really really good job...was it the dementors that were making him feel guilty..or was it just him realizing what was happening?
Author's Response: It was just him realizing what he had done and... well his conscious kicking in after 17 years of being unused. I'm glad you liked it. ~Undividable
When I said fankt or something to that effect in my previous review, I meant family... dont quite know how I managed that one
Author's Response: LOL. I don't know how you managed it either, but it's funny none-the-less.
The finished product is perfect. Of course, who am I kidding? What I first looked at was wonderful too. You are such a talented writer, I really enjoyed beta'ing for you and look forward to future projects. This story, while relatively short, is very powerful. I think it hits dead on to what JKR says about choices meaning everything, not so much who your fanukt is and how you were raised. It was wonderful! Cant wait for the prequel
That was extremely powerful. At certain times I fel as if I had made the choices and it was increily spooky. Good job, I'd really like to read the prequel. 9/10
Author's Response: Thank you. I am hoping to get the prolouge of the prequel up within the next month or so. I am currently rather busy with school work so I'm having trouble finding time to finish typing it up. I'm glad you liked the story. ~Undividable