Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 06/01/06 8:59
Chapter: The Beginning of the End?

I have only recently discovered your story-it is VERY good! I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: werepixie
Date: 06/01/06 5:59
Chapter: The Beginning of the End?

Great chapter as usual. This story is so captivating I can't wait to see what happens in the upcoming chapters.

Wanting to find out who the corpse was. I'm thinking it was probably Madam Tumult though.

Also intrigued by what Harry and Snape will end up doing.

Author's Response: Yep. Thank you. S.

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 05/30/06 22:16
Chapter: The Beginning of the End?

Ahhhh... So the problem is finally clear. It's been obvious for quite a while, but I'm glad the characters are finally coming to the right conclusions: magic is in serious trouble! I hope that Harry and Snape can find a way to reverse the effect.

Author's Response: Yes and no about fixing the problem. S.

Reviewer: G_A_Potter
Date: 05/30/06 11:23
Chapter: Friday Night with Fred

I have to agree with panda, that was good. The date was absolutely the best. Sometimes turnabout is fair...

Though your writing is far better than fair.

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: G_A_Potter
Date: 05/30/06 11:15
Chapter: The Beginning of the End?

Up to snuff as usual. Spellbining. I can't wait to see what Severis and Harry do with those blank pages. And who the devil was that fellow with the note nailed to his head?
Wonderful sense of mystery, suspense, had, no still has me on the edge of my seat.
I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: Vicus Riddle
Date: 05/29/06 23:59
Chapter: The Beginning of the End?

I cant believe magic is dissapearing... IT'S SAD! Your story's amazing, keep up the great work! (and update soon please)

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: Tit
Date: 05/29/06 14:00
Chapter: The Beginning of the End?

Thank you for this story. I find it really original and interesting. Waiting for the rest !

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: Mira Miracle
Date: 05/29/06 13:12
Chapter: The Beginning of the End?

I have just "found" your story and I've been reading for hours. It's great! I really love it! You have a very realistic view onto the future lives of the main characters and you also portray them very well. The plot is thrilling, I'm so excited to read your next chapter. It makes me think about the different possibilities for all of this myself and I think this is one of the best effects a story can have. The only thing I don't really like is Olga and Ginny's sudden ability to do Occlumency. In my eyes she's never been quite the type for these things but everyone has a different view on things.
Altogether it's a wonderful story, please update soon! 10/10!

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: Hedwigs Delivery
Date: 05/27/06 8:15
Chapter: Madam Tumult's Story

very good,well though out, i hope it goes the way i belive it is

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: The Mandrake Root
Date: 05/24/06 3:02
Chapter: Into The Corners Of The Mind

I was actually beginning to like Snape (something I thought would never happen..) and then you take him away.
*pouts*

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 05/23/06 23:09
Chapter: From the Cave to the Heavens

Oh goodness! More cliffs! I'm becoming an adrenaline junkie from all of them! :)

I'm glad that Peter's back. But I'll be interested to see what's going to happen with Snape, and whether Percy will return too. I know, my reviews are always full of speculation. But that's a great compliment. Not many stories keep me in so much suspense! Excellent work!

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: tank21
Date: 05/21/06 12:31
Chapter: From the Cave to the Heavens

great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens.

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: PheonixStar
Date: 05/21/06 4:36
Chapter: From the Cave to the Heavens

Although I do love the series so far, and it certainly is inventive, strands of magic is an inspired use of the founders. I do have one complaint, however. In Rugby, there are 22 men in one team. This is including reserves mind. Depending on your code (League or Union) there is usualy 30 players on the pitch, 15 a side for Union, and 26 players, 13 a side for League. Rugby League is more akin to American Football, for you have 6 plays to score a try (similar to a touchdown, except the ball has to touch the ground inside the in goal area (endzone)). If you dont manage that, then on the 6th tackle the ball is handed to the opposition. Usually they kick during this play. Rugby Union is far removed from American Football, and I can't explain it all here. Rugby Union is more popular overall: League is only really played in the North of England, while Union is wide spread all over the United Kingdom. And yes, we don't wear protective gear other than gum shields thank you very much. I know I have rambled on about Rugby, and for that I apologise. Could you please correct your information about number of players charging into one another, because it does distract from an otherwise excellent chapter and story overall. In the future, if you want Ron to actually play in a Rugby match I'd me more than happy to act as a creative consultant, if you will. Especially if it is Union. FYI, I would see Ron, being as tall as he is, playing at second row.

Author's Response: Thank you for the info! S.

Reviewer: Vicus Riddle
Date: 05/20/06 23:02
Chapter: From the Cave to the Heavens

I don't won't magic to be over... what's going to happen to all of them?? oh well... please post the nest chapter soon!

Author's Response: It comes back... in a way. Thank you. S.

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 05/19/06 20:24
Chapter: Friday Night with Fred

Oh hurray! a new chapter! I'm concerned about Harry's migraine (man those stink)... it's interesting that he's not being effected by Muggle illnesses, but not all that surprising. I'm very curious about Hermione's translation. And I loved the date between Fred and Patty. Very sweet- and oh so comical that the normally charming prankster could be so nervous! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: G_A_Potter
Date: 05/19/06 12:37
Chapter: From the Cave to the Heavens

Where in the books do you see the use of the term Ms? This is an American term and the Brittish women that I know find it either foolish or insulting. Oh sigh. one of the problems with old age I guess.
Otherwise up to your usual level of excellence. Great story telling and your plot is outstanding. I'm greatly looking forward to what Snape has to say. You really need a better beta though...

Author's Response: I'm fixing the Ms. going forward, Thank you. S.

Reviewer: Vicus Riddle
Date: 05/18/06 23:42
Chapter: From the Cave to the Heavens

Whats wrong?? I cannot see the story!!!

Author's Response: hasn't been approved yet. S.

Reviewer: jk_charlie
Date: 05/15/06 6:33
Chapter: Damage Assessment

i wa glad to see that you are trying to post the next chapter. i check everyday to see if it's up yet. love the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: G_A_Potter
Date: 05/14/06 22:55
Chapter: Home Again

awww!!!! (yells screams beats hands and feet on floor in complete infantile tantrum) That can't be it, it just cant!
Oops, sorry!
I love the line:
Ginny was tired of everyone's preoccupation with sex...
I could'nt agree more.
In one or more of the summaries you mentioned that the sex scenes were toned down. Good. Frankly, we have way too much of it. Sometimes it's best to be left to the readers imaginations. Have you forgotten that Harry is Brittish? They (dare I say we?) say 'Mum' for the most part. Mom is more an American way of saying the same thing. See what I mean? Nothing substantial to complain about just nitpickey stuff.

WONDERFUL! Can't wait for the next chapter! HURRY UP WILLYA?
Oops, sorry. Patience is'nt my strong suit.
Hope to see your name on the users list soon!!

Godric

Author's Response: Thank you. Please check out my other story: Harry Potter and the Forgotten Solution. S.

Reviewer: G_A_Potter
Date: 05/14/06 22:44
Chapter: Opportunities

oo oo oo nice twist at the end! Loved it!

Godric

Author's Response: Thank you. Please check out my other story: Harry Potter and the Forgotten Solution. S.

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