Reviews For Broken
Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/28/08 23:33
Chapter: March 2021

If this was indeed your final fan fic, then you went out with a bang. This was fantastic! I loved all of it, From Harry's immense power, to Ginny's maze of possible lives, to Step's hexing the twins. Don't ever stop writing, it'd be such a waste.

Reviewer: MoRoCcAnAnDpRoUd
Date: 09/07/07 16:44
Chapter: June 2008

"he didn't think he would ever live again and it was too late to die." that line alone could have gripped me to this story like krazy glue, but the rest of this chapter does a pretty great job of that already. definitely reading it.

Reviewer: ginny75
Date: 07/05/07 3:08
Chapter: March 2021

this was a asooome story i really liked it

Reviewer: angel1991
Date: 06/01/07 21:24
Chapter: March 2021

Aww. I love the ending. Its sweet

Reviewer: m4rk6
Date: 04/23/07 7:02
Chapter: October 2017

If that's what love does to men, thank god I never fell in love. Harry is so weak :(

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 04/21/07 20:27
Chapter: March 2021

I only review at the final chapter of any fanfic I read. I apologize if you would rather I review all chapters. The ending was a really good one and I applaud your ability to put strife in what should have been smmoth sailing after Voldemorts defeat. Keep up the good work. I am off to read your other fanfics now.

Reviewer: Aurum Dormio
Date: 04/21/07 16:40
Chapter: March 2021

wow... that was by far the best h/g fanfic i have ever read!! great job and plz write more

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/11/07 21:51
Chapter: June 2008

*sniff* when i finished this wonderfully written fanfic, i was crying my head off.

Reviewer: cutiepoet
Date: 01/11/07 15:24
Chapter: August 2016

thats soooo sad
harry and ginny should get back together in this one
but there are always good fics when they don't
can't wait to read the rest!!!

Reviewer: cutiepoet
Date: 01/08/07 15:35
Chapter: March 2015


Reviewer: cutiepoet
Date: 01/07/07 18:32
Chapter: March 2013

i loved this chapter!!!
especially the last line!!!
love it!!!!

Reviewer: cutiepoet
Date: 01/07/07 17:44
Chapter: June 2008

good start
it was a bit confusing at the beginning
but i got it eventually!
good job

Reviewer: jkrofan
Date: 12/08/06 8:28
Chapter: March 2021

Hi! Just read the whole story. What a beautiful story of love and forgiveness. It was so moving. The whole "talk" at the end between Harry and Stephanie was especially poignant. Because love and marriage are really about loving and forgiving despite the hurts and mistakes we make. We ARE all human and life isn't perfect. What a great story! So are you writing other things to get published, then? You must keep us informed of what if you do get published.

Reviewer: heyu
Date: 10/03/06 8:28
Chapter: June 2008

Very well written and excellent story! Please do tell us when you publish your own book, I for one will be sure to buy it!

Reviewer: Mr_Ugly
Date: 08/30/06 1:30
Chapter: March 2021

FInish. Good story man. Thanks for shareing your imagination with the rest of use.

Reviewer: Mr_Ugly
Date: 08/30/06 0:23
Chapter: December 2018

if i was the sappy type i would be crying right now. thank god im not. but this is a good story.

Reviewer: Mr_Ugly
Date: 08/29/06 23:16
Chapter: March 2015

Wow man. How did she find him. wait dont tell me i will find out i hope.

Reviewer: Mr_Ugly
Date: 08/29/06 23:06
Chapter: June 2008

hey this is the first time im reading this story. it is a interesting start. can't wait to see why he left england. keep up the good work.

Reviewer: m4rk6
Date: 08/27/06 18:09
Chapter: October 2017

I like the way you write; spelling, grammar, story flow. I just don't like fics where Harry gets betrayed by his friends, or the ones he love(d). Guess I'll go check out the rest of your fics.
I do wish you introduced a different love interest for Harry. As Ginny was happy with someone else, perhaps Harry could have been happy with somebody else. Call it revenge if you must, that's just my POV. :)

Reviewer: phishbulb
Date: 08/24/06 17:28
Chapter: March 2021

I just wanted to thank you for finally breaking me from the whole H/G thing. I am so repulsed by Ginny here, as well as Harry's responses to her, that I'm pretty sure I am unable to read any story featuring that pairing. I had been leaning that way for a while now, but couldn't seem to make the final break. This story did it for me.

This story brought up a raw, visceral hatred for that worthless bitch. I suppose you deserve credit for writing something that makes the reader think and feel something for the characters. I'm just not sure you intended for the reader to be wishing for Ginny's death at the end. Or questioning Harry's choice for not giving in and dieing back when he was in a coma. This was a story of an unfaithful bitch who gave up when she shouldn’t have and didn’t let go when she should. This was a story about a man who was truly broken. He was beat down by life and despite his constant struggles in the end he ended up with less than nothing. This might be one of the more depressing stories I’ve ever read. But hey, at least you didn’t pair Ginny off with Malfoy. There’s always that.

I'm sure that there are many who read stories like this and enjoy them. Best of luck with your future projects.

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