Reviewer: snowy_owl_92
Date: 08/06/06 10:37
Chapter: Snape's Mistakes

harry was smart and didn't no wat the bubbles were doing there so he stayed clear of it. he wasn't attracted to pretty looking bubbles like me.

long live bill and charlie!!!

Author's Response: The bubbles reduce the density of the water. If he were to swim into it he would sink...rapidly. S.

Reviewer: Hilary
Date: 08/05/06 18:06
Chapter: Investigations

Who was Brian Again??

Author's Response: Brian Thompson is the English Prime Minister. S.

Reviewer: snowy_owl_92
Date: 08/05/06 12:21
Chapter: Some Hope

chaos!!! lots of action in this chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: snowy_owl_92
Date: 08/05/06 12:12
Chapter: A Night To Remember

three weasleys dead? that's soo sad. now fred and george are the eldest. three sons and one daughter? the weasley family has shrunk so much. *reviewer leaves room crying hysterically*

Author's Response: Sorry :-( S.

Reviewer: fanfictionfan
Date: 08/05/06 2:49
Chapter: Investigations

Awesome story!!! Your writing style isn't exactly like Jo's, but close enough that I know part of my brain will be confused when I read her 7th book. I'm positive that I'll keep comparing, or thinking that your story is actually part of her story. It's incredible! I think that's a really great thing, considering you're using her books as a start. I love your descriptions of the final battle, and how each character has (for the most part) stayed true to form. The only thing I have noticed that, so far as what Jo has written, is out of character is Hermione & Ron sleeping together before getting married, and Harry & Ginny fooling around before they're married. I understand the logic behind it, and how it fits the storyline, but it is the one thing I've found out of character for them. All of them. However, it's just part of it. Your book is incredible! I got hooked, and read the whole thing in two days. Now I can't wait for the next chapters. Please hurry!

Author's Response: Thank you. I was not trying to mimic JKR's style, more like find my own. S.

Reviewer: Lost_Wizard
Date: 08/04/06 11:03
Chapter: Investigations

Evil cliff hanger but a very good chapter, I saw Scrimgour as villian since JK interduced him in book six glad I am not alone in that. I am veary much looking forward to the coming chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you. S.

Reviewer: G_A_Potter
Date: 08/02/06 22:36
Chapter: Investigations

Chilling ending! OOOH, Scrimgour the ultimate villian. Sometimes the secret villian is the worst.

This is up to the usual standards. Too bad It'll never be published beyond this venue. Truely a shame.

Very much looking forward to the coming chapters

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 08/01/06 20:44
Chapter: Investigations

I love this story. Please hurry up!

Reviewer: madaboutharry
Date: 08/01/06 14:50
Chapter: Investigations

I can hardly wait to see what happens next. I'm really enjoying your story!

Reviewer: The Dementor
Date: 07/31/06 21:01
Chapter: Investigations

Oh, a cliff-hanger...nice touch. Are you writing this as you go?

Reviewer: sniffles for Snuffles
Date: 07/31/06 20:41
Chapter: Investigations

*explodes because of cliffhangers*
awesome chapter. can't wait for more!

Reviewer: LexiGirl
Date: 07/31/06 20:07
Chapter: Damage Assessment

Wow! I've always seen this story but I never readit...until today. Your writting seemed so realistic. I think you have described everything so perfectly especially the damage the war had brought. And on top of that, you're writting drew me in from the beginning and I could perfectly imagine all of the people you've described in this chapter (though I don't know them all). I am now very much looking forward to the rest of the story, meaning that your first chapter is so descriptive. Excellent story you are an AWESOME writter. 10/10

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 07/31/06 18:42
Chapter: Moving On

ha! well this i bound to be interesting! great chap. i really enjoyed the cremony and all the things you talked about with the trio and what not in the beggining especially that last part between the trio it was really cute. i really feel you have taken these characters into your own vision very well without altering them in any way you've really seemed to have stayed true to the books charachters which can be difficult. well done !! :)

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 07/31/06 12:55
Chapter: Investigations

Wow, that was a lot to take in. So Harry still has magic, that is wonderful! Who was with Brain and Mary at the end of the chapter? hmmm Very good chapter, a lot ot think about. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: justlikehermione429
Date: 07/31/06 12:38
Chapter: Investigations

Wonderful! great cliff hanger, and i cant wait to see what happens next...

Reviewer: BlueFalcon
Date: 07/30/06 23:33
Chapter: Investigations

When Are they going to validate this story? I've been waiting a while for it.

Reviewer: GredandFeorge4ever
Date: 07/30/06 22:08
Chapter: Damage Assessment

kinda confusing, but enjoyable none the less! it makes me want to keep i will ^_^

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 07/30/06 11:01
Chapter: Damage Assessment

ok this was one very sketchy chapter i've been trying to figure out who everyone was that last section was particularly a little confusing. can't wait to read more

Reviewer: Hermonie10011996
Date: 07/29/06 7:37
Chapter: Steak Knives and Shotguns


Reviewer: Wisher
Date: 07/29/06 2:43
Chapter: The World Turned Upside Down

WOW - I've been glued to my computer. Wat an incredible story with amazing complexity and detail. I think the best fan fiction I've read. Please keep it coming - quickly!!

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