hahah brilliant. i love this one. your dialogue is great, every time :D
Remus suddenly said, “James’ birthday is next week.”
Sirius laughed and added, “He’ll be turning two.”
Awesome job! Next chapter please? You are definetly going on my favorites.
I like this story. I hope they don't hurt Mrs. Dongle. That poor woman. I don't care how much you pay me, I would never agree to stay with those four at night! Anyway, it's really good! Update quickly!
i loved this chapter! i think you hit a typical teenage boy perfectly, and had me laughing and thinking of my guy friends the whole time.
post more soon.
i love your sirius! he's so funny! just about every line out of his mouth had me cracking a smile. especially the little things like scardy-wolf and whatnot :D great job, and i'm excited for more chapters, this story is gonna be great, i can tell. 6790342000/10 for you
man... i think you got Sirius right on the dot. he is hilarious!! update soon because i could use a good laugh...10/10
This is really sweet and very funny!!!! I loved it. Please up-date!!!!!
i'm confused its just to confusing
what's going to happen! tell me tell me! just kidding, but really good. i cant wait for the rest. i love james' comment to lily!
that was really good!! i like the last bit with sirius it was very funny!! 10/10
haha cute. how are his parents going to react to his random invitation...
heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy,its great.good job
That was very good. I am a big random fan, and you made Sirius very random. I loved that part. Usually in Sirius/James/Lily/Remus fics James is my favorite character, but I think you made one where Sirius is my favorite. I like the change, and I cant wait for updates!!!
hahahah that was great! i absoloutely LOVED IT how sirius was out in the hall practically talking to himself while james was pissed off talking to remus, i was laughing outloud haha, keep writing PLEASE!:)
Bloody brilliant!! i give you a million thumbs up!! i love it!! I think i need to get rid of my stitches (HAha get it!! Stitch in your side) lol ok so its not that funny... my joke wasnt i mean!! I loved your story!! Update sooN!!
This is just SOOO funny! Keep up the excellent work! 10/10!
Oh that was hilarious! i loved that end bit with sirius sitting outside in the train corrider! it just gives such a great image! britlliant work, i can't wait to read more!
This is so great! I really love this fic! 10/10, no doubt.
Author's Response: thank you very much! the second chapter is in waiting to be posted...should be up soon! :)
I don't really like cherries, but since it was a good story I'm reviewing. I really enjoyed reading this. Another good thing is I have to read for so long for homework and reading this is the best way I could do it. I like the story so far. UPDATE SOON! (With my cherry on top?) ~HermyRox12~
Author's Response: Cherries? hmm...i've been writing fics for a while and i've never heard that one. thank you! i have another chapter sitting on the side and i think i'll go submit it... :) emmablk1