To pick out the wood from the trees here, this is a fic of hope. On one level it's about terrible loss, but when you see the bigger picture, you see that all those people fought for a better life for everyone. Also, I liked what Harry said about finding something to be happy for despite their losses. Such a great sentiment. Well done.
This was cute, but maybe you could show Hermione and Harry a little more upset about Ron; he was their best friend! I loved it, though.
Wow, now that was awesome writing. I've improved so much since I betaed two of your chapters for Realizing. My hats off to you, and keep up the good work.
Wow, now that was awesome writing. I've improved so much since I betaed two of your chapters for Realizing. My hats off to you, and keep up the good work.
lol! i like that htis story pictured not so much romance but the relatioship of h/hr how she knows so much about him nd not so much romance like hormones. also i like though i dont want him dead how you killed ron of in this story becasue then you see how hermione and harry can lean on eachother i really liked htis story it has a great meaning and moral to it. god job!
this is a good fic, even though i hate jesse mccartney
that was so cute and i like the song u picked one of my favs
am i going to get another chapter out of you or not? i hope i do it was great.
it was good but i now you can do better its the way you write i can tell you have talant you just have to put all your emotions in to your writing. and then you will have your stories made in ot books.
please up date because it cant be over can it?
WOW grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr8!!!!!!!!!!! u r very gd at writtin!!!!keep it up!!!
Nice. But what's with reviewing is good for the soul?
Nice. But what's with reviewing is good for the soul?
wow. That was a beautiful story and I am so glad that I read it and I hope to see more of your work.
I said it once and I'll say it again...you have a really good knack for H/Hr. I loved this story, keep it up.
You know a really good song, that's better than Jesse McCartney. 'Halleluyah' by Jeff Buckley. Now there's a guy with an amazing voice. He died tragically young. Now you could write an incredible fan fiction using that song!
A life without evil....that's a bold statement. Surely the path ahead of him is darker than it has ever been or is this a metaphorical statement about how love can protect you from evil. Maybe Harry should tell that to the Longbottoms, to Neville. I personally don't think being in love means you're protecting yourself from darkness and evil and heartbreak, if anything you're openning yourself up to it more because now Harry has someone to protect, to care for. I suppose the most loving thing you can say is I know I'm going to face evil and hurt and all that stuff but I'm still willing to go through it with you.
Oh and Jesse McCartney......please!
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