Reviewer: BrokenPromise
Date: 03/15/12 21:51
Chapter: Detective Longbottom, Reporting For Duty

please do write more! that was really enjoyable!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 04/04/08 14:36
Chapter: Detective Longbottom, Reporting For Duty

This was so funny, my very favourite part was when he forgot his shoes. I love things written in the style of others, hope to read more of your stuff.

Reviewer: Peridot_Horntail
Date: 11/10/06 16:14
Chapter: Detective Longbottom, Reporting For Duty

Well now. I do like the ending. Seemed just a tad obvious, though, didnt it?

Reviewer: unfortunateorphan13
Date: 10/24/06 17:45
Chapter: Detective Longbottom, Reporting For Duty

Dang!!! What was great, it was one of those humor fics that were actually funny!!!!!!!!! I loved it !!! Please write more and keep up the hilarious fan fics!!!!
:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
With All Due Respect,
unfortunateorphan13
p.s. I'm not really an orphan!!

Reviewer: hermy_loves_ron
Date: 09/02/06 20:59
Chapter: Detective Longbottom, Reporting For Duty

How amazingly hilarious. How could you not love this?

Reviewer: Bucky Catt
Date: 07/30/06 18:10
Chapter: Detective Longbottom, Reporting For Duty

Soo funny! Please keep writing!

Reviewer: dracosgirl06
Date: 07/03/06 17:31
Chapter: Detective Longbottom, Reporting For Duty

well It was interesting, but i don't think that it belonged in humor so maybe you could try something funnier...........yeah....

Author's Response: Um, the entire story was sarcasm. It isn't funny unless you understand that I`m poking fun at cliches, and exaggerating things, and making things seem dumber than they really are to show how silly and stupid things can be.

Reviewer: heartsinger2
Date: 05/05/06 21:18
Chapter: Detective Longbottom, Reporting For Duty

Good. However Neville is English, so he wouldn't have a SS #

Author's Response: Oops. Good observation.

Reviewer: weasley_wanna_be
Date: 10/31/05 11:39
Chapter: Detective Longbottom, Reporting For Duty

oh my gosh! please keep writing! that story was hilarious! i loved how he kept pointing out random things like "the bad guys never get found" or "it's not just black and white, it's also gray". it's one of my favs! it made me laugh out loud! 10/10

Author's Response: Oh thank you! I just think pointing out the obvious is so hilarious sometimes. Maybe next school break I`ll come up with one where Hermione murders Ron because he forgot Valentine's day or something...

Reviewer: The Ceen Kommander
Date: 10/30/05 22:15
Chapter: Detective Longbottom, Reporting For Duty

This was great. You should write more stories like this, it seems you are good at it. Just a little longer and more surprises would be awesome.

Author's Response: This was my first story, so next one I hope to tackle a bit more character developement. Thanks for the compliment.

Reviewer: Gabriele Dumble
Date: 10/04/05 9:26
Chapter: Detective Longbottom, Reporting For Duty

Very interesting. Could have been longer with more input from other characters. I liked it.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Next story (once the idea pops in my head haha) I`ll have a little more interaction with other people.

Reviewer: anne black
Date: 10/01/05 12:11
Chapter: Detective Longbottom, Reporting For Duty

i loved this story it was so funny lol write more stories soon :-)

Reviewer: anne black
Date: 10/01/05 12:07
Chapter: Detective Longbottom, Reporting For Duty

i loved this story it was so funny lol write more stories soon :-)

Reviewer: anne black
Date: 10/01/05 12:07
Chapter: Detective Longbottom, Reporting For Duty

i loved this story it was so funny lol write more stories soon :-)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I must say, my story is much funnier if you read it when you're hyper! I`ll make another story soon once the idea pops in my head.

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