Reviews For Because You Live
Reviewer: Sirius D Black
Date: 05/18/06 16:26
Chapter: Because You Live

Good, a little short though... but i realy got into it...

Reviewer: HPAndHG4ever
Date: 01/30/06 21:24
Chapter: Because You Live

It was good but a little short. I give it an 8.

Reviewer: redsoxfan2204
Date: 09/21/05 16:17
Chapter: Because You Live

it was kinda short. you should add more to it to make it more interesting.

Reviewer: hermione4harry
Date: 09/15/05 7:51
Chapter: Because You Live

I thought it was great. A little short, but still, great! I agree that there should have been a bit more emotion in the confession of love.

Reviewer: BiggyM
Date: 09/13/05 18:43
Chapter: Because You Live

I think the story was... ok. not exactly a 10/10, more like an 8/10. I just feel that it was somewhat rushed. The confessions of love were without much emotion or reaction. It was just blurted out I think. You have the potential of being a good writer, this just didnt meet it too much.

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