Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 01/24/08 15:03
Chapter: Broomsticks and Battles

I don't know why, but this was my favourite chapter so far. I never get tired of the first time Harry flew, same as i never get tired of Fred and George's exiting Hogwarts. I'm a bit unsure of Ron's opinion of muggleborns, do you think he really feels secretly superior, thats how you made it sound. Alot of this fic is very similar to Philosopher's Stone, adding more of Ron's private thoughts might help break up the dialogue. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I was like, 13 when I wrote this and only a few years older when I decided to heck with this and posted it as my first story. It was before beta readers and re-writes. So that's why it's not as different as it would have been were I writing it today. Thank you.

Reviewer: goddess of light
Date: 10/01/06 9:09
Chapter: Snitches and Secrets

Over the summer huh? Sheesh! Even I don't take this long. May I just say something?: 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please?

Author's Response: I'm trying! I'm trying!

Reviewer: MudBlood999
Date: 09/19/06 13:50
Chapter: Snitches and Secrets

ive been coming back to the same chapter for aaaages!!! its been soooooooooooooo looooong!!!!! plz hurry up! im starting to lose my faith!

Author's Response:

I'msorryI'msorryI'msorry! I've just been so crazy the last few months with the Summer School and the Autumn term on the Beta Boards that I've completely let this slide. I hope to have something up soon. I don't know how soon and soon is very relative but I do plan on having this finished. Promise. Really.

And I'll stop telling myself that you all know how this ends anyway.

*dodges rotten fruit*

Reviewer: italia_luver
Date: 08/24/06 17:41
Chapter: Snitches and Secrets

ok, if i review then will you update? i love reading storys, but since i am a lazy bum, i hate to review unless it is the last chapter of the story. is that a good enough excuse?


Author's Response:
Not if a story is over ten chapters long...Reviews are what give writers the incentive to continue writing.

I'm working on updating soon. Promise.

Thanks for reading

Reviewer: italia_luver
Date: 08/05/06 13:22
Chapter: Snitches and Secrets

well since you wont update, then i guess i'll have to review! i really like this story. i mean you never reallyget to read the story from ron or hermiones point of view. awesome story!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you're enjoying and I am trying to get the rest of the last chapter up soon and to get the next one up as well. Sorry for the long wait!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you're enjoying and I am trying to get the rest of the last chapter up soon and to get the next one up as well. Sorry for the long wait!

Reviewer: padfooyroxmysoccks
Date: 06/13/06 13:04
Chapter: How it Happened

Actualy to be TOTALY corect, by the end of Harrys life it was The Chosen Nutcase Who Lived

Author's Response: Or 'The Boy Who Insisted On Living' or 'The Boy Who Refused to Die' or the 'Boy Who Saved The Wizarding World Before--" Erm. Spoiling my own fic.. Right. Stopping now. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: goddess of light
Date: 06/12/06 13:55
Chapter: Snitches and Secrets

good idea! this way wde won't have to wait forever for you to get the hapters out!(not like i an talk, seeing as I've been writing sine fubruary and still don't have my story out)

Author's Response: *blush* It was supposed to work; I haven't had the chance to update in ages and I hppe to get some more up here over the summer. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Courtney22
Date: 04/19/06 15:49
Chapter: Snitches and Secrets

Love the missing moments from when HArry is not around!! I really think it adds alot to your story. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Well, the whole point is to get the moments when Harry isn't there, no? Glad you enjoyed and I'm trying to get the rest of it up as soon as possible....Keep reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: SpyfiTheHPLuver
Date: 04/16/06 18:47
Chapter: Snitches and Secrets

Hey, sorry I haven't been reviewing(it's just not my thing). I've been reading this since the beginning, and really enjoy it. Keep up the good work, and update fast!

Author's Response: It's good to know that you've been enjoying it anyway; even if you aren't reviewing. Glad to know you're enjoying and updates should be happening as soon as RL gets a little less hectic. I'd say you can expect one soon, but I don't want to make any promises, just in case. But yeah. Soon. Lol.

Reviewer: MudBlood999
Date: 04/14/06 7:31
Chapter: Snitches and Secrets

this is great! plz consider wat i put in the review for the last chapter. l8rs xxx

Author's Response: See previous response. (Have you actually taken the book out and read it against my fic? You might want to try it....)

Reviewer: MudBlood999
Date: 04/14/06 7:26
Chapter: Trolls and Truces

this is very good and excitin but the only problem is that i dont think you rememba every thing that the characters said, so u made them up, am i correct? if so then maybe u shud get the book and read it through and try an rememba some of it. ive got all 6 books and all 4 dvds, so i rememba MOST of it. l8rs xxx

Author's Response: Actually, no, you're probably not correct. The words were copied verbaitum quotatum from the book, so unless you can give me the printing as well as the page in which you found a mistake on my part--again, no. I do appreciate the review and the thought, though. Also, if you would not mind, please try to avoid netspeak in reviews. It pains me, as a writing teacher. Thank you.

