Perfect, just perfect. i cannot imagine this chapter any other way!
Author's Response: Thank you! S.
i'm really enjoying the storie so far your a amazing writer if it keeps getting better at this pace you might be the new J.K.R.
Author's Response: Thank you forthe kind comp. I try! S.
story is great i've enjoyed it alot so far just keep it comin thats all i ask
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it. S.
I'm not a huge Snape supporter- whether he is in Voldemort's side or Dumbledore's is yet to be seen, but the fact remains that he is not a NICE person. I think you've done him some justice here and I thank you for making his death one I am happy with. I have only one complaint, in Britian, kids call their mothers 'mum' not 'mom'. Just something to consider. Again, thank you for the wonderful chapter and as always, I look forward to the next!
Author's Response: Thanks. S.
Ooooooohhh! More mysteries! HA! Ron and Hermione are so sweet. And see what happens, I get sucked into a muti-chapter fic and while I'm obsorbed over there I miss two new chapters over here! There's only one thing for a girl to do: go read the next one!
Author's Response: Thanks, Panda. S
I really never liked Snape, but I am sad to see him go. The way you characterized him in this story is intriging. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks, my wife nagged me about how nice I was to SS, but what the heck. S.
Interesting....and I think Snape should be hexed for his rude actions. It's a great story, I think, Keeping up with one detailed story you're trying to write is hard enough but reading 17 others on the side, it's madness! It's a well written chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm reading a couple dozen, too. Makes for many mental exercises, keeping them all straight. S.
Good!!! I wonder whatreallyhappened inthe final battle!!
Author's Response: Coming up next! S.
Yay! An update! Interesting... very interesting... can't wait to read more, keep up the good (if a little confusing) work.
Author's Response: Thanks! S.
I really appriciated the Lonely Hill. Harry & Ginny are great together. However, Liam &Tiernan are fast becoming my favorites of this fic.
Author's Response: Thank you. S.
I really appriciated the Lonely Hill. Harry & Ginny are great together. However, Liam &Tiernan are fast becoming my favorites of this fic.
Author's Response: I like them, too. Unfortunately I had to cut out most of their scenes because the story had become so long...sorry. S.
So many story lines packed into one chapter. I wonder what will happen to the vagrant of this story. (I'm guessing this is Percy)
Author's Response: Good guess! S.
Very interesting first chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. S.
You have written a goob story. My answer to your question. Memories from the deceased. But I belong to no house, just a wild savage running loose. :) Keep posting more chapters, we are reading out here. I just wish the mods would get my story out the Q, generally how long does that take?
Author's Response: Nope, bubbles reduce the density of the water to a point where it could not support a person...a bit of physics. S.
my bubble guess is that he wouldn't be able to breath in the bubbles
Author's Response: That was a good guess, but incorrect. The bubbles reduce the mean density of the water, thus reducing its ability to support floating objects. S.
i really liked the story, i can't wait for more :-)
Author's Response: Thanks. S.
Oh dear, I don't know, I hope you don't dock ten points from me. My hope would be that he knows better! :) Another compelling chapter. I love how you can mix the mystery with the little things that make the characters real- the letters between Harry and Ginny and dinner with the Lupins. Snape will succeed won't he, we're not that lucky to get rid of him that easily! Again, a fantastic chapter and as always, I look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R. Can't please everyone, so you may not like the way things work out with Snape and Percy. S.
No major comments, just wanted to say nice job again. I only noticed one typo- Shape instead of Snape about half-way through the chapter. Also, Moody's behavior seems a bit OOC to me. Is this intentional, i.e. is he affected by the phenomenon as well? Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, I took care of that mis-spell. It's amazing how many time you can read over something and stil misispell soemthign. As for Moody, no, I just wrote him that way! S.
I love your story. I read the whole thing in one sitting. Please update soon, I'm on pins and needles.
Author's Response: Thanks, will do! S.
I can't remember if you drafted this all pre-HBP or after but we know now that Bill and Fleur do the hook-up thing. If this is all pre-HPB drafting then no worries saying Ron is the first to marry. Otherwise you could change that line slightly. Another good chapter, well written and all, and had to be done but when will we get back to unraveling the Percy/Peter/Merlin mystery? More chapters as soon as you can please.
Author's Response: Yes, the point of departure is pre-HBP. Thanks for the r-n-r. S.
