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Reviews For Because You Live

Name: Sirius D Black (Signed) · Date: 05/18/06 16:26 · For: Because You Live
Good, a little short though... but i realy got into it...

Name: HPAndHG4ever (Signed) · Date: 01/30/06 21:24 · For: Because You Live
It was good but a little short. I give it an 8.

Name: redsoxfan2204 (Signed) · Date: 09/21/05 16:17 · For: Because You Live
it was kinda short. you should add more to it to make it more interesting.

Name: hermione4harry (Signed) · Date: 09/15/05 7:51 · For: Because You Live
I thought it was great. A little short, but still, great! I agree that there should have been a bit more emotion in the confession of love.

Name: BiggyM (Signed) · Date: 09/13/05 18:43 · For: Because You Live
I think the story was... ok. not exactly a 10/10, more like an 8/10. I just feel that it was somewhat rushed. The confessions of love were without much emotion or reaction. It was just blurted out I think. You have the potential of being a good writer, this just didnt meet it too much.

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