Wow. This is terrific. I love the way Draco is portrayed, and it makes me love him even more. I never thought Pansy would be interesting to read about but you do a fantastic job of it. I will deffinitly keep reading your fanfic.
This is an amazing fiction so far, I have really enjoyed reading it! I want more!!!!! Keep up the good work!!
That's pretty interesting. hehe. I would've never thought.
Oh my gosh. What's gonna happen?!
I really, REALLY like this story. You do a great job in setting up the scenery.
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A few moments later...
"Good evening, Poppy," Severus Snape greeted in a silky voice. He was sitting comfortably on the squishy sofa.
"Severus," she replied, removing her hat and placing it on the table.
"May we begin?"
"By all means, you devil!" She started to advance, but he stopped her.
"Stand right there and no talking."
Poppy's curiosity was more than peaked.
Snape used his wand to disrobe Poppy...except for her underwear.
Hmmm...they are a little too large and not the right colour.
He uttered an incantation, and they transformed into white lace panties.
Ah, much better indeed, he thought, smirking and admiring her curvaceous figure adorned with his creation. She was in exceedingly good shape, and he felt a rush of excitement, thinking about the evening ahead.
He motioned Poppy to stand before him, between his legs. He rested his head on her soft, yet taut belly.
Yes, that's just right...
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ICK!!! that is totally not cool! lol! but it is a good story none the less! once again good job! i was TOTALLY shocked with the whole snape thing coming out of like NOWHERE! awesome!
Author's Response: Hi, Samantha. I'm familiar with the passage. *g* Well, I have a lot of Snape-centric friends, who see Snape as a sex-symbol. *laughs* However, there is a purpose for that scene, moving forward into the trilogy. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you thought it was good up until that point.- SIW
i love it i love it i love it!
you are truly a great writer.
i just finished reading the second chapter and i will soon be reading the third!
awesome job!
Author's Response: Hi, Samantha. I'm glad you like the story. Thanks for reading. - SIW
OOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your a good writer! When it came down to the sex-sene I was having a orgasam! {almost}
Author's Response: *giggle snort* I'm glad it peaked your interest. - SIW
i really, really loved that!
Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear that, yippiee! Thanks for reading. - SIW
I love this fic! It is so awesome, I have added it to my favourite stories.
Author's Response: Thanks, DandD. I appreciate it! - SIW
Hi! I'm a big Draco/Pansy fun. And I have a little question. If I try to translate your fanfictions may I put may webpage these? You are a really good D/P writer!:)
Thanks the answer.
Author's Response: Hi, Callie. No, I'd prefer not to have my work translated. I wouldn't be able to read it, to make sure it was correct, you see. IIf you'd like to email me, you can reach me at seaislewitch@aol.com. Thanks for reading and for the compliment, though. - SIW
Pansy's family is just as disfunctional as Draco's!
Author's Response: Really? Well, maybe that's why they are a good match. - SIW
i loved this chapter as always but the last part abou snape and pomfry was just gross!hehe white lace panties seem to be the fashion nowadays......
Author's Response: LOL! Yeah, the Snape/Pomfrey thing was put in there so my Snape-centric friends would read the story. *g* Thanks for reading. - SIW
i love this story please write more!
Author's Response: I will! - SIW
i LOVE it. this is the best slytheryn story i have read ever.
Author's Response: Thank you, Augusta. - SIW
Author's Response: Thank you, Augusta. - SIW
A really good twist at the end
Author's Response: Thanks, pooky. - SIW
Wow..
Author's Response: Hi, Pansy! *grins* -SIW
http://community.livejournal.com/romance_slythrn/25793.html
Author's Response: Hi, ans. Yes, that is a link to art that I commissioned for this story. Do you like it? - SIW
Good storytelling, but you didn't preserve Pansy's identity as JKR wrote her. I don't think her reaction with Draco's dark mark meshes cleanly with the Pansy in HP book, but I wouldn't put past the drama and suspense on your story :)
Author's Response: Hi, Little Bee. This Pansy is very much based on canon, not fanon Pansy. There's no evidence in the books that Pansy's family are Death Eaters, or that she believes Draco has taken the Dark Mark. I've written something about Pansy and Draco--quotes from the books with my interpretations. You can find it here: http://seaislewitch.livejournal.com/32543.html If you scroll to the bottom, you will see my take on the train scene in HPB (if that is what you are referring to). Thanks for reading. :) - SIW
very good. edge of your seat good. they make a good pair...
Author's Response: Thank you! - SIW
