Reviewer: ThatHPFan
Date: 04/29/12 22:49
Chapter: One

BOOOOO DUMBLEDORE!!! How dare he not believe Harry!?! I love how it started with the Dursleys, then to the Potters, and then ended with Hogwarts again. Very cool idea, and well written.

Reviewer: nelle42693
Date: 06/13/07 21:09
Chapter: One

That was so sad but so good at the same time. i wish his parents were really there!!!

Reviewer: Skulblaka
Date: 05/07/07 15:28
Chapter: One

Wow, this is incredibly well written. I loved the way you took the theme of something being just a dream and "de-cliched" it by using it twice. Your story is beautifully written, the description just right, not too much, not too little. You also did a wonderful job of writing the dream in language that feels dreamy. I had a sneaking suspiscion that he was dreaming because of the wonderful language you used. My favorite part was when he was waking up and the dream world was falling apart. You wrote that really well. Finally, the last line hits really hard and is very effective.

I'd really love to critique it, but I can't find anything to say. Great job!

Congratulations,
Katja

Reviewer: Curious77
Date: 04/22/07 3:59
Chapter: One

that was beautiful, its so sad.
poor harry!

Reviewer: Curious77
Date: 04/22/07 3:59
Chapter: One

that was beautiful, its so sad.
poor harry!

Reviewer: rupertgrintlover13
Date: 07/31/06 17:01
Chapter: One

this is reall good u should think about a sequel or something

Reviewer: better_than_broadway
Date: 07/08/06 23:03
Chapter: One

Ohh that was very good stroy I love your creativity. I have never read anything like it before. Good job.

Reviewer: Kat_the_bookworm
Date: 06/03/06 19:11
Chapter: One

Oh that was so sad! You are an amazing writer! I loved this story even though it made me want to cry

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 01/27/06 22:41
Chapter: One

oh my god, thats so sad. that he never got to tell his father that he loved him, evne though it was fake, it was his last chance. very good! ~Sara

Reviewer: stareyed_in_LA
Date: 06/14/05 23:08
Chapter: One

This was wicked awsome. It was so realistic, I didn't know it was a dream.

Reviewer: Lainie xox
Date: 06/02/05 16:37
Chapter: One

Oh my! That was another absolutely amazing story from you! I love it! Keep up the amazing writing, and hope to see more stories soon! :)

Reviewer: dragondance
Date: 03/05/05 1:27
Chapter: One

Great!! I've often thought of how his life might be without all the horror. A very well-written piece!

Reviewer: AstroBoy
Date: 02/05/05 22:13
Chapter: One

Very good, very heartbreaking. One of the better organized fics i've read so far. excellent. Oh, but wouldn't that life just be wonderful? *sigh*, back to Harry's real, dilemma-filled life!

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 02/04/05 12:55
Chapter: One

This was very strongly written. I normally murder "and it was all a dream...." fic writers, but you wrote it in such a way tht it didnt matter. Tres bon.

Reviewer: Vianne
Date: 01/31/05 16:26
Chapter: One

So beautiful, so sad, so good...(snif) Thank you :)

Reviewer: nolimit
Date: 12/30/04 6:05
Chapter: One

hmm....if only u could drag on with that happy part for a bit longer...say 30 more chapters i'd be satisfied =) Very well written. nice job.

Reviewer: krazycase
Date: 12/29/04 22:51
Chapter: One

*sniff... wipes tear* I just want to give harry a big hug and tell him it'll all be ok... That was a really sad story.. happy... but sad... excellent job

Reviewer: Rhia Emerick
Date: 11/21/04 18:37
Chapter: One

It's cool. I would be better if it was longer than one chapter. Much better.

Reviewer: HPF
Date: 11/09/04 16:00
Chapter: One

THIS STORY RULES!!!!!

Author's Response: You know, I couldn't help but notice that you put the exact same review for both my stories. Right down to the number of exclamation points. Interesting. Thank you for your enthusiasm, I found it extremely amusing. However.... I'm wondering if you do the same thing for every story you read. ;)

Reviewer: Voldemortz_Sista
Date: 11/07/04 15:20
Chapter: One

Aww, bless. This is amazing - really great. Almost made me cry, which is something. Hope you write more.

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