awhh this was really sweet! i never guessed the walking down the aisle bit, great story :] (Y)
cute and simple
I ABSOLUTELY LOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NIce! Short but nice!
Shocking ending. I loved it!
WOW! That story was awsome!
Hm. It could be longer.
Hm. It could be longer.
That is the most adorable twist ever!!
That was cute! There was so much emotion! Well done!
Awwww. Sorry but that was sooooo cute. I really liked it.
Awww... so cute! ( What's an Unspeakable? )
Aww I just love your story... It was soo cute and fluffy.... I wish that somehow by some miracle that would happen in the real books... That would be awesome.... Please write more Fan Fics or add more chapters.... Your a great writer...
first off... AWWWW... I had to get that out of my system... ok, now, for the real review. I loved this, I am not a big fan of one shots because a lot of them just aren't done right, but this was good. I enjoyed reading it. The ending totally caught me by surprise... you distracted me. And I like the explanation you gave for why they are together, it made sense. It seems like you really thought this out, and the writing was good too, I would love to read more of what you write, in fact, I will go see what else you have right now. Keep up the good work!
It's a good start to the story, though I personally think you should elaborate and make a few more chapters. It seems too short. But other then that it's great!
This was a cute story! The title didn't give anything away and I was pleasantly surprized. Good opening paragraph, I caught on right away! The few paragraphs about their certain jobs seemed to grab the attention away from the fact that they are getting married. I know you wanted it to be focused then have a flashback and go into the ceremony again, but again, it does take some emotion away. You could try writing a little paragraph more about the walks and then make some dialog, adding in little secrets about their career choices. This would probably take some readers deeper into the story! Also interesting career choice for Harry! I always thought he would become an Auror because that was what he was aiming for, but good twist! Overall, this was great story, but I'd like to see more dialog. Keep up the good work! Love, Michelle
I really love your story. Hoping to see the new one soon. I'm a H/Hr shipper. ^.^
Aww...this was sweet. I not really a H/Hr shipper, but I thought this story was really good. <3 Lilybella
Aw, that was cute! I never thought of Harry becoming an unspeakable....