Reviewer: Flowerpots
Date: 08/10/12 3:34
Chapter: Chapter 3: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

I absolutly adore all your work!!!!!! The first book I read was the Enchanted master (suggested to me by a friend 2 days ago) and I have just this minute finished reading ALL of your other stories! LOVED. THEM. ALL!!!

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/23/12 5:53
Chapter: Chapter 3: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

Squeal!!!!! What a wonderful story! I loved the hysteria and am jealous that you have a very imaginative husband to work with for your stories!
Great job! I hope that this story keeps continuing and continuing and continuing...

Reviewer: JoieFouquet22
Date: 03/29/12 2:40
Chapter: Chapter 3: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

Even more astonishing than your writing is how you manage to amazingly keep everyone, including Severus, in full and undeniable character! You have successfully turned me, the living, breathing Hermione Granger, into a procastinator! I can't stop reading your works!

Reviewer: BVBandGirl
Date: 04/07/11 12:49
Chapter: Chapter 3: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

okay... i really shouldn't have been reading this at work. i was trying so hard not to laugh. the odd looks were worth it though. i really enjoy your writing!

Reviewer: Mrs Cedric Diggory
Date: 02/18/11 12:12
Chapter: Chapter 3: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

You are an amazing author. I love you work. Keep it up!

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 01/26/10 20:23
Chapter: Chapter 3: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

Wow--that was a marathon reading event, but it was extremely entertaining. I'm not sure what part I liked best. I almost think it was the scenes involving Gilderoy. Severus is such a baby with his hurt feelings when Hermione doesn't pay enough attention. I'm glad Hermione learned to manage him. I don't know what else could've gone wrong with the dinner party preparations. Wait, I think my favorite part was when Severus thought for a brief moment that Hermione was pregnant and that Gilderoy was the father. This was great but so long I don't know what to say:D

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 01/25/10 20:27
Chapter: Chapter 2: Having One's Cake

Is Hermione pregnant? Poor Gilderoy--I can picture his panic when he thought he had imagined all of his work. I loved the pull of the Enchantment--when Bast conveyed to Severus that something wasn't right with Hermione and he raced to her rescue. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 01/24/10 18:17
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Wedding Gifts

That was entertaining. I'm very happy that Gilderoy found a career that is so fitting for him. I'm happy Hermione accepted Quirk. She's mellowed quite a bit. I guess that comes from maturity. The beginning was funny in that Hermione hated to see Severus go to work and he couldn't wait to get there. I'm sure this is a huge adjustment for him and he really doesn't know how to act. I'm really enjoying this series of stories about Severus and Hermione. Great chapter.

Reviewer: snapeluvr13
Date: 08/10/09 23:34
Chapter: Chapter 3: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

That was another great story! I love the hysteria in this last chapter especially. Keep up the amazing work!! :D

Reviewer: oceanblue365
Date: 04/21/09 14:52
Chapter: Chapter 3: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

Adorable! :)

Reviewer: claymor
Date: 02/08/08 12:53
Chapter: Chapter 3: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

I have been reading through this series. Please forgive me if I haven't reviewed each one. I have been so eager to read the next one that I fear I have moved on with out reviewing. ANYWAY... these are great stories. I really like the way that you write. So often stories are written with very juvenile dialogue which is a real turn off. Great writting. Keep it up. PLEASE?

Reviewer: AntigoneScorned
Date: 01/22/08 13:22
Chapter: Chapter 2: Having One's Cake

I have a feeling that the vomiting didn't have to do with the interview, but rather the nursery in question!

Reviewer: WaterPixie
Date: 08/15/07 8:05
Chapter: Chapter 3: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

Ohh I do LOVE your stoy's, espically this story arch, it's wonderfully well written and I'm totally lovein it :)
I wonted tor ead it all befor I reviewed it, and I have to say it rock's, most profoundly :)

Reviewer: summer rain
Date: 05/16/07 13:57
Chapter: Chapter 3: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

I love the way you write snape! You crack me up! I dare say I hope that potion is only 99% accurate..hehehehe but if our snape made it it coluld be no less than perfect. Oh well, great job on you story!

Reviewer: summer rain
Date: 05/15/07 14:04
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Wedding Gifts

Your storys are great! Your writing is fasanating, and funny! You have pulled me into every story of yours I have read! I hope you take the job as English Professor at hogwarts, as soon as they read your work Im sure you can expet an owl!
Love @-->----Sumer

Reviewer: richard3
Date: 02/21/07 7:39
Chapter: Chapter 1: The Wedding Gifts

Hello again, Subversa. I've read the whole story and enjoyed it thoroughly. In fact, I think I've read your entire Mugglenet oeuvre, so you'll have to write me some more....
Just a couple of hints on the "Britishness" front:
1. "faucet" (AmE) = "tap" to us Brits
2. a "muffin", despite changing times and those ghastly oversized cupcakes that bakers and supermarkets insist on selling (I daresay they're much better on your side of the briny), well, as I was saying, a "muffin" is and shall remain a bread product (to be toasted and served with lashings of butter) and not some kind of cake.
Now please do go back to your typewriter and tell me another story.

Author's Response: Hi, R3! If you are enjoying my stories, you may wish to look for me at one of these sites to find my other stories: These sites cater to a more adult readership. That is not to say that all of the stories are rated R or are of an "adult" nature; simply that the authors and readers there are, for the most part, adults. Cheers!

Reviewer: gryffindorphoenix
Date: 02/15/07 13:38
Chapter: Chapter 3: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

All these stories are just great. Interesting and very creative. This last one is really how a marriage works.

Reviewer: PuNkYLiZ87
Date: 02/12/07 19:21
Chapter: Chapter 3: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

it started of good but as it goes with sequel after sequel, its starting to loose its touch...

Reviewer: BeachBabe
Date: 12/29/06 23:52
Chapter: Chapter 3: Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

ha ha. that one made me laugh out loud!!!!!!

Reviewer: BeachBabe
Date: 12/29/06 23:42
Chapter: Chapter 2: Having One's Cake

Again, story going where i was not expecting it to go, but again, i loved the surprise!!!!!

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