aww, I especially like the ending with Molly Weasley. Very well done.
wow! very good. Especialy if it's your first romance fan fic.
beautiful story for a fist romance fic, it was really great. Keep up the great writing!
hey i loved ur fic even though it was preHBP!!! keep up the good work!!
Loved it, loved it, loved it, loved it. XXXXXXXXXXX 10/10
It's been a while, eh? Hope you still remember me, lol. I'm the girl who aspired to write great stories like you. A lot's changed, I got four more fanfics on! I'd like it if you reviewed them! Thanks a million!
so sweet. perfect
so sweet. perfect
Awww...this is such a cute fic! It was'nt too long, or too short and it wasn't too angsty or whatever! great job!! 10/10!
Hey! I finally got my fanfic on! It's called 'Because You Live' and it's really, really sweet! I do hope you like it and can you review since I reviewed for you? Thanks! P.S. I think you'll like who I dedicated it to...
Um...Hi. Me again. I forgot to say that I got my friends to read your story, and they say it's the best on MuggleNet, too. So, I'm trying really really hard to submit my own stories. I've submitted 2, but they didn't get in. I submitted another, and I'm waiting to see if it gets on. So, if it does, would you read it for me? A great fanfic writer like yourself could evaluate my story. Please could you? Great story!
Author's Response: I'd be honored to evaluate your story! Just email me. And I'm delighted that your friends praise my story as well!
I absolutly LOVED this story. J.K should really use that. It's the best story on MuggleNet in my opinion. If I could rate higher than a ten, I would, but unforunately, I can't so I give this story a ten!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I'm so pleased you think my story is that worthy! Thanks for the review!
Very touching story! I thought I could actually feel what they felt, while reading it.
The reference to little Ronnie falling from the swing is so lovely!
Hermione was very much in character. As for Ron, well, he's usually not that calm and wise, but I reckon that these would be his thoughts after learning about the prophecy.
“That must be a first: a charm by Hermione went wrong!” Ron said in attempt to lighten the situation.: Very well-said. It's good that you actually included this comment, or else it would seem weird for Hermione to fail to a 'simple' spell.
However, this And they walked hand in hand, back to the Burrow. was a little sudden. You could have described more how the got up and started walking etc.
Overall, a really sweet story! =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Great short fic! I love how it starts and ends! Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you!
awwwwww *sniff sniff* so sweet. i loved it!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review! :)
It was so sweet!!! I realy liked it!
Author's Response: Aw thanks! :)
That was so cute. I wish it wasn't completed!
Author's Response: Thanks! And sorry, it had to end there. Hopefully JKR will pick up the story from there! Thanks for the review!
That's seriously cute - I'm a R/Hr shipper! this fanfic definitly deserves a 10/10!!
Author's Response: Thank you! R/Hr are sooo going to happen! They must! :)
wow. all i can say is wow. that was a great read! one of the best ive ever read! well done, keep writing! :D
Author's Response: *blushes* aw, thanks! Thanks for the review!
Awwww....... That was so sweet! Fluffy and cute. 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks, you're such a sweetie! :)