Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp
Date: 07/28/06 21:23
Chapter: Into The Corners Of The Mind

hmmmm
i kinda of actually feel bad for the guy
i mean
he DIED!

Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp
Date: 07/28/06 21:00
Chapter: Snape's Mistakes

ummm....
cuz he thought the bubbles were bad???...

Reviewer: dashofmagic
Date: 07/28/06 8:44
Chapter: The World Turned Upside Down

Very choppy, but good none the less. You have developed a good story, and I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: justlikehermione429
Date: 07/25/06 18:30
Chapter: The World Turned Upside Down

Wow so i just read this entire thing in two days. Excellent job, while there were a few things that bothered me with the story, such as certain dialogue that seemed out of character, i am overwhelmingly impressed by ure commitiment to such a complex story, and even more so that u came up with one like this.
cant wait for the next ch to finally be validated, and then for the last 6. PLEASE LET THEM GET THEIR MAGIC BACK!
lol
great job waiting for more!

Reviewer: GK_Lovecraft
Date: 07/25/06 12:41
Chapter: Friday Night with Fred

I like particularly how awkward you made Fred in this chapter. It shows a part of him that you wouldn't expect out of him being the outgoing personality he is, because at his core, he's a lot more like Ron then he cares to admit.

Reviewer: GK_Lovecraft
Date: 07/25/06 9:38
Chapter: More Changes

This is a great story so far; perhaps something I would expect from Rowling herself. One problem that I can tell with this chapter is Harry's lying about where he was from. I would think he would think of the first Muggle home he had, which would have been in Surrey at 4 Privet Drive. He still could have stammered over where he went to school and still have the PM drag out that he was in fact the wizard named Harry Potter and have the chapter proceed as it did.

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 07/24/06 6:27
Chapter: The World Turned Upside Down

Please finish this. The story is just great!

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: Pierrou
Date: 07/23/06 10:23
Chapter: Damage Assessment

Wow, excellent, greater than the other you published, I daresay ! This idea of a shut down of every magic in the world is brilliant, I just hope they will find a way to fix it... Anyway, your story is well written, dense, and I liked the way you intertwined the different plots. Nice work, keep it up ! I can't wait for the next ( and hopefully not final ) chapter !

Author's Response: It will! Thank you. S.

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 07/22/06 2:15
Chapter: The World Turned Upside Down

AAAAAAAH! Cliffhangers! I'm terrilby sorry it's taken me so long to review this chapter! Summer is just WAY too busy.

anyway, I'm so sad to see the magic has finally disapated. Hmmmmm. Rufus still seems to have some... or does he?

I do have to complain about the PM's twins' names. Tom Thompson? That's just horrible!!! :) Poor kid!

Will the next chapter be the last after all? or will there be a few more? I remember a while ago you siad there would be 40. Either way, keep up the excellent work! And I hope to see more soon!

Author's Response: Thank you. There are 7 chapters remaining. S.

Reviewer: Gred_and_Forges_girl
Date: 07/21/06 16:40
Chapter: The World Turned Upside Down

Great! Love it! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: her my o ninny
Date: 07/18/06 14:11
Chapter: The World Turned Upside Down

When is the next chapter coming?

Reviewer: amy14
Date: 07/18/06 10:13
Chapter: The World Turned Upside Down

do you ever plan at updating?

Reviewer: thundra_god_of_chaos
Date: 07/15/06 21:01
Chapter: The World Turned Upside Down

update goddamnit

Reviewer: werepixie
Date: 07/12/06 0:09
Chapter: The World Turned Upside Down

Love this story and can't wait for the next 8 chapters. please update soon.

Reviewer: her my o ninny
Date: 07/08/06 17:09
Chapter: The World Turned Upside Down

This is bloody brilliant, all 39 chapters. I can't wait for the next one!!

Reviewer: nire135
Date: 07/05/06 15:29
Chapter: Into The Corners Of The Mind

you actually killed him off! I don't mind him dying when he's an evil git, but in this case...well i wasn't expecting it.

Reviewer: nire135
Date: 07/05/06 15:11
Chapter: What Was That About?

so this is why you never said anything about the final battle.

Reviewer: G_A_Potter
Date: 07/04/06 2:58
Chapter: The World Turned Upside Down

OH MY GOD! EIGHT MORE CHAPTERS????
Ahem. Sorry.

Reviewer: G_A_Potter
Date: 07/02/06 21:03
Chapter: The World Turned Upside Down

Beautifully done! Brought tears to my eyes. Especially the part about Ginny. Ahhh... But some magic survives...

However once again your beta has slipped up. I believe Harry wanted to avoid a crowd, not a crown. Just one example.

Wonderfully well done. Masterful story telling.

Reviewer: potterfan4ever
Date: 07/02/06 18:11
Chapter: The World Turned Upside Down

WOW!! What a chapter! I feel bad for everyone who was flooing at the moment all magic ceased. I hope to find out more on Scrimgeour and how he can still do magic. I also hope Snape pulls through with whatever he has up his sleeve. I can't wait to see what happens next!

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