Reviews For But I Do Love You
Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 03/04/08 16:37
Chapter: A New Perspective

I love the extra secrets of the marauders map, but in what way does it help, can you see what the person is doing as well as where they are? And the bird Blizzard seems a little protective of Lily now he's claimed her, or is it that he senses James love of quidditch? Also, Sirius has the worst timing ever, first he interupts their kiss before christmas break and now he interupts Lily when she's going to tell James about Raven's parents. Surely the head boy and girl should've been called to the headmasters office and told about the attacks, as they surely relate to those in the school and at the very least they'd need to know so they could look out for the affected students. I like the switching points of view, gives you more creative room, you can also put two reactions to a situation in if you cannot decide which you prefer.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 03/04/08 16:19
Chapter: Orphans

That was so awful, I know the story wouldn't be real without a little darkness, but it was still so awful. You'd think Professor McGonagall would ask Lily to come too being head girl and Raven's best friend, for comfort, but i suppose you never know how someone will take such news. And the other girl, Natalie is it? Will she be sent back to Hogwarts? And what of the little bird? Is it an animagus? The red eyes are suspicious.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 03/04/08 16:01
Chapter: The Date

Trebble Aww! I loved this. It's so nice when you can open up to someone when others aren't around to tease and make comments. And i like how they had simple food, I can't get along with all that fancy stuff. Another excellent chapter.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 03/04/08 15:35
Chapter: Tis The Season

Aww, more fluff, it beats all the dark stuff. Hope someone discovers the attacker soon so the rest of the year can be completely fluff.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 03/04/08 15:22
Chapter: I Dare You

I loved this chapter. Lily decided to nick the mistletoe so James couldn't ask her out but instead she uses it to ask him out, well sort of. Anyway, great chapter, more upbeat than recent ones. I sort of guessed Raven and Sirius secretly liked one another, i mean they're more like James and Lily than I'm sure they'd care to admit.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 03/04/08 15:04
Chapter: Quidditch Before Christmas

That Quidditch game was absolutely brilliant! I was on the edge of my seat reading it. And James reprimanding his seeker for lack of attention made it all very real. I liked the reasons for James switching to Chaser too, very funny. Nice how you got a few well known names on the team, it must've been so. And staying at school for Christmas should be something every Hogwarts student should do at least once, Christmas there sounds fantastic.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 03/04/08 14:50
Chapter: Pure-blood Prejudice

I seem to be channeling some of Lily's anger at present. Why on earth would Remus be the one attacking people? I mean where's the motive for crying out loud! This is just like Fudge suggesting Madam Maxim was responsible for Mr Crouch's disappearance. Ruddy ministry, always after the quickest solution despite being so far from the truth it's fictional. Loved the eavesdropping, Shame Lily couldn't've hexed that idiot though, but I suppose Remus appreciated the sentiment all the same.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 03/04/08 14:35
Chapter: Discoveries

It's so true to life, how they're getting back to some normality and then someone else is attacked. Just when you think your biggest problem is that you might be falling in love with James Potter. That last part was chilling. Excellent writing.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 03/02/08 20:30
Chapter: Welcome to Reality

Dumbledore's really putting in a lot of effort when it comes to making sure his head boy and girl work closely isn't he? And you did a great job of writing Hagrid, he's one of my favourites too.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 03/02/08 20:01
Chapter: What's the World Coming to?

I really hate Gary. What a git! Thought it might be him doing the attacks, because Lily broke up with him and she's muggle born, but guess i watch too many cheap murder mysteries.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 03/02/08 19:45
Chapter: Cowboys, Mudbloods and NEWTs

Such a full chapter, lots of fun but that last bit was chilling! Snape's a git! And Raven and Sirius, what a predicament. I like James, bet Lily would miss him if he gave up on her.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 03/02/08 19:27
Chapter: Starting Over

This was so funny, you actually made patroling intersting. My favourite line though was about Lily doing what every Gryffindore does in a tight spot, lie. And it's all the more funny because it's so true.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 03/02/08 19:14
Chapter: The Last Year Starts

A fab first chapter. Timothy reminds me of Collin Creavy a bit. I loved McGonagall's 'or else' look, hope we see more of it. It's nice to see Lily struggling to hold on to her dislike of James.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 03/02/08 19:14
Chapter: The Last Year Starts

A fab first chapter. Timothy reminds me of Collin Creavy a bit. I loved McGonagall's 'or else' look, hope we see more of it. It's nice to see Lily struggling to hold on to her dislike of James.

Reviewer: KATIE_bemyescape
Date: 10/23/07 2:53
Chapter: I Dare You

Wow, I really do love this fic :]
I still need to catch up reading, but I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoy it so far !

Oh and that the bottom section is italicized.

Reviewer: GinnyTonks
Date: 10/16/07 19:33
Chapter: Sirius the Savior

nice chapter!
update soon!

Reviewer: JamesNLilyLover
Date: 09/17/07 21:51
Chapter: Sirius the Savior

I am singing the Update song: Update, update, update, Update, UPDATE!!!!!

Reviewer: Nymphea
Date: 09/11/07 21:04
Chapter: Tis The Season

I love the story so far...and random question (please answer) how do you know how many people have read your story?

Reviewer: luna_rox_my_sox
Date: 08/13/07 14:06
Chapter: Sirius the Savior

alrighty then... hows-a-bout u update

Reviewer: biggerstaff15
Date: 06/18/07 23:26
Chapter: Sirius the Savior

April 30, TWO THOUSAND AND SIX!!!!!!!! That was a LONG LONG time ago. You need to update, and now that I know you only have one exam left, and that is tomorrow. You have the whole summer to write....common LADY!! Don't make me come over to your house and force you to write, just like you did for me for my History, Philosophy and World Issues!!! Lol. Update!!!

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