Reviews For The Swing
Reviewer: susa_hp
Date: 02/19/07 18:52
Chapter: The Swing

Iloved it. But I still don't know what a swing is :S Sorry I'm a spanish speaker and my diccionary sucks.

Author's Response: Thank you! A swing is...well. I don't know exactly how to describe it. It is a outdoor toy for little kids. Here is a link to a picture of one. http://project1.caryacademy.org/echoes/03-04/John_Berryman/images/Swing%20off%20tree%20-%20web.jpg

Reviewer: bubble
Date: 02/10/07 22:45
Chapter: The Swing

WONDERFUL!!!!

Reviewer: Madame Marauder
Date: 02/01/07 19:25
Chapter: The Swing

This story, I believe, really shows what R/Hr can be. Often times, authors mischaracterize even this firmly canon couple, making Ron an afraid, clumsy, goofball and Hermione a brave, witty, intelligent girl. Ron may not be a macho-macho man, but he is so fiercely loyal to both Hermione and Harry, that he is willing to fight for them. And he will mature, eventually. Already, in Half-Blood Prince, we see him hold Hermione as she cries. This is the side of Ron you so eloquently displayed. And for that, I, as a reader, am glad. I also like how you kept Hermione intelligent, but showed her sensitivity. She is caring and perceptive to other’s feelings and worries. Often, she takes them on herself as her own burden (ie SPEW). I really liked how you showed her doing this with Harry and with Ron.

Not only do I think you kept them both in-character, I believe you also showed sides of Ron and Hermione’s relationship that many people ignore. You showed that their relationship is based on a deep friendship, not physical attraction or any other superficial falsity. They’re conversation is like one that any two friends could have, with a slight sprinkle of something more. I’m glad you kept things in moderation. Since we’ve seen Ron and Lavender snogging, it seems many people forget that that wasn’t what Ron was really looking for. This was a thoroughly enjoyable read.

Reviewer: Nutters4Potter
Date: 01/27/07 14:29
Chapter: The Swing

Sweet. I liked your story.

Reviewer: dancergirl117
Date: 10/24/06 19:14
Chapter: The Swing

that was great!! soo sweet!!

Reviewer: hermy_luvs_ron
Date: 10/07/06 21:22
Chapter: The Swing

I loved your story, it was absolutely adorable! What a cute way for Ron and Hermione to finally come together.

Reviewer: marchwar12
Date: 08/21/06 7:46
Chapter: The Swing

Oh my goodness! I've read this story a few times, and each time it gets better! Great work!

Reviewer: marchwar12
Date: 08/21/06 7:42
Chapter: The Swing

Oh my goodness! I've read this story a few times, and each time it gets better! Great work!

Reviewer: pottylover
Date: 08/13/06 10:43
Chapter: The Swing

hey that was a very good story and it was worth reading!!! Keep writing it was very enjoyable. Do you think you would write a R/Hg H/G story?

Reviewer: Siriuslyinluvwithharry
Date: 08/10/06 9:56
Chapter: The Swing

aww...very very cutee! i loved it!

Reviewer: Auror81692
Date: 08/09/06 8:40
Chapter: The Swing

Dude, I have said it before, and I will say it again: this is the best one-shot on mugglenet. but i submitted a new Ron/Hermione story i'd love for you to read, and im working on my first harry/ ginny.

Reviewer: ginny91
Date: 08/02/06 12:19
Chapter: The Swing

this is a great story. so cute.

Reviewer: inthewrongera
Date: 08/01/06 17:35
Chapter: The Swing

I thought Ron was a little OOC, but other than that I thought it was very beautifully written! Definitely one of my favourites!

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 08/01/06 13:13
Chapter: The Swing

Awww!

Reviewer: Liadian Weasley
Date: 08/01/06 11:05
Chapter: The Swing

awww, so sweet,very good job

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 07/17/06 23:47
Chapter: The Swing

Nice story...nicely written nice story...nice job...

TOMROHT

Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 07/14/06 20:32
Chapter: The Swing

Oh good job! I really enjoyed this. You write really well, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. I love tender little moments between R/H or H/G, and you made this romantic without being sappy. The serious aspects of their friendship come through and that pulls it all together. Their love has real basis, its not a stupid lust-fest. Keep writting. Pax.

Reviewer: Phoebe Gruzelier
Date: 06/02/06 9:18
Chapter: The Swing

Sweet...cute...fluffy...everything a R/H story should be!
I am an avid Ron/Hermione fan, and to me, this story was perfect! I liked the beginning because it gave a little introduction to the story. I love the charm on the swing!
Personally, I think that Ron can be sensitive when he wants to be, especially when he's just with Hermione.
It's great, keep it up!

Reviewer: emgirl1904
Date: 05/28/06 23:48
Chapter: The Swing

awww... that is so cute! i loved it!

Reviewer: fanficgril
Date: 05/23/06 15:34
Chapter: The Swing

Fantastic,write another!

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