Reviewer: Mudblood428
Date: 04/11/06 13:03
Chapter: Trolls and Truces

Yet another wonderful chapter :). Forgive me for taking so long to review - you punch them out infinitely faster than I can mine and RL has been getting the best of me these days! In any case, I really enjoyed revisiting these keystone moments in the HP timeline as told through Ron's POV. I must say, you write Malfoy marvelously - better than anyone I've read on MNFF so far!

Author's Response:
Of course I forgive you; just like you forgive me for taking so long to read ATDIC, right? RL-it sucks. One of these days I will get back to it.
Is that why everyone is reading this? I can't figure what the point is as it's all just so similar and I'm the one writing it. Oh well.

The Malfoy comment cracks me up. Like you have no idea. Cause I've just started writing him romanctically and my beta (who doesn't get the ship) doesn't see how either character is particularly signature. So, yeah, this makes me laugh. I'm going to have to point it out to her. I'm highly flattered, too...

Reviewer: goddess of light
Date: 04/09/06 11:20
Chapter: Snitches and Secrets

HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!great chapter!)

Author's Response: I am trying; but life is a bit hectic. I dont' think you can expect this chapter for another two weeks or so, especially when you consider the update on the site. But I do hope to have something up again for you soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Sootyface
Date: 04/04/06 9:53
Chapter: Snitches and Secrets

UPDATE! (Not like I can talk - *bad author*) But UPDATE SOON PLEASE.

Author's Response: I am trying. I have a very crazy schedule for the next three weeks or so, but then I'm really going to make myself sit down and DO IT!

Reviewer: goddess of light
Date: 03/28/06 15:00
Chapter: Snitches and Secrets

oh yeah, i forget one thing...UPDATE!!!

Author's Response: Soon!

Reviewer: goddess of light
Date: 03/28/06 14:59
Chapter: Snitches and Secrets

cool! i'm the first to review! great chapter! i really like the part at the end wher hermione can't even read his answers!=-)! this is great!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: harrahagrid45
Date: 03/27/06 18:45
Chapter: Classes and Curiosity

I really like your story. But (yes I will always have a but in my reviews)..... I think that you try very hard to get your facts straight so you copy some lines from the the book. I have no problem with that except somtimes I think that you don't always use the lines in the right context making it hard for the reader to understand what you are talking about. Ugg!!!!!! Runon sentence! Anyways I think that your story is great but if you ever take the time to update this chapter I would carfully read over the scene in Hagrid's hut. Great job though!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am now going to continue reading the other chapters that you have already written! I give you a 9.

Author's Response: I copy narrative lines from the book? Really? I know that I copy the dialogue, I have to, but narrative? Hmm. All I can say in my defense, if that's true, is that I wrote this five years ago and now, when I type and post, I do it off my written version, not out of the book. I will look into it though. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Courtney22
Date: 03/24/06 21:52
Chapter: Trolls and Truces

I really enjoy your story as I am always interested in what other character in the story are thinking. A slight criticism however, I think in this chapter there is less of Ron's personality in the narrative. He almost seems to be riterating what Harry thought from the books. What was so amazing about your story (and what got me hooked) were the little bits of new information that were gleemed from seeing things from a new angle. I didn't think I learned anything new about the story from this chapter. I know its difficult to balance staying true to the cannon and writing your story. Just ask your self every so often about a chapter, what is something new that I am revealing, either about Ron, the other characters, how the events played out etc. It might even be fun to have discrepencies in the story, like "I know Harry thought bla bla bla but if you ask me..." The differences, in this story, is what makes it so fun and interesting. So stay true to the cannon by acknowledging what Harry might think about something but have Ron put his own spin on it, just like he did after the 2nd task of the Tri Wizard Tournament (You know exagerate play up his role etc.) Hopefully this is helpful and I really do love your story!! Please keep writing this makes me remember why I loved the first book so much!

Author's Response:
While I'm glad to hear that you're hooked (ha-got another one!) it does disappoint me that you feel that Ron's voice didn't come through in this chapter. Not to say that I think it didn't. Only that I have been trying--as per reviews--to get more of it in there, ever since he got to school, and it is proving ot be more difficult. Ron and Harry both work a lot of one another and I think that, pretty much, whichever one of them states an opinion about something first is the person who's opinion is followed. Except, of course, when Ron gets horribly jealous of Harry and acts like a two year old. *muses*

I am trying though, to get more in. Really. Part of the reason why the updates are taking so long...

Do keep reading, though!

Reviewer: goddess of light
Date: 03/23/06 16:36
Chapter: Trolls and Truces

Actually that would be TWELVE fauthful reviewers=-) great story! update soon! PLEASE!

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying. Next chapter is already in Q.

Reviewer: goddess of light
Date: 03/22/06 18:10
Chapter: How it Happened

I am your twelfth (faithful) reviewer! Your story is great! More please!

Author's Response: Twelve reviewers for twelve chapters. So easy to keep count that way, don't you think? Next chapter should be going into Q soon; just a matter of typing it up.

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