Reviewer: Hermionebubblez
Date: 03/06/05 8:40
Chapter: A Merry Christmas Afterall

great stroy. wats the sequel called i wanna read it badly now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: The Mafia
Date: 01/26/05 14:35
Chapter: A Merry Christmas Afterall

great story but quick ending!

Reviewer: parselmouthprincess
Date: 01/14/05 18:21
Chapter: I'm Sorry Ron

This is a beautiful story, though I agree that the ending was rushed a little. I liked how you changed character scenes. You kept true to how they speak in the books, but didn't copy a bunch of phrases. Can't wait to see more! You're good, keep it coming!

Reviewer: I_LUV_HARRY
Date: 12/30/04 13:25
Chapter: A Merry Christmas Afterall


Reviewer: I_LUV_HARRY
Date: 12/30/04 13:24
Chapter: I'm Sorry Ron


Reviewer: ThaHalfBloodPrincess
Date: 12/29/04 23:56
Chapter: A Merry Christmas Afterall

I usually dont read these kinds was ok I mean it was pretty well written but the eneding was rushed you should of at least done a scene where they opend their presents but it was pretty good. Will be looking for the sequal!

Reviewer: muggled
Date: 12/27/04 2:05
Chapter: A Merry Christmas Afterall

nice story.. but i hope that hermoine will end up with ron instead of ginny in your sequel.. can't wait 4 the sequel :)

Reviewer: Banjo Man
Date: 12/18/04 20:02
Chapter: A Merry Christmas Afterall

I don't normally read this type of story, But I thought it was really good, though the ending was really rushed... And the ginny/hermione thing didn't seem likely, But still great Writing!!!

Reviewer: Beci
Date: 12/17/04 11:01
Chapter: A Merry Christmas Afterall

You rushed the end a bit. Still pretty good though.

Reviewer: Makenna Prongs
Date: 12/16/04 17:13
Chapter: A Merry Christmas Afterall

I wish there was more but.....I cn wait for the sequel awesome=10.....Merry Christmas lostunicorn!

Reviewer: diva8385
Date: 12/15/04 21:05
Chapter: A Merry Christmas Afterall

The ending could have been much better!!! I do look foward for the sequel though!

Reviewer: Bella
Date: 12/15/04 15:36
Chapter: A Merry Christmas Afterall

Very good. So sweet. I'm glad it worked out between Ron and Hermione. :)

Reviewer: Moon
Date: 12/14/04 19:08
Chapter: A Merry Christmas Afterall

I like the story, but the ending was not what i expcted, but i still will make sure to look for the sequal =)

Reviewer: Jules
Date: 12/14/04 18:18
Chapter: A Merry Christmas Afterall

I hate the ending. ): Cheeeesy. Can't wait for the sequel! (:

Reviewer: PotterAddict17
Date: 12/14/04 17:15
Chapter: A Merry Christmas Afterall

meh it was ok i didn't really like the ending

Reviewer: Sparks
Date: 12/13/04 21:38
Chapter: The Cats Are Out of the Closet

Liking the story so far... in this chapter, Ron says he's really "pissed." I think in Britain, the word "pissed" means drunk, instead of angry.

Author's Response: Thanks for posting that. I forgot about that bit of British slang!

Reviewer: Hermione2008
Date: 12/13/04 21:37
Chapter: A Merry Christmas Afterall

It was a great story and i can't wait for the sequal

Reviewer: Bella
Date: 12/13/04 16:00
Chapter: The Cats Are Out of the Closet

Very good

Reviewer: mudblood79
Date: 12/13/04 12:00
Chapter: The Cats Are Out of the Closet

you know, I don't even know why I'm reading this, but your doing a really good job. Please keep up the great work.

Reviewer: Hermione2008
Date: 12/12/04 14:30
Chapter: The Cats Are Out of the Closet

it's really good update soon

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