BOOOOO DUMBLEDORE!!! How dare he not believe Harry!?! I love how it started with the Dursleys, then to the Potters, and then ended with Hogwarts again. Very cool idea, and well written.
That was so sad but so good at the same time. i wish his parents were really there!!!
Wow, this is incredibly well written. I loved the way you took the theme of something being just a dream and "de-cliched" it by using it twice. Your story is beautifully written, the description just right, not too much, not too little. You also did a wonderful job of writing the dream in language that feels dreamy. I had a sneaking suspiscion that he was dreaming because of the wonderful language you used. My favorite part was when he was waking up and the dream world was falling apart. You wrote that really well. Finally, the last line hits really hard and is very effective.
I'd really love to critique it, but I can't find anything to say. Great job!
Congratulations,
Katja
this is reall good u should think about a sequel or something
Ohh that was very good stroy I love your creativity. I have never read anything like it before. Good job.
Oh that was so sad! You are an amazing writer! I loved this story even though it made me want to cry
oh my god, thats so sad. that he never got to tell his father that he loved him, evne though it was fake, it was his last chance. very good! ~Sara
This was wicked awsome. It was so realistic, I didn't know it was a dream.
Oh my! That was another absolutely amazing story from you! I love it! Keep up the amazing writing, and hope to see more stories soon! :)
Great!! I've often thought of how his life might be without all the horror. A very well-written piece!
Very good, very heartbreaking. One of the better organized fics i've read so far. excellent. Oh, but wouldn't that life just be wonderful? *sigh*, back to Harry's real, dilemma-filled life!
This was very strongly written. I normally murder "and it was all a dream...." fic writers, but you wrote it in such a way tht it didnt matter. Tres bon.
So beautiful, so sad, so good...(snif) Thank you :)
hmm....if only u could drag on with that happy part for a bit longer...say 30 more chapters i'd be satisfied =) Very well written. nice job.
*sniff... wipes tear* I just want to give harry a big hug and tell him it'll all be ok... That was a really sad story.. happy... but sad... excellent job
It's cool. I would be better if it was longer than one chapter. Much better.
THIS STORY RULES!!!!!
Author's Response: You know, I couldn't help but notice that you put the exact same review for both my stories. Right down to the number of exclamation points. Interesting. Thank you for your enthusiasm, I found it extremely amusing. However.... I'm wondering if you do the same thing for every story you read. ;)
Aww, bless. This is amazing - really great. Almost made me cry, which is something. Hope you write more.
