Geez, not Timothey!
I like Hagrid too.
I like this chapter.
That was kinda sweet.
I'm glad that they are trying to be friends.
I like the story so far. It's good.
yay! they made up!! but i wonder what was in that letter? and will we ever find out who lily's secret "friend" is?
there's gonna be even more attacks?! oh dear...
i hope sirius gets out ok and that lily forgives james.
james stunned lily? lol but at least he got there in time.
i really like how you add humor even in difficult situations. its very up lifting
this chapter made me think so much about the real Harry Potter books, cuz it's written in such a JKRish way. i even kinda forgot that she didnt write this chapter!
raven left?!?!?! nnnnnnoooo!!! i was really starting to like her! and what will sirius and lily do?!
james and lily arent really acting any different now that they're "together", but other than that, i really like this story.
a snidget? cool! blizzard sounds so cute! i want one! right after i get a penguin, that is.
raven's parents are dead?! and natalie (she was a prefect, right?) her parents are missing?!
OOoOoOO! the shrieking shack? how cool and romantic!
no! please dont skip the date!! lol and i wonder who lily's secret admiror is?
the end was confusing cuz it was all italisized but lily and james finally kissed!!!!