Wow! I've got to say, that was one of the best post-pre-DH stories I've read! I hope you finish it some day, but I of course understand if you don't.
Really nice, I think I'll enjoy reading this!
I am so sorry you had to end this. It really needs more added to it. :(
interesting story. please keep adding to this.
i liked your story so far so if you can please finish it to the end
Please add more chapters. Write a sequel or something. I need to know what happens!
why the hell would you stop there?!!!! It was just beginning to get interesting?!!!!!
What do u meen LAST EDITION!!!! u cant leave us like this!!!the story isnt over yet!
PLEASE keep writting!*falls onto knees begging desperatly*
I didn't see that this was the last chapter. Please reconsider or at least continue the story.
I really enjoyed your story but i hope you will consider adding more chapters!
Ok, I have to say that from the beginning this story was very believable and that I enjoyed it for the most part. But what about the ending? It isn't really an ending! It's way too...I don't know, a lot of stuff happened and then suddenly stopped. Did you just get bored or something?
You're not writing any more? *pouts* But you didn't finish the story! *whines* Come onnnnnnn, give it another chapter. Please? What happens with Charlie?
Author's Response: The reason I am not adding more chapters is that I am not writing any more chapters. I no longer have the free time to invest in this story, and when I do have time to write I prefer to put it into my original story, which I have hopes of someday publishing. Since this story is based off of someone else's works I could never possibly publish it, and it simply became pointless. I originally intended to write an entire novel length story, but I eventually realized that with an escalating schedule and other intrests that that aspiration was both foolish and unlikely. I hope you enjoyed what I wrote, and I know that it helped me in my writing abilities. Thank you.
It is a very well written story.It is close to JK.I am waiting for the next chapter.
Very cool story, but you need to add on to it. At the end you left us hanging by having charlie say we'll talk later. Please consider adding on to it. Thanks.
Very good story! But I have to point out a couple canon errors... The first one was at the Dursley's house, where harry was thinking about "Ten-Ton Toffee", when the candy is actually "Ton-Tongue Toffee". And the second one was the scene with Fred and George in the field with Harry, when Fred said "Probably would have aced our O.W.L. last year if we hadn't left school-". Last year was Fred and George's final year at Hogwarts, so they wouldn't have taken their O.W.L.s, they would have taken their N.E.W.Ts.
Sorry about the canon criticism, I'm merely a very canon-obsessed Fan Fic author!
~ HHMuggle
Heyy I really love yur story but you havnt updated for a while!!??
Keep it up!
Very fun to read, this is!
