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Reviews For Two Steps Back

Name: chloe4dan (Signed) · Date: 05/26/06 6:30 · For: Chapter 3
hahah brilliant. i love this one. your dialogue is great, every time :D
Remus suddenly said, “James’ birthday is next week.”

Sirius laughed and added, “He’ll be turning two.”


Name: KatharineK (Signed) · Date: 05/25/06 19:52 · For: Chapter 3
Awesome job! Next chapter please? You are definetly going on my favorites.

Name: KitKat517 (Signed) · Date: 05/25/06 19:13 · For: Chapter 3
I like this story. I hope they don't hurt Mrs. Dongle. That poor woman. I don't care how much you pay me, I would never agree to stay with those four at night! Anyway, it's really good! Update quickly!

Name: southernsunshine (Signed) · Date: 05/13/06 20:55 · For: Chapter 2
i loved this chapter! i think you hit a typical teenage boy perfectly, and had me laughing and thinking of my guy friends the whole time.

Name: snufflesroxmysox (Signed) · Date: 05/12/06 0:10 · For: Chapter 2
post more soon.

Name: chloe4dan (Signed) · Date: 05/04/06 21:31 · For: Chapter 2
i love your sirius! he's so funny! just about every line out of his mouth had me cracking a smile. especially the little things like scardy-wolf and whatnot :D great job, and i'm excited for more chapters, this story is gonna be great, i can tell. 6790342000/10 for you

Name: hpfan012 (Signed) · Date: 05/01/06 14:14 · For: Chapter 2
man... i think you got Sirius right on the dot. he is hilarious!! update soon because i could use a good laugh...10/10

Name: AurorGirl101 (Signed) · Date: 04/21/06 13:02 · For: Chapter 1
This is really sweet and very funny!!!! I loved it. Please up-date!!!!!

Name: CheeseKing (Signed) · Date: 04/17/06 12:56 · For: Chapter 1
i'm confused its just to confusing

Name: Medora (Signed) · Date: 04/15/06 22:00 · For: Chapter 1
what's going to happen! tell me tell me! just kidding, but really good. i cant wait for the rest. i love james' comment to lily!

Name: hpfan012 (Signed) · Date: 04/13/06 16:19 · For: Chapter 1
that was really good!! i like the last bit with sirius it was very funny!! 10/10

Name: luvbunny114 (Signed) · Date: 04/13/06 12:26 · For: Chapter 1
haha cute. how are his parents going to react to his random invitation...

Name: u no poo (Signed) · Date: 04/13/06 12:14 · For: Chapter 1
heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy,its great.good job

Name: big_Hogwarts_brat (Signed) · Date: 04/08/06 11:18 · For: Chapter 1
That was very good. I am a big random fan, and you made Sirius very random. I loved that part. Usually in Sirius/James/Lily/Remus fics James is my favorite character, but I think you made one where Sirius is my favorite. I like the change, and I cant wait for updates!!!

Name: fallenangelxo (Signed) · Date: 03/13/06 21:28 · For: Chapter 1
hahahah that was great! i absoloutely LOVED IT how sirius was out in the hall practically talking to himself while james was pissed off talking to remus, i was laughing outloud haha, keep writing PLEASE!:)

Name: One_True_Slytherin (Signed) · Date: 10/02/05 19:43 · For: Chapter 1
Bloody brilliant!! i give you a million thumbs up!! i love it!! I think i need to get rid of my stitches (HAha get it!! Stitch in your side) lol ok so its not that funny... my joke wasnt i mean!! I loved your story!! Update sooN!!

Name: rileyowen (Anonymous) · Date: 10/02/05 8:50 · For: Chapter 1
This is just SOOO funny! Keep up the excellent work! 10/10!

Name: kiwichik (Signed) · Date: 10/01/05 0:54 · For: Chapter 1
Oh that was hilarious! i loved that end bit with sirius sitting outside in the train corrider! it just gives such a great image! britlliant work, i can't wait to read more!

Name: rileyowen (Anonymous) · Date: 09/29/05 12:00 · For: Chapter 1
This is so great! I really love this fic! 10/10, no doubt.

Author's Response: thank you very much! the second chapter is in waiting to be posted...should be up soon! :)

Name: HermyRox12 (Signed) · Date: 09/21/05 16:48 · For: Chapter 1
I don't really like cherries, but since it was a good story I'm reviewing. I really enjoyed reading this. Another good thing is I have to read for so long for homework and reading this is the best way I could do it. I like the story so far. UPDATE SOON! (With my cherry on top?) ~HermyRox12~

Author's Response: Cherries? hmm...i've been writing fics for a while and i've never heard that one. thank you! i have another chapter sitting on the side and i think i'll go submit it... :) emmablk1

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