Sweet, in a low-key sort of way. I'm not sure Ron would behave this calmly and sensitively, but we can always hope, can't we? In any case, I liked the framing device of the swing and the Engorgement Charm was a clever touch. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Lol, we sure can hope! Thanks for reading!
okay maybe a little more than some fluffiness.
Author's Response: I looooove fluffy stories, so you'll have to bear with me! ;)
I can't believe more people haven't reviewed. I thought your story was excellent. The writing was incredible! Great description and and easy to follow storyline. I love stories with a point, but some fluffiness. The only thing I question is that Ron doesn't strike me as being so sensitive and wise...but hey, that's me. A job well done! Give yourself a chocolate frog!
Author's Response: Aw thanks! Yeah and Ron, well, lets just assume he gained some sense before this happened. :)
Definitely 5 stars! This story was well written, and I really enjoyed it. I only have one suggestion. The first sentence would flow more smoothly if you changed it around to read - A small wooden swing hung from a branch of an old, burly oak tree. This tree... Just my opinion. Please don't be offended.
Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion! And no, I'm not offended! I need all the critisicm I can get! ;) Thanks for the review!
I loved it! Very..fluffy! It was just awesome! I would give it 4 and half stars out of 5!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks hun.
Cute. Fluffy, yes, but a fairly good idea of what might be going through their heads. The Engorgment Charm is rather fun, too.
Author's Response: Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing this one!