awhh this was really sweet! i never guessed the walking down the aisle bit, great story :] (Y)

I ABSOLUTELY LOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NIce! Short but nice!

WOW! That story was awsome!

Hm. It could be longer.

That was cute! There was so much emotion! Well done!

Awww... so cute! ( What's an Unspeakable? )

first off... AWWWW... I had to get that out of my system... ok, now, for the real review. I loved this, I am not a big fan of one shots because a lot of them just aren't done right, but this was good. I enjoyed reading it. The ending totally caught me by surprise... you distracted me. And I like the explanation you gave for why they are together, it made sense. It seems like you really thought this out, and the writing was good too, I would love to read more of what you write, in fact, I will go see what else you have right now. Keep up the good work!

This was a cute story! The title didn't give anything away and I was pleasantly surprized. Good opening paragraph, I caught on right away! The few paragraphs about their certain jobs seemed to grab the attention away from the fact that they are getting married. I know you wanted it to be focused then have a flashback and go into the ceremony again, but again, it does take some emotion away. You could try writing a little paragraph more about the walks and then make some dialog, adding in little secrets about their career choices. This would probably take some readers deeper into the story! Also interesting career choice for Harry! I always thought he would become an Auror because that was what he was aiming for, but good twist! Overall, this was great story, but I'd like to see more dialog. Keep up the good work! Love, Michelle

Aww...this was sweet. I not really a H/Hr shipper, but I thought this story was really good. <3 Lilybella