Reviewer: Nibor7301
Date: 03/28/06 17:26
Chapter: Olga's Story

I've just finished the story and I have to congratulate you. It's really good! The plot is really interesting and gripping. I can't wait to find out what happens!

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: Thecaretaker
Date: 03/21/06 5:30
Chapter: Olga's Story

This is excellent , when is the next chapter coming out?

Author's Response: Pretty soon. S.

Reviewer: Vicus Riddle
Date: 03/20/06 23:06
Chapter: Olga's Story

I love this story. It has a very original plot... I just don't know what's going to happen and need to read the whole thing... Excellent chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! More soon. S.

Reviewer: Her My Own EE
Date: 03/20/06 17:36
Chapter: Olga's Story

This was another good chapter. Percy is awake or at least talking in his coma. I hope we find out more about Merlin & why he turned "bad." I have only one complaint. You left us with a cliff hanger in the last chapter with a dead body in Harry's office. Then there was no mention of the body or the backlash from it in this chapter. Please update soon & tell us what happened!

Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for the info about the chapter, I'll check to be sure it was ordered correctly. S.

Reviewer: Thecaretaker
Date: 03/17/06 4:29
Chapter: Fudge Returns

Ooops, i put that review in the wrong place, but it still stands. Excellent, whens the next installment?

Author's Response: np.

Reviewer: Thecaretaker
Date: 03/16/06 15:34
Chapter: Damage Assessment

You can't leave it there!!!!! I really enjoyed reading this, (whilst I was supposed to beworking) I couldnt stop. Keep it up

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: tkdteacher89
Date: 03/14/06 23:59
Chapter: Fudge Returns

great storie so far how about a update.

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 03/03/06 1:05
Chapter: Fudge Returns

Oh EWWWW! Ha ha ha! Kind of like an episode of CSI, or maybe the Godfather! Excellent chapter. I'm glad Harry and Ginny are hashing things out. The scene with everyone in Harry's room was particularly funny- especially Harry's line about everyone bringing jammies. I'm also becoming more and more interested in Merlin's story. You are doing a great job of balancing all of these story lines. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you, panda. S.

Reviewer: Hilary
Date: 03/02/06 10:27
Chapter: Fudge Returns

WOW! I would asume the dead person is ... maybe fudge. Great story

Author's Response: Yes, yes and yes! S.

Reviewer: Hilary
Date: 03/02/06 10:27
Chapter: Fudge Returns

WOW! I would asume the dead person is ... maybe fudge. Great story

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: Hilary
Date: 03/02/06 10:27
Chapter: Fudge Returns

WOW! I would asume the dead person is ... maybe fudge. Great story

Author's Response: yep! Thank you. S.

Reviewer: matk2
Date: 02/21/06 13:58
Chapter: Damage Assessment

This story is brilliant, I hope it's updated soon!

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: werepixie
Date: 02/16/06 7:03
Chapter: More Changes

I have really enjoyed this story. The "nice" Snape was rather odd. Though everyone else seems to be portrayed really well. I can't wait to see where this story is going next. There just seems to be so many more chapters coming to finish this. Please update soon.

Author's Response: More will be out soon, thanks for the r-n-r. S.

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 02/10/06 21:19
Chapter: More Changes

Oh my goodness! so much to comment on! I find it interesting that Snape and Percy continue to explore in their minds, and when Percy told Snape about the story in the runes, he showed up to Peter and Merlin- wherever they are. I love the little parts between Harry and Ginny- even if it got Harry a smacked face. The part with Grimmauld Place was rather interesting and funny, Remus is quite funny sometimes. As was Shacklebolt sneaking up on Harry and Ginny, then springing the Prime Minister on them. I found the part about Rebecca especially interesting- I'm a teacher who majored in Special Education- Ive worked with many kids with Downs. So I have to make my case, you shoulde use the word disabled rather than handicapped. Okay so I'm being politically correct here, but people are only handicapped when they are prevented from doing something, having a disability doesn't necessarily mean you are unable to do normal things. I should know, I'm legally blind myself. Okay, I'm stepping off my soapbox now. Anyway, the point is: I loved this chapter, thank you for all the little updates on all the storylines you have going here. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you, panda. I should know better than to let that handicapped/disabled term slip, thanks for pointing it out. Thank you again for the r&r. s>

Reviewer: fairyville
Date: 02/10/06 20:07
Chapter: More Changes

awsome chapter =D ive been reading this story for a while ... but im too lazy and havent been reviewing lol!

Author's Response: No problem, I do the same thing...thank you! S.

Reviewer: Blackfoot
Date: 02/10/06 17:18
Chapter: More Changes

"With Snape gone, you could probably get a free meal, too. LOL, that was great! Another great chapter, it would be nice if the chapter would appear quicker but if waiting is the price to pay for the quality of the story, I will wait.

Author's Response: Thank you! S.

Reviewer: clawscall
Date: 02/10/06 16:07
Chapter: More Changes

Still trying to take it all in but as always the story is good. I can see this leading to the main point of the story with interactions with muggles. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you! S.

Reviewer: theplatonist
Date: 02/08/06 13:59
Chapter: Damage Assessment

Wonderful story so far! I am new to the Fan Fiction scene, but I must admit this is my favorite story as of now. I agree with pandafan81 that your characterization of Severus Snape was very good. I also felt a bit better about Snape for keeping back Ginny, thus keeping safe the only person that could have healed Harry both in body and soul.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. S.

Reviewer: martyn weasley
Date: 02/06/06 8:41
Chapter: What Lay Hidden Beneath

wonderful...... what else is there to say really. love it, update soon. the way the characters are portrayed in the whole story is excellent im thouraghly enjoying this story and just hope the next few chapters will be just as good

Author's Response: Thank you, lots more to come. S.

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 02/04/06 16:12
Chapter: What Lay Hidden Beneath

Wow, what an incredible chapter. But unfortunately, Remus is right, it would have to take something that terrible- so many people giving their lives for one person- to enrage Harry enough to kill Voldemort by hand. I also think it very poinent of you to refer to Voldemort as Riddle, it takes the control out of his hands. And I like Snape just a little bit more for holding Ginny back during the battle, she would have given her life for Harry, but what kind of life would that have been for Harry? As always I compliment you on your writing and imagination and I eagerly await the next installment.

Author's Response: Thank you, Panda. S.

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