Nice job, very good stand alone. Tonks seems a little out of character, but I think that was what you were goind for, which I like.
Great Job!!Now how about a sequeal?:)
Very nicely done. I particularly love the paragraph where Tonks defines each of their “pegs”. I think you, like she, has them pegged very appropriately. It is Remus’ world that is rough and jagged in contrast to him. Very insightful. One little thing, you misspelled Greyback. Otherwise, good job. I enjoyed it.