That is an amazing story (especially considering it's written from the point of view of some shoes!)!
A really interesting approach to a HP fan fic. I thought it was really good, I mould've said I enjoyed it, but I'm too sad for the shoes waiting under the floor board. keep writing
WOW....sad,simple,orginal. My tennies have lasted 7 years and are still useable. Soon they'll make it into their 8th........I wonder if they can think too?
that was interesting.. harrys life in a nutshell told by his old shoes. whats next for the tennis shoes?
Sad so sad
It's an original idea, but I don't think that it'll go anywhere to be honest. But it's not meant to, as if i'm not mistaken it's a sweet, simple yet sad one-shot. It shows how he grew up and no one really looked at him. I guess everyone has something like his tennis shoes, whether it's a teddy bear, or a pair of tracksuits. Mines my hair bunchie :)
Wow. Really good work.
I really liked this story. It's nice to read just a stand alone story, and it's sad, and sweet, the way they watched him grow up like parents would do.
yeah, i dont think this story can go anywhere, but its so original! who knows, maybe you could write about the next person who finds them:-) i really liked it- it was short, sweet, and melancholy... hey, maybe the shoes have some magic of their own. i dont know of very many pairs of shoes that have lasted 5 years...
Nice job! High scores for originality, even if I don't think the story can ... go anywhere :) Hope you keep writing.