Reviews For But I Do Love You
Reviewer: fleur41138
Date: 06/14/07 20:20
Chapter: Sirius the Savior

HEy rem me? I'm back! ugh so sry! i hvnt been on this account for yrs but im glad im back! anyway good job! cant wait to read the next chp and im glad that she forgave him! btw .. did u also post this story on

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 06/02/07 18:36
Chapter: Sirius the Savior

You can't just leave me here! I want to read the rest! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! well, luckily, you update quickly...but still!...update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 06/02/07 17:40
Chapter: Orphans

Does the bird have some symbolic importance in the story?

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 06/02/07 17:32
Chapter: The Date

Didn't you create Elise, Gary, Thomas, Timothy, Natalie, Professor Moron (or whatever his name is), and Stephanie as well as Raven? Give yourself some feedback! You do a great job! =D

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 06/02/07 17:16
Chapter: Tis The Season

SORRY! I accidentally clicked Submit on my other revew! What I meant to say was that Sirius and Raven DEFINITELY like each other!

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 06/02/07 17:15
Chapter: Tis The Season

“You’ll what? Get revenge? I’ll get revenge on your revenge!” Raven retorted.
“I’ll get revenge on your revenge of my revenge!”
Lol! Raven and Sirius are SO funny! They DEFINITELY

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 06/02/07 17:08
Chapter: I Dare You

“OI! I’m happy you’re together and all but there’s only so much mushiness one man can stand!”
“Woman! Would you leave me alone? I take the hippo thing back!”
Lily rolled her eyes, and exited the dorm, Raven beside her making kissing-faces the whole way.
FINALLY! Goodness, that took a while! So sweet...*sighs* And BTW, Sirius is HILARIOUS! Lol again! He's so funny! I love your characterization of him! *takes deep breaths* And I also think that a certian Raven might like him!

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 06/02/07 16:57
Chapter: Quidditch Before Christmas

Lily huffed angrily, but held her tongue knowing that anything she said would not help matters. In fact, it’d probably just make them believe she facied James, which was completely absurd.
Not completely absurd, a nasty little voice inside her said, if it were you wouldn’t have almost kissed him.
and *gasp* what a shock! Lily and James staying at the castle for christmas when barely anyone else is around... this can't possibly mean that there will be romance! No... no... that's just foolish thinking!
Lol! Ur SO funny! Love ur story SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 06/02/07 16:22
Chapter: Discoveries

The last thing she remembered was James running up behind her and swearing as he saw what was written and how Timothy was. She felt his arms wrap around her in a comforting hug. After that, there were only giant blurs and a lot of black.
That's so sad! *sniffle* Can it get happy? There's always so much depression in romances! *snuff sniffle cough cough* Oh well, at least we know Lily and James end up together. Which reminds me--yes! They're finally getting comfortable with each other!

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 06/02/07 15:44
Chapter: Welcome to Reality

'...and was turning out to be a great friend... if not, maybe, a little more.'
Good, progress! Glad that the next chapter 'is (most likely) a lot more exciting', because--no offense--but this chapter was a little bit boring. Sorry, sorry! And you didn't ruin Hagrid's character, don't worry!

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 06/02/07 15:26
Chapter: Changes and Denial

If this kept up, Stephanie wasn’t going to be the only person smitten with a marauder.
Lily already IS smitten. She just doesn't know it yet! Love the story!
And BTW, Stephanie and Sirius? Yulck! I bet Raven will end up liking Sirius or vice versa or something...

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE
Date: 04/02/07 23:14
Chapter: Sirius the Savior

really sweet chapter, but you need to update! what is it with you and updating????? *glare* i LOVE this story but if you don't update i forget about it and can't get as in to it anymore, please update!

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 01/01/07 16:13
Chapter: The Last Year Starts

hahahahahah, I love the way James greets her at the station!! I started alughin so hard I nearly choked on my soda! going on my faves!!

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE
Date: 01/01/07 15:22
Chapter: Be Serious

it's a really good chapter, but I kinda doubt that Sirus would just go back to the castle, i think he'd want to help save Raven. He just doesn't seem like the type of guy that would enjoy sitting safely on the sidelines.

Reviewer: mystery_solved
Date: 12/25/06 16:54
Chapter: Sirius the Savior

Is the story over? *hopes and prays that it's not* If it isn't, please, please, PLEASE update!!!

Reviewer: mystery_solved
Date: 12/24/06 17:35
Chapter: I Dare You

YES!!!! It finally happened! They're going out! Whoo-hoo!!! :D

Reviewer: mystery_solved
Date: 12/24/06 16:46
Chapter: Pure-blood Prejudice

NOOOOO!!! Why did Lily and James not kiss? Well, lets hope they do soon! ^^

Reviewer: gin_an_potter
Date: 12/01/06 17:40
Chapter: Sirius the Savior

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am new so.........But I love your story oh so much!! Please UPDATE soon!!!!

Reviewer: SiriuslyInLove7
Date: 11/15/06 16:54
Chapter: Sirius the Savior


Reviewer: biggerstaff15
Date: 10/03/06 8:42
Chapter: Sirius the Savior

do u know how long five months is????? it's 5/12 of a year!! lol UPDATE!!!

Author's Response: Nice math there! I'M SORRY I haven't updated in such a long time. It's not that I have tons of ideas and I'm giggling maliciously, writing out pages and pages and just keeping it all to myself. When I write I post, I promise you guys that. I'm having some internal conflict with this story, I haven't given up on it by any means, but it's more difficult than it used to be. Be assured that I am trying.

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