Good, a little short though... but i realy got into it...
It was good but a little short. I give it an 8.
it was kinda short. you should add more to it to make it more interesting.
I thought it was great. A little short, but still, great! I agree that there should have been a bit more emotion in the confession of love.
I think the story was... ok. not exactly a 10/10, more like an 8/10. I just feel that it was somewhat rushed. The confessions of love were without much emotion or reaction. It was just blurted out I think. You have the potential of being a good writer, this just didnt meet it too much.