05/31/06 20:37
Chapter: The Platypus and the Wolf

Finally--a good Remus/Tonks story. I've officially deemed it excellent. Favorites section!

Author's Response: *Beaming*

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 05/31/06 20:18
Chapter: Christmas at Grimmauld Place

So cute! I absolutly love it.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 05/31/06 20:07
Chapter: Operation Harry

I love the writing. I may fall to your bribing abilities.

Author's Response: *Clears throat* Bribery? I don't know what you're talking about. *runs*

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 05/31/06 19:55
Chapter: Of Umbrella Stands and Magic Eyes

I really love the way you portrayed Remus in this chapter--he actually got to talk! :-)
The rate you're going is excellent, tool. Lots of detail, but the story still moves along quickly. Chapter 2!

Author's Response: Thanks lots! I love getting reviews for old chapters. It's nice to know people are reading the whole thing!

Reviewer: Maire Potter
Date: 05/31/06 18:33
Chapter: The Department of Mysteries

Gangster!!!! I love Remus/Tonks but so many of the stories are depressing. I can understand why but still it's nice to read one that isn't. I didn't like this chapter as much as the others but it was still good.

Author's Response: Thanks! That's the general idea I'm getting here -- I think I need to check this chapter and make sure it makes sense. I like it, but I'm so close to it I can't always tell if it's all right. Thanks so much for your comments!

Reviewer: ladyofthebookworms
Date: 05/31/06 9:55
Chapter: The Department of Mysteries

It was a little, well, bumpy at times.
Really good, but it wasn't very smooth in transition.

Author's Response: Thanks! I know I've been leaping around wildly with time, so I'll definitely check that out. Thanks for your comments!

Author's Response: Okay, I think I fixed the transition. Thanks to both of you who pointed it out! I hope it's better now. Let me know!

Reviewer: kikimodo
Date: 05/31/06 9:20
Chapter: The Department of Mysteries

i don't think it flowed well from the last chapter. i, at least, was confused as to whether maybe tonks was dreaming this or, towards the end, if it was remus. i think maybe there should have been some sort of introduction explaining what was happening since it's so unconnected to what had been happening previously

Author's Response: Hmm. Okay, I'll take a look at it. I think I sort of know what you mean -- it's Remus, but it's meant to be very dreamy and not quite with the real world. I'll check it out. Thanks for your comments!

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