Reviewer: Ravenclaw Writer
Date: 11/01/06 17:48
Chapter: Postlude: 2 November 1981; Reflections

Wow! This is one of those stories that I couldn't stop reading! I love it! I'm speechless....I just don't have the words to say how much I enjoyed this!

Reviewer: michieceramic
Date: 07/06/06 11:57
Chapter: Postlude: 2 November 1981; Reflections

It's okay.

Reviewer: lordelvaren
Date: 12/15/05 23:06
Chapter: Chapter 7: 24-31 October 1981; Friends, Lovers, Betrayers and Murderers

This story is great. Are Emperor Palpatine and Voldemort brothers? :-)

Reviewer: Evik
Date: 12/15/05 5:29
Chapter: Postlude: 2 November 1981; Reflections

Great idea for the end of the story. I liked the changes of PoV. All in all, you fan fic was excellent. ;) 10/10

Reviewer: Evik
Date: 12/13/05 10:19
Chapter: Chapter 7: 24-31 October 1981; Friends, Lovers, Betrayers and Murderers

OMG, that was brilliant. I almost cried at the end. I loved the idea with the Polyjuice, btw. I can't wait for the next chapter. 10/10

Reviewer: kittyandlulu
Date: 12/11/05 18:03
Chapter: Prelude: December 28, 1979 The Prophecy

I like your style of writing very much. it has an interesting story line so far and I am eger to read much more! Great Job!

Reviewer: notabanana
Date: 11/30/05 16:17
Chapter: Chapter Five: May 1981; Creatures of the Night

*sniff* *sniff* You need more light-hearted moments, even if this is a war. Aside from that your story is as spiffy as ever (hehe...spiffy)!!!!

Author's Response: This story was intended to be dark and it was very much influenced by Revenge of the Sith. I really wanted that forboding feel to it. Thanks to all the flashbacks that JKR has put in the books so far, it is a bridge that leads to the beginning of Chapter One in TSS

Reviewer: notabanana
Date: 11/30/05 16:10
Chapter: Chapter 4: January 6, 1981; The Final Solution

That makes sense as to why Dumbledore didn't trust Sirius with the Fidelius Charm. Dumbledore and Karkaroff wouldn't have greeted each other so warmly in GOF if this had all happened though.

Author's Response: I would tend to agree but you have to remember that Dumbledore always put the past behind him and felt that everyone that was on the "evil" side deserved a second chance.

Reviewer: notabanana
Date: 11/30/05 15:31
Chapter: Prelude: December 28, 1979 The Prophecy

Really like your writing style. The interview for the post of Divination Prof. seemed oddly short but I suppose you woluldn't want to drag something like that out. Great story so far!

Reviewer: Evik
Date: 11/23/05 12:19
Chapter: Chapter Five: May 1981; Creatures of the Night

I like this story very much. It's really say, though. Please keep posting:)

Reviewer: Nic Potter
Date: 11/02/05 16:05
Chapter: Chapter One: July 31, 1980; The Birth

Very nice, btw shouldn't the voice in Wormtail's head be Voldemort himself? I really liked the bit about Sirius pacing.

Reviewer: Nic Potter
Date: 10/30/05 4:34
Chapter: Prelude: December 28, 1979 The Prophecy

Interesting, very plausible - I'd like to know what is going to happen next (the story behind the books or the future) - I'm awarding it ten for the goodness of text and to encourage the Author

Reviewer: rockinfaerie
Date: 10/18/05 15:32
Chapter: Prelude: December 28, 1979 The Prophecy

Please continue - it's really good! I have even added it to my favourites, but I want to know what happens next!

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