i do its so sweet of sirius i mean who doesn't love a sensative boy??
Very Interesting story. It was well-written and filled in quite a bit that was only hinted at in the books.
uh,uh,uh,uh,...this one is good! LOVE the ending.
*reads on*
i'm not a fan of Sirius acting weak like Peter. But i also understand its for the story line. and thats all that really matters. doesn't it?
i'm enjoyin gthe story tho. its put together quite well, and i'm excited to see how you've pulled this one off.
Ok, I usually don't read slash, but got into this one by not paying attention to warnings, and a real love of the Marauders, and this is a great story. Good bits of humor, and nice one by throwing in the bi bit on Remus for Tonks. I don't think it's shocking or anything, the depth you put into the relationship gave the story real soul. Well done.
Aw, that was so sweet. I loved it beginning to end. At the beginning I thought it would be a severus/sirius fic, but I loved it. The characterization fit perfectly as to what I believe the characters would act like. You made me feel like I was in Remus' shoes in the end about trying to decide whether or not to hate sirius. I loved it, 'specially the Room of Requirement added in at the end. Great Job!
Why snape and sirius why not a nice remus and sirius if you had to do a ssp(same sex pairing)
Author's Response: I'm not entirely sure that I understand the question....It is ultimately Sirius/Remus. And I know what SSP stands for.
I like the ending, I'm really glad it worked out in the end. I think the thought of Snape being so evil is a scary one though! Great fic, I hope you write some more!
Author's Response: I'm sure you've discovered them by now, but there are plenty of Remus/Sirius fic on my author's page. Check them out if you haven't already. Thanks for reading!
Perfect - I thought the fact that Sirius being totally and absolutelt taken in by Severus was truly remarkable. "Big friend of James Potter's, Sirius Black, is snogged by greasy-haired git-face, also known as Severus Snape, and is then nearly killed, but then saved by him" AMAZING! KEEP UP THE ABSOLUTELY CHOCOLATE FROGGY WORK!
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Author's Response: That could be, almost without question, the bestest review ever. "ABSOLUTELY CHOCOLATE FROGGY WORK" Thank you!
I love this story
Author's Response: Thrilled to hear it! Thanks for reviewing!
I thought it was brilliant, funny, and in general just awesome!!
You're an excellent writer, and definitely got the characters spot-on. Nice job.
Author's Response: I'm always thrilled to know that someone enjoyed something I worked on. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
i do! you write beautiful endings.
Author's Response: The ending could be the only decent thing about this whole mess of a story. Really, one day, I will remix this myself and you will be amazed at the difference! Thanks for reading, anyway.
James and Peter were HILARIOUS in their "accidental" insults to Snape -- well-written!
Author's Response: Thank you!
WOW that was a great story
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
i like the twist!!!! i think that there is a chance that its true
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
s is not normaly my type of thing but i really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: It's not particularly mine either, to be honest. Thanks for reading!
Great Job!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
um... well written, but how come sirius calls snape a half blood, isnt that the kinda thing snape'd say??
Author's Response: Why would Snape (the half-blood) call Sirius (the pure blood) a half-blood? And if you're referring to the tone, they hated each other. And Sirius is much more...passionate about his anger than Snape. He yells where Snape sneers. Snape would never call anyone a half blood. Half-breed, yes, but not -blood. Glad you enjoyed!
i honestly don't know why you haven't been getting as many reviews as you expected. this story is exceptional. great work :)
Author's Response: OMG. Please go read The Wolfstar Epic instead. It's loads better than this is. Really. Promise. And this isn't fishing for another review elsewhere; but if you think that this is good, you ought to read that cause this doesn't even touch The Epic's toes.
