Reviews For Broken
Reviewer: stareyed_in_LA
Date: 09/11/05 15:06
Chapter: June 2008

This is a great story. I hope in the later chapters, we can learn why Ginny ditched Harry, and why he is in the US. Also, maybe some more insight on what happened after Voldemort was defeated. Over all, this is a great story, and I hope to read more of it soon.

Author's Response: Well, I'm not sure, ditched, is the correct word. It is a little harch considering the situation she was in. As for Voldemort and the war, This story has nothing to do with that and those subjects will only be touched on in obscure ways.

Reviewer: Dragen
Date: 09/11/05 4:12
Chapter: June 2008

I really liked the story... but I do hope that you do some flashback to let us know what happened, as its like you put us in the middle of the story instead of the begin. As we don'r know how or why Ginny beteyed Harry, if that is she did at all.

Author's Response: That was the begining of the story. You may or may not get to find out how Harry was betrayed, and if it was Ginny who did it.

Reviewer: Harriet Evans
Date: 09/10/05 9:24
Chapter: June 2008

I thought this was a great start to the story. It had a nice, relaxed feel to it, I felt I was being taken along in the truck with them, listening to their conversation. And of course there are all the unanswered questions to tempt me back. Why was Harry there. How did Ginny betray him. A really good first chapter, Steve. Well done!

Author's Response: Great, your here and reading again, and you like it. You felt like you were in the truck, that is cool, as that was the goal. As to your questions, I can answer one of them. Harry is there because he is running away. The question is, did he get luck and end up somewhere where he will find peace.

Reviewer: johnnyandme
Date: 09/09/05 21:10
Chapter: June 2008

NICE JOB!!! loved ur other stories so i thought i would throw in a review for this one!!!! sounds interesting. not the typical HP fan fic but nonetheless creative so far!! anyway can't wait for the update and i hope this turns out to be a good one. bye! -chelsea

Author's Response: No, this is not a typical HP fan fic. I've done the 6th and 7th year stuff once, and I wanted to try something else. Mostly, I wanted to see if I could bring out the emotions and actions that a person would go through in the situations I will write about in this story.

Reviewer: JimboCOUS
Date: 09/08/05 2:13
Chapter: June 2008

Nice opener!

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: ginny_potter
Date: 09/08/05 1:27
Chapter: June 2008

A great start to what can only be a great story coming from you :) Can't wait to get more of it to read...

Author's Response: Thanks, your faith in my ability is appreciated.

Reviewer: crazyaboutpotter
Date: 09/07/05 20:49
Chapter: June 2008

This looks like a really good story. I can't wait until you post again!

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: shortymac
Date: 09/07/05 17:34
Chapter: June 2008

Already I can tell that this is going to be a good story!! Ginny betraying Harry, that is a nice twist, but knowing you I know that there is more to it than that. Can't wait to read the rest, excellent start!

Author's Response: I guess well see what all there is to the story. I think you can already tell this is more about life than adventure. I hope people like that, and that it can keep them interested.

